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This was a cute chapter! Probably makes more sense in the grander scheme of knowing Keydis and her related NPCs but even this gave some good insight into Havital's personality. I appreciate that it fits as another step in the post-trigon storylines, which I've really really loved reading from everyone.

Also, this dirty old bird looking for some chemistry with Chiffon is a fun pop of colour in an otherwise pretty calm and relaxed chapter that seemed to more serve as a followup for Keydis. Was a fun read!
 

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