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I did fix a few of the errors but there is still quit a few left. -Antares- thank you with all for the help pointing out the errors in my sample chapter it helped alot.

i shell get to work on all the errors asap. it will take a little while but i shell get it done.

i will get right on those mistakes now. i kind knew i would have to work on the bio a bit more but while writing the sample chapter and everthing else first i kind speed through it. I just read over my sample chapter and i will fix the few errors i saw.

[4th] week 67, Ikatsui, Doki Contact Info: grimblueman Name: Ikatsui, Doki Age: actual age 250, looks 25 Persona: Doki is a kind hearted man who wishes to help people more then hurt them. He can sometimes be found napping on the roof of his division headquarters with his medium sized...

I wasn't even think about that one untell you brough it up swaswj.

i was thinking about that shinpou after i posted the question. The reson why i asked this stuff is when i post my app. my guy just ditched work in the 4th divison to enjoy the day but found out he left something in his room so now he needs to sneak in.

Could you see very dim heat signatures on the other side of walls in your divison HQ or are they to thick and only show up as black? Do shinigami give off heat?

ok the new chapter is up i hpe you like it it took me a long time to think up this one so enjoy.

the npc's i am going to or might make if grim is added where going to be 1 shinigami, 2 AH, 1 Q, and 1 V. the shinigami won't be very strong so there will not be any bankai users.

Ok i just finished hand writing ver 3 of my sample chapter and i will hopefully post it monday. There is no talking hollow or a small army of hollows. There are two and grim takes quit a bit of damage from them.

I have a few ?'s about npc's. How many can one person have? If i make them ah, q, or v do i have to do anything special? And can they be slight stronger the the guy i want to make so they give him a hard time?

I hate to give up on something i really want to do so i won't. I will write a hole new chapter then post it.

I give up on this just don't worry about grim ok i'm done with this fourm for good bye. But i ask one question dose anyone belive in the human spirt on this thing or not becase anyone can do anything they try at.

I'm sorry for the trouble. I reworked my story and got rid of the one smart hollow and put in 4 dumb ones. I put one of my own npc's at the end if its ok. I will put the new ver. Up soon.

sorry for all the errors. i will get to work on fixing all of the problems right away. how do you edit the title so i can fix it becaus i though you started at week 0 and went up but i wrong and look like a idiot.