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So, as someone who knew absolutely nothing about these characters beforehand, I really enjoy this piece! I got a very strong sense of who these two characters are, and how they relate to each other. I especially appreciate the portrayal of Bolus as someone who needs guidance and direction but still has a growing sense of curiosity and free will, and how Vaferis reacts to that. They make a wonderful duo, and I can't wait to see how this expedition plays out!
 

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