The shikai release, so majestic, so beautiful, so- screw it. Hey Minja here looking for critiquing. Give helpful insight if you have time, but please just give suggestions to make it better, try not to throw it in my face too badly, cuz I know it needs work; not to mention that I still don't have any idea what to do for my third slot.
Name:Getsumei (Moonlight)
Release Command: Kokoro wa muda ni naru yōna hidoi monodesu. (A mind is such a terrible thing to waste).
Manifestation: A female looking in about her to her early thirties. She has long violet colored hair, bangs framing her face, and piercing ghostly white eyes . She has a fair complexion vanilla, making her to look of Latina descent. The clothes she wears change based on her moods but usually wears a long black dress, hemmed in purple, that trails along behind her. It is of Victorian styling, and cuts off at her shoulders with blood red ruffles, and continues down her arms as gloves. She resides in a silent void with a watery reflective surface for a floor, floating white ghost fire, and and full moon.
Release Form: Getsumei's ebony blade changes and elongates into a dark, and cruelly curved scythe, with an short diamond axe blade juts out on the other side of the scythe. The long handle riddled with cracks, and the kanji symbol for nightmare queen inscribed over and over again in the carved scarlet handle. At the end of it there is a small dagger like blade, that constantly glows with a ghostly white and green flame.
The metal retains the shadowy black color, and Hikaru himself dons a body length black cape and hood, edged with faded silver around the hem and sleeves. His entire face becomes shrouded in a deep shadow which is unenforceable by the eye, except those who he's become close too.
Ability: Nightmare
Hikaru is able to enter into the mind of his opponent, and sort through their thoughts. He creates illusions based on their fears, shortcomings, and pain inside their minds. For 5% of his reiatsu he is able to summon the most prominent or recent one into the physical world, causing shock and fear their hearts, as well as pain since whatever fear he summons takes on a physical form that can hurt the victim physically (However if this fear is not something that can physically hurt them, and is emotional then it represents itself as flames and burns). When the ability succeeds he can add 20 points to his fear pool
Breakdown: It requires 5% of Hikaru's reiatsu to enter the mind of his opponent to begin, calling said fear of the opponent into a physical form depends on a successful roll. The fear if manifested stays for three turns, its actions are controlled by Hikaru's mind, and after that time period it disperses in hungry green flames; however it's stay can be prolonged through a high, and constant flow of reiatsu (that means 30rei for the first extension, 40 for a second extension, 50 for the third etc, [every extension is 2 extra turns]). Each time this ability succeeds Hikaru gains 20pts to his 'fear' pool, which has a capacity equal to half his reiatsu, which represents itself as green wisps of smokeless flames in the air.
Ability: Lucid Dreaming
Hikaru takes Earth law mastery one step further, and gains the ability to take massive control over his environment by creating constructs out of random objects or illusions; or simply change the shape (length, size, properties of anything in his possession, limited to his Zanpakutou and body. Stretches of this type are limited to 50 meters total for length and, 30 for width and volume). These objects can be any shape or size and require 60 reiatsu per turn to maintain and control. If he runs out of rei or stops using the ability, then his constructs implode and burst into fireworks. These constructs move according to his will, and are solid objects.
Breakdown: 60 reiatsu per turn to activate, and 30 per turn to maintain. When the ability ends or Hikaru willingly destroys a construct or illusion it explodes in a flash of white light, sparks, and green flames(Yes these flames cause damage). The illusions are not physical and burst into flames when destroyed.
Name:Getsumei (Moonlight)
Release Command: Kokoro wa muda ni naru yōna hidoi monodesu. (A mind is such a terrible thing to waste).
Manifestation: A female looking in about her to her early thirties. She has long violet colored hair, bangs framing her face, and piercing ghostly white eyes . She has a fair complexion vanilla, making her to look of Latina descent. The clothes she wears change based on her moods but usually wears a long black dress, hemmed in purple, that trails along behind her. It is of Victorian styling, and cuts off at her shoulders with blood red ruffles, and continues down her arms as gloves. She resides in a silent void with a watery reflective surface for a floor, floating white ghost fire, and and full moon.
Release Form: Getsumei's ebony blade changes and elongates into a dark, and cruelly curved scythe, with an short diamond axe blade juts out on the other side of the scythe. The long handle riddled with cracks, and the kanji symbol for nightmare queen inscribed over and over again in the carved scarlet handle. At the end of it there is a small dagger like blade, that constantly glows with a ghostly white and green flame.
The metal retains the shadowy black color, and Hikaru himself dons a body length black cape and hood, edged with faded silver around the hem and sleeves. His entire face becomes shrouded in a deep shadow which is unenforceable by the eye, except those who he's become close too.
Ability: Nightmare
Hikaru is able to enter into the mind of his opponent, and sort through their thoughts. He creates illusions based on their fears, shortcomings, and pain inside their minds. For 5% of his reiatsu he is able to summon the most prominent or recent one into the physical world, causing shock and fear their hearts, as well as pain since whatever fear he summons takes on a physical form that can hurt the victim physically (However if this fear is not something that can physically hurt them, and is emotional then it represents itself as flames and burns). When the ability succeeds he can add 20 points to his fear pool
Breakdown: It requires 5% of Hikaru's reiatsu to enter the mind of his opponent to begin, calling said fear of the opponent into a physical form depends on a successful roll. The fear if manifested stays for three turns, its actions are controlled by Hikaru's mind, and after that time period it disperses in hungry green flames; however it's stay can be prolonged through a high, and constant flow of reiatsu (that means 30rei for the first extension, 40 for a second extension, 50 for the third etc, [every extension is 2 extra turns]). Each time this ability succeeds Hikaru gains 20pts to his 'fear' pool, which has a capacity equal to half his reiatsu, which represents itself as green wisps of smokeless flames in the air.
Ability: Lucid Dreaming
Hikaru takes Earth law mastery one step further, and gains the ability to take massive control over his environment by creating constructs out of random objects or illusions; or simply change the shape (length, size, properties of anything in his possession, limited to his Zanpakutou and body. Stretches of this type are limited to 50 meters total for length and, 30 for width and volume). These objects can be any shape or size and require 60 reiatsu per turn to maintain and control. If he runs out of rei or stops using the ability, then his constructs implode and burst into fireworks. These constructs move according to his will, and are solid objects.
Breakdown: 60 reiatsu per turn to activate, and 30 per turn to maintain. When the ability ends or Hikaru willingly destroys a construct or illusion it explodes in a flash of white light, sparks, and green flames(Yes these flames cause damage). The illusions are not physical and burst into flames when destroyed.