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"FOR ALL MY WORTH, "I WAS CAST OUT JUST AS EASILY. "WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU WON'T BE?"

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Slightly startled at his casual-way of calling her surname - something she really should’ve expected by now - she shook her head and cursed at herself for ever telling him that before joining the boy and his... partner...? Glancing over at the table where the frostwyrm was being presented...

“It is not often I hear the sound of my people here in Terminus,” Sigrid responded in regards to Cicely, standing just off to the side of where the girl was seated. “Skål,” she repeated with a nod of the head as she drowned her entire pint in one glug. Slamming her glass back on the...

Just this hurr: http://www.postterminus.com/showthread.php?474-Open-Week-Gavelock-s-Hunt-Lake-Cerulean So... I'm a piece of shit who didn't save his comments and whatnot. Full points to freckles.

Ello, ello, it's your friendly just-woke-up Rob. I'll be taking a gander at your application after I've done some work around the house. Looks good, actually. So off you go to approved land. One thing I do want to point out, though, and this is as much for you as it is for Dys and anyone else...

You're forgetting the most crucial part in your arguments: points. It took me well over four, five years to get Nana to 100k reiatsu. That's equivalent to two (2) skills brought to mastery. You're looking at this from the wrong perspective. You're limiting yourself to what you see, instead of...

To add to Will: use your imagination. Even if there aren't hard capped branches, and even if there won't be added anything to the game in terms of other skills, you can seriously just create your own character's skill tree. Plus, we're not a video game.

Something, something, gimee links. FrakleZ - 275 You continue to amuse me robot. Good stuff, carry on. Bit too tired for commentary, have fun with points. My stuff: http://www.postterminus.com/showthread.php?541-Ca-Week-015-Seven-Nights

Seven Nights 1005 Words Her eyes fluttered in the dark as a single ray of light shone through a little crevice in the wall. Steady breathing echoed softly through what was undoubtedly a small room, and the air felt soft to the lungs of what should’ve been her death. The wounds, both shallow...

Heyo, Rob here again. It definitely looks better now. It's still a bit rough around the edges, but I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt. Approved

Earth deafening, bone shattering and the whole world turning to white right in front of her were all that coursed through the woman’s existence as the frost wyrm made its plightful descent. Deni had done exactly as she had asked of him, but in that single moment, when the screeching, almost...

If you have any questions, though, do not hesitate to either PM me, Dys or Finny. That's what we're here for.

Alrighty, round two: Sample chapter, first sentence we find the following: It was a gray overcast sky that looked down on the young travel worn man as he walked through the wilderness, following a road that would hopefully lead him back to a life he once had. See the bold area? Yeh, this is...

Heyo, Rob here. Time to get this show on the road: Persona Looks good, actually. Physical Stature It's master's displeasure, not masters displeasure. Likewise, it's dark tanned, not dark tan. Other than that, looks good. Biography While not bad, it really doesn't leave much to...

“No,” she said resolutely, Veiðimaðr tightly held in her sword arm as she glowered at the beast.This was not a beast she wanted to fight, this was not a beast she wanted to match in vigour or strength, but she knew that this was a fight they could not shy away from. “But that does not mean we...

Rambo will be taking over this week's grading from me.

Frigid 1000 Words It was oddly soothing, listening to her own breathing steadying itself towards an early grave. The attack had caught her off-guard, a sin in and of itself, but worse still was the simple fact that if by some stroke of luck she managed to get through this disgrace she would...

Her sword, Veiðimaðr, had been with her for well over a decade and a half now - she’d received it from her father when she was but a wee lass - but something told her that it would not see the end of this hunt. She had other, lesser weapons to fight with, so it wasn’t like she’d be without any...

Grades due sometime later this deadline. Frigdaddles - 215/221 So, I've got some problems with your opening paragraph in this week's writing because of how you've set it up. The idea here is that the reader obviously reads this piece in conjunction with last week's writing (and you did mention...