Reviewed [Aq] Week 272: Lachtara I - Feedback

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Very nice, and not quite what I was expecting. A world of temptations drawn from everything Deni gets tempted by, and a demoness trying, quite successfully, to win some of his trust. It's really fitting for Deni's character and a great follow-up on the artifact Deni received. I also appreciate the world-building element of the demons vying for their own measure of power within their realm.
 

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