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I missed this and read these out of order, so a lot of the same comments from the following chapter apply. One thing I wanted to say, though, is that Dom's history is a nice touch, and it really informs a lot of his motivation to help Micali despite the nature of her profession. It also helps justify why she's as open with Dom as she is, despite her secretive tendencies. You said a lot without saying a lot, and that's always a good thing.
 

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