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Fall from Glory 1100 words In the dead of night on the seventh shifting of the moons, she stumbled upon a lakebed. It wasn’t large in any way shape or form, but many meandering rivers conjoined at this one body of water as if to signify the beginning of her quest. Her trusty sverð, Veiðimaðr...

Looks good to me, approved.

As you walk around one of the various market places of Terminus, you stumble upon a curious little piece of paper knifed onto one of the many boards of request:

That she did. With a quick unsheathing of her blade, she hit the velen man straight between his eyes with the hilt of her sword. Though she was careful not to apply too much force to the hit, there was still a streak of blood that flowed from the newly created wound. “Don’t push your luck...

If her fair-skinned complexion was capable of showing her being flustered, it didn’t show. Whatever warm feelings she got from the ‘my dear’ part were quickly dismissed and turned into an innate sense of disgust. Did this beast from some water tribe just address her as ‘my dear’? Preposterous...

There was something about the embodiment of water stretching far and wide in front of her that made her feel at ease, at home. She wasn’t one of those aquatic dwellers, or even one of the airborne ones. She was a laicar, loud and proud, but still the water called to her. The hunt for her honour...

Soooooooooooooooooooooooo I kinda lost track of time a bit. Grades'll be a bit short this week as a result. Frukls - 286 So, you had some paragraph spacing issues in this chapter as every new line didn't have one but two blank lines in between like so. It made for some awkward...

Moral Objection 1905 Words “I’ll be... what now?” Rosa asked with a perplexed look on her face. “Preserving the dead? I’m not a fucking gravekeeper or am I? How the fuck do you want me to preserve the dead?” “Now now,” the Crow responded with a tinge of sarcasm in his voice. “You’ve...

All right, fair enough. I've actually been working on a codex entry for Valmoor (Vahlmore in their ancient tongue) but haven't been satisfied with it too much yet to feel safe with posting it here. I'll try to whip something up for review in a bit, though, even if it isn't completely finished...

So, to kind of play in on the thing Finny wrote' up for the magic schools, I've been doing some thinking on rituals for necromancy (not sure if this should be thusly placed here or submitted in the submission area, but alas). One of the things I'm currently writing about in my personal plot...

Grade: 364 Rosalina Tacita "Rosa" Aetius Vigor: 3,584 Latens: 1084 Skills:School of Castus (Novice) School of Bellator (Novice) Discipline of Pugilis (Novice) Call of Exanimum (Adept) Call of Daemonium (Novice)

Freckle Mc. Deckle - 500 Alrighty, with your chapter, right off the bat you kind of trip and fall into a bit of a dialogue trap: Ask yourself if 'the voice of the Major resonated stentorian' is a way of speaking. Yes, it is, but it still requires a different kind of punctuation because of the...

This one doesn't have that oomph as the on you showed, Will, but meh: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTckb-my1-Y&list=LLPtuYbCJoGoCjV9HMO6xtSQ&index=27 Also, here's another one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B9iiMOr7RyE

Preserving the Eerily Deceased 1700 Words Okay... so, next day’s training wasn’t exactly what she’d expected from it. As per usual when she went out to train with the Crow, she hadn’t bothered prettying herself up because she knew she would probably end up worse for it. As such, she was...

Rosalina Tacita "Rosa" Aetius Vigor: 3,220 Latens: 970 Skills:School of Castus (Novice) School of Occultus (Novice) Discipline of Pugilis (Novice) Calling of Exanimum (Adept)

Can we call him Pi, pretty please?

Seems like the move to PT was as good as any point to call it quits, huh? Can't say I blame you, or that it's unexpected - you not being all that active on the boards was kind of reason enough to think you were gone 'for good', so to say. I'll miss you, like I miss all the other writers I've...

Ola, grades inbound. Freckles - 901 Alright, so here's the deal: your writing is solid. There is one thing you do constantly, though, and that's a small error in your dialogue punctuation. Now, doesn't seem to be anything at fault right? Well, you're not wrong. The thing is though the word...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZp3Mtn-YsI There you go. Edit: the only out-of-place part I can find in this song is the very ending.

If Looks Could Kill 1160 Words It was while they were walking towards the dining room, the place where Elara had undoubtedly already made herself at home at, that Rosa felt as if the Crow was trying to ask something. Now, there was many a time when the young enlil-laicar felt that when...