Hey Doje, got you a Review.
Not knowing much about Micali it was kind of nice to see her outside of a combat scenario. It was extra nice to see her express a more human side to her, from the little I'd read from you involving PMs. Seeing this side was intriguing, even for what would normally be a slow chapter.
Your use of descriptions and locales is good, I kept getting swept up into it and could almost smell the coffee and taste the pastries as you described the little cafe.
Seeing some small hints of Micali's past makes me want to go back and read more, to find out who these people are and why she's hunting them down, and seeing her conflicting desires was an entertaining read.
Having never seen Rosa I thought she was a good counterpoint to life from Micali, the soft aristocrat and the gruff mercenary/assassin is a good way to generally cause small amounts of friction in characters but you balanced both of them extremely well so they didn't truly end up in a fight. It just goes to show how much each of them cares for the other since you could have just as easily had them at odds with each other and run into some sort of cat-fight.
The beginning was a bit slow, but once you got that ball rolling the story almost flew by. I commend you on that, I was worried about reading it because of the start but all of these things together really sucked me in.
The good thing was, if there were any slipups or grammatical errors they're hard to notice within the flow of the story, since it draws the reader into it. I know I certainly didn't notice any.
10 out of 10, would continue reading about Micali and Rosa.