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Ketch. You know, I know, Dys knows, we all know. Your writing is solid, you've polished it up. I see no reason to drag this on longer than necessary. Approved.

All right, as per usual your writing is pretty much top notch. There are a few 'ehs' here and there, though, and I'll try to be swift about it. What you're looking for with this sentence is to say he has little to no hobbies, but he does enjoy listening to jazz music (do we even have jazz in...

Amiss 1140 Words The sun overhead was perhaps not as bright or as warm as she would’ve liked it to be at this time of day, early in the morning, but it was good enough for now. It wasn’t nearly as cold anymore as it used to be only a few weeks ago and already Rosa could feel her body becoming...

Grade: 418 Rosalina Tacita "Rosa" Aetius Vigor: 7,494 Latens: 1494 Skills:School of Castus (Novice) School of Bellator (Novice) Discipline of Pugilis (Novice) Call of Exanimum (Skilled) Call of Daemonium (Novice)

Looks good to me, approved. Now we just have to wait for someone else to come in and approve you as well!

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Heyo, Rob here to help you with your application process, rejoice! \o/ But, in all seriousness, your application is very solid and there is very few thing worthy of note. Appearance, biography and persona are all fine, name and age and race is okay too. Your personal chapter is a great look...

Nemastifi 1020 Words It was early in the morning that she woke up, bags packed, ready to leave. Her eyes were lit up with a desire they hadn’t shown in quite some time, and for the first time in a few weeks, Rosa actually felt like she had something on her mind that she could work towards. Her...

This Feeling Will Never Die 2040 Words Her eyes darted across the room. Left to right, and right to left. They rested on her closet off to the right, a simple mahogany. It was about as tall as the room was high, but that didn’t really say much since her room was only slightly higher than she...

Grade: 1251 Rosalina Tacita "Rosa" Aetius Vigor: 7,076 Latens: 1076 Skills:School of Castus (Novice) School of Bellator (Novice) Discipline of Pugilis (Novice) Call of Exanimum (Skilled) Call of Daemonium (Novice)

In Limbo 1015 Words Two sets of hands wrapped themselves around her arms, two around her legs and a single pair of hands wrapped themselves around her neck as she gasped for air. She was drowning, drowning in a sea of pain and sorrow, the bone-white hands clamping tighter and tighter around her...

Another Day 1090 Words Unfortunately for Caesar, it wasn’t until later that evening that the two of them finally managed to find their way back to the barracks. While he’d been anxious to get back and get to the bottom of the strange incantation Echo had spoken and the whole ordeal with the...

Resident No Longer 1255 Words Despite the fact that the two of them had been strolling through the city of Elata for quite a few hours now, it hardly felt like anything more than just a single hour. While she wasn’t getting tired of touring the city per se, there was this nagging feeling in...

All righty. Just as an heads up. I won't be, unfortunately, playing then since these are godawful times for me.

I would be super down for this, as long as you guys are fine with explaining the game, set and rules to me since I've never actually done D&D before.

Heyo. Approved.

In the Haven of Dread 2705 Words Takes place after: Blast it! “Who are you calling your ‘mother’, girly?” the burliest of the burly men responded, not with an overly condescending tone but one of piqued interest. Before Echo could so much as respond, her mother - or the man she used...

Heyo, time for round two! Glad to see you weren't scared away by me being a bit harsh in my earlier review. I'll try to keep it a bit more user-friendly this time around, so don't worry too much about what this asshole has to say to you and know that we're here to have fun! So, the edits...

Hey, Rob here. A couple of things before I go into more depth: Your character's persona is very barren, and does not give us anything to go off on apart from the fact that he's apparently 'carefree'. I'd like you to put a bit more effort into it. Now, while the above seems a bit...

Blast it! 1090 Words “Seems like someone stole your thunder, eh girly?” a gruff, somewhat condescending voice called out to Echo who, for the better half of her dinner had buried her head in her hands when word came out that some random organization had murdered the magister, Eximium. It was...