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Leon Takeda evals. Leon Takeda - 8th Seat, 8th Division Grade - 0 Reiatsu: 500 (+100) HeiKen - ~550~ Zanjutsu: 200 (+100) Hakuda: 0 Hohou: 100 Kidou: 1000 (+500) Hadou #28, Toutenya Hadou #32, Heki Bakudou #13, Earthen Maw Bakudou #20, Chains of Misery, Chains of Torment...

Day 4 continued Chapter 4 829 words (Total 2000 Ch 3 and Ch 4) The sky was grey. To be more precise, it was consisted of waves of light and darkness that entwined and moved like aurora borealis. Their movements were elegant and unpredictable. This was the sky of the Hueco Mundo. This...

Chapter 3 Wit's end (word count 1200) The boy breathed heavily as he watched Kaizu's figure disappeared into the distance. He sits down and tries to shake off the excitement and enter a state of meditation. Ever since he was young, he learned to meditate in order to recover lost strength...

Name: Leon Takeda Age: Born 1986(or an equivalent time where information technology is fairly advance), 16 at death. Persona: Within the Shinigami Leon is not someone who catches the eye. Neither his personality nor his appearance makes a strong impression. Somewhat reserved at first, Leon...

Chapter 2 [New Orders] Word count 1008 Chapter 2 [New Orders] Word count 1008 Leon placed his hands under the running water; the cool flow seemed to ease the burning sensation on his hands. He examined his palm and fingers carefully noting nothing than some minor redness. "I...

Final draft(Leon Takeda) Okay, I have went back and finally finished re-editing tenses and adding some extra information in addition to changes in response polka & grand's comments. I am gonna make this application final. http://www.bleachforums.com/showthread.php?t=16864

Problems with age explained: Confusion about Division fixed: More Details on Personality: Other errors fixed in the sample chapter including tenses inconsistencies and that comma at the end:)

Ok I got somethings to change. Do I post the modifed app under a new thread or a reply to this one?

It would be nice if I could receive some input on how to improve this app, unless you all think it's beyond hope. In that case at least let me know :)

Name: Leon Takeda Age: Born 1986(or an equivalent time where information technology is fairly advance), 16 at death. Persona: Within the Shinigami Leon is not someone who catches the eye. Neither his personality nor his appearance makes a strong impression. Somewhat reserved at first...