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The bark of Deni’s rifle was echoed by another, this one further away, but no less accurate as it struck towards the gargoyle. From nearly one hundred meters away, Ioannes Furvus lowered his newly fashioned bolt-action rifle. Without really thinking, the young man slapped the bolt up and back...

Kincaid watched as several demons lifted their heads towards the sky. It was an animalistic movement, accompanied by a tilting of the head or upraised nose. It told the thief that the demons had yet to notice him. Good. “Show time,” he muttered to himself, as he lifted one leg up set it on the...

Just to the south of the Ruby Jewel, as the ensnaring chaos began to spread in other parts of Terminus, Kincaid looked up from the book in his hands and leaned closer to the window of his bed. In the distance, what should have been the lights of festivities were now at odds with the familiar...

Grade: 131 Ioannes Furvus Vigor: 15,000 Latens: 0 Skills: Art of Terriculcum (Skilled) Call of Mansuetis (Adept) Way of Perspicax (Adept) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Adept) Way of Sclopeto (Skilled) [- Items -] Mundane Ranged Weapon (Rifle) [- Feats -] Overseer's Finesse...

What You See WC: 2,513 His hammer struck the anvil and the familiar peal of metal striking metal comforted him. But only a little. Over a year ago his home had been in one of the remote villages on Hiemas, where the cold air made his joints ache, and the biting wind blasted his face as...

<< Chapter 6 << Last Page Next Page >> Chapter 7.1 WC: 1,316 Ioannes dropped low, keeping his body well below the windowpane. Light spilled out from the windows, piercing the black night like spears valiantly attempting to fight back. He could vaguely make out words, as Nonus’s commanding...

Ioannes Furvus Vigor: 15,000 Latens: 0 Skills: Art of Terriculcum (Skilled) Call of Mansuetis (Adept) Way of Perspicax (Adept) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Adept) Way of Sclopeto (Skilled) [- Items -] Mundane Ranged Weapon (Rifle) [- Feats -] Overseer's Finesse Overseer's...

Grade: 240 + 24 consec = 264 + 48 grader = 312 Ioannes Furvus Vigor: 15,000 Latens: 0 Skills: Art of Terriculcum (Skilled) Call of Mansuetis (Adept) Way of Perspicax (Adept) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Adept) Way of Sclopeto (Skilled) [- Items -] Mundane Ranged Weapon...

Zeta Tsunami 65/75 Alright Zeta. So, for such a short chapter there’s some obvious parts that need work. I don’t know if you rushed to write this piece or not, but it feels like it was rushed. I recommend going back to week 85 and re-reading the comments I left for you there. Moving forward...

“Your understanding of the situation is impeccable Mister Perfide,” Duilius said, nodding to the papers one final time. The pleasant business-like voice actually sounded happy as he went on to say, “On the guild form, at the bottom, you shall find my own signature. Simply sign your name below...

“Of course,” Duilius replied without missing a beat. “Split between three people, the guild fee would be drastically reduced.” The short laicar gestured to his home, an almost sheepish grin on his face. “As you can see, I am not one to quibble over something that saves me money. “I would like...

Grade: 170 Ioannes Furvus Vigor: 15,000 Latens: 0 Skills: Art of Terriculcum (Skilled) Call of Mansuetis (Adept) Way of Perspicax (Adept) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Adept) Way of Sclopeto (Skilled) [- Items -] Mundane Ranged Weapon (Rifle) [- Feats -] Overseer's Finesse...

Didn't see anything for Aq or guest grader. Let me know if anything was missed. My writing for week 96: http://www.postterminus.com/showthread.php?1230-Aq-Oc-Week-96-So-We-Meet-Again

“I say ‘lead’ but it is a misleading title, if you will forgive the pun.” Calm and collected, Duilius walked towards the couple and took the papers in his hand. He stood there, shuffling through the papers until he came to one in particular, then handed it back to Deni. “In truth, choosing you...

“No,” Duilius replied. Then adding as an afterthought, “At least not in any official capacity. I submitted the idea and inquired as to what sort of restrictions such a guild would have. Their response was... ,” his smirk widened a bit, “interesting.” Unfolding his legs, and rising to his full...

So We Meet Again Ft. Aeria (Moon) & Kincaid (Hare) WC: 3,414 It took her a while to track down the building in which the Societas resided. Her memory had grown somewhat fuzzy since the last time she’d been in the area surrounding it but once she had located it, she had walked in the door...

Ignis’s unease might have had something to do with how Kincaid was already halfway out of his seat when she arrived, and his arm cocked across his chest with the blade of a throwing knife between his fingers. Where had that come from? When no one made a move on the new intruder, Kincaid lowered...

Ioannes Furvus Vigor: 15,000 Latens: 0 Skills: Art of Terriculcum (Skilled) Call of Mansuetis (Adept) Way of Perspicax (Adept) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Adept) Way of Sclopeto (Skilled) [- Items -] Mundane Ranged Weapon (Rifle) [- Feats -] Overseer's Finesse Overseer's...

Sorry folks. No in-dept critiques this week. Real life snuck up on me these last few days. Val Library 220/222 Date 285/286 Why do I not trust Vaf? Oh. He’s working with Deni. That’s why. But, no. In all seriousness I’m interested to see where this all goes. Most of your errors were minor...

There was a momentary pause as the cloaked woman seemed to consider her situation. The blade eased itself off of Ignis’s neck, and the woman stepped back, her hand disappearing with the knife beneath the cloak. Presumably, she had sheathed it, but it could just as easily still be in her hand...