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I really enjoyed this chapter. It nails down that mystical feeling of normal person being in another plane. The world is sort of mysterious while still being familiar, and there's a more powerful thing there interacting with Ignis. The feel and atmosphere of the chapter is really well done.

A great part was just seeing how much Ignis and Amicus mean to each other. Bringing a normal person into (I'm assuming) their realm, really trustworthy.
 

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