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    Grading Session for Week 155

    [Be] -> [Oc] -> [Aq] -> [Be]

    The grading groups and their graders are currently as follows:

    [Ca] Castus - Inactive Members

    Castus List
    Bish
    Cheese
    Dil
    Freckles
    Griff
    Iron_Void
    Kaze
    Ketch
    Lambo
    Loko
    Nella
    Puppet
    Regulus (Oc)
    Resh
    Shrub
    Sparx
    Switch
    Tetsu
    Zerieth

    [Oc] Occultus - Will
    Bob
    Doc
    Finny
    Moon
    Thread
    Bunz

    [Be] Bellator - Will
    Berri
    Dys
    Kago
    Minj
    Rob
    Shade

    [Aq] Aquila - Will
    Hare
    Sev
    Thana
    Val
    Vin
    Grif
    Bats

    The Rotation for the month of August 2017 is:

    [Be] -> [Aq] -> [Oc] -> [Be]

    Please post your thread titles beginning with your grading group, then the week number, like follows:
    [Ca] Week 01: Title Should Be Here

    Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST on Tuesday

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    Over a Smoke (2976)

    Sorry this is late. I swear I remember writing grades earlier this week, but I don't know where they went. I just realized nothing was posted. Here's the cliffnotes version:

    Good stuff. It's unusual to see the more thoughtful, introspective side of Aelflead, even if it takes some medicinal assistance to draw it out. It fits nicely into Deni's existing character arcs as well, struggling with who he's becoming and whether he likes the changes. I also like that you both manage to stay in-character while taking those characters out of their comfort zones: Aelflead is still harsh and blunt, Deni is still trying to put on a charming front. It's good characterization that I'd like to see continue going forward.

    On a technical level, all I really want to point out is that you need to watch your capitalization on proper nouns like "the Jewels" (since that's referring to place names) and "the Conexus."

    Val - 147/149 + 100 Faction
    Minj - 145/149 + 100 Faction

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