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Nothing Karl hasn't already mentioned. Have fun: approved.

I'm with Finny: approved.

Holla Holla Get Dolla. Name: Beep, boop, beep, boop. I am Italian robot, hear me roar. Age: Beep, boop, beep, boop. I am old robot, hear me roar. Race: Beep, boop, beep, boop. I am robot, hear me roar. Persona: Small slip up here. Anyway should be any way in this case, because she...

So, I like that Finny is being so nice to you Karl, but I'm afraid I'm not going to just overlook the rest of your application and move on right to the sample chapter. Name: It's a name, all right. Race: Crossbreed, ho! Age: It's a number, and odd one at that! Persona: So, two things: However...

Heyo! Name: It's a name! Race: Filfy purebred. Age: If only Tits didn't create a 3 year old, you would've had the youngest character in the RP. Appearance: Works for me Persona: So, here is where I'm kind of on the fence with your writing. Iggy seems to be a whole lot of different...

Hey Will, I'll just be quick here and say that I'll follow Finny's lead here: approved. I don't really see the need for nitpicking here, so off you go!

Heya, thanks for the review. I guess that's what you get for not proof checking your writing, because these were not mistakes I should've, or normally would've made. (Meaning you didn't have to go and explain it to me in such minute details, but what can you do, eh?)

This changes nothing!

Academy Days V 1015 Words Takes places directly after: Academy Days IV As steel met steel in the middle of the dark, round room the son of Akiyama Katsu felt firsthand what kind of weight the words of the Yoshishige heir really held. When she had spoken her words, announcing that he would...

Hi. Name: It fits thematically, which is nice! Age: Welcome to the club of 23. Race: It's a race alright. Vigour: Adds up. Latens: Heyo. Persona: I feel like I'm reading a carbon copy of Alexia here and, while I'm not going to berate you for that, I just want to ask you if you don't...

Dat onepunch-man doe. Definitely having a blast with you guys' applications.

What is this heresy?

Formatting doesn't really work that well yet when applying, but I'll overlook it because I'm a nice guy like that. Name: Him being called Duellum is so weird to me, but no complains about the name as a whole. It follows the roman naming conventions, and that's fine. Age: I like how so far...

Zack please.

Rob here for another round of applications, whoo! So,let's get going. Name: Yup, it's a name all right. Age: It's an age! Race: Laicar it is. Vigor: Yup. Latens: All good. Persona: You have a thing for less than holier characters don't you, Arun? I like it, though I will have to come back to...

Heyo. Just so it feels a bit more like an application process... Name: It's a name, it fits, it works. Yay! Age:Works for me. Race: Spurii unite! Vigor: I thought applicants from HD started with 1500? Or are you going to give 250 vigour to your secondary character? Either way, I see no...

Name: Rosalina Tacita "Rosa" Aetius Age: 23 Race: Spurii: Laicar, Enlil Racial Trait: Feather Fall (Enlil) Vigor: 1500 Latens: 0 Persona: Shy, quiet and untrusting of others, Rosalina’s childhood has made her wary of the outside world and the people that inhabit it. While at one point she...

Academy Days IV 1320 Words Takes place after: Academy Days II Akiyama Katsu was certainly not a man to be sitting still it seemed - something Amaterasu herself had only been vaguely aware of during her time together with the old geezer - as the ancient instructor stepped through another...

Academy Days III 1150 Words Takes place after: Academy Days II “Akiyama-sama,” Amaterasu called out to the man walking in front of her. Despite his age, he seemed to have a serious stride in his step. Nothing betrayed that he was an old man... besides his appearance. With a slightly hunched...

Academy Days II 1245 Words Takes place after: Academy Days I As far as first impressions went for the young heiress, there wasn’t a whole lot that seemed to put her off on her first day of school. Of course, there were the more than occasional trip and whiff and fall from less favoured...