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3,510 Purpose From Within Bish | Wayne There it was. In front of the Fourth Seat stood the imposing gates of the Eleventh Division. This particular division, in all its incarnations, was reputed to be the antithesis to all things arcane or ethereal. This was the home ground of many of...

Yep. I won't be able to grade for this week unfortunately. Sorry kids. It'd be great if someone covered for me. Kthnxbai.

Grade: 194 (Collab Bonus bought) + 256 (Colab Bonus via Raph) = 450 Reaitsu+ 450 Zanjutsu+ 450 ----------------------------------------- Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 58,139 Tenzansatsu - 69,767 Fuhen Souryokusen - 81,395 Zanjutsu: 45,539 Hakuda: 100...

Vin – Here’s a Lollipop Nothing special, nothing too bad. It seemed like just another run in the mill chapter to acquaint two characters together. It served its purpose, alright, but beyond that? Not much else. Grammar was top, the flow and chemistry between Alexia and Echo was only ‘slightly’...

[11th] Reijew Kyuketsu I'm soooo gonna get my ass kicked ;_;

3,866 Paradise of Knaves Wayne | Ketch Near the outskirts of the northern districts, passing a series of grain and cotton fields, lay the brunt of the area’s more perfidious ward. Garnished as the closest red light district to the Seireitei, the place was endowed with a certain level of...

5,093 A Blunted Edge Raph | Wayne He sighed, staring at the door with a measure of trepidation. The secretary had already told him the man wasn't busy, but a certain thrill of apprehension went down his spine nonetheless. Kiro of Shenrai knocked twice on the door of the Eleventh...

Vin – So How Was Your Week? I’m not exactly sure where you’re going with this one. The first-person perspective came out of nowhere, and while there’s not exactly anything wrong with it grammatically, there’s no rhyme or reason for it to be there in the first place. Sure, first-person can work...

Best Antagonist – Prometheus Best Character Name – Rudo Brown Best Collab Duo – Best PMs Scene – God is Dead Best Taishuu Practical/Moral – Best Zanpakuto Manifestation – Biggest Douche – Amaterasu Nana Biggest Psychopath – Ciro Martelli Biggest Martyr – Character with Best Plot –...

Grade: 170 + 17 (Consec Bonus) = 187 Reiatsu+ 187 Zanjutsu+ 187 ----------------------------------------- Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 57,689 Tenzansatsu - 69,227 Fuhen Souryokusen - 80,765 Zanjutsu: 45,089 Hakuda: 100 Hohou: 6,000 Kidou: 6,500 --...

Al – Tooth and Fang Good to see a little training here between Zak and his sword spirit. It’s an interesting route how you took the manga approach and had two separate forms for you shikai and bankai, even more so since the Amazonian fighter concept was perfect for Kalu’aita. The foreshadowing...

Mine: Chapters x3

Group 4 -> Group 5 -> Group 1 -> Group 3 -> Group 2 -> Group 4 Group 1 (Will): 1st/5th/7th Divisions Group 2 (Katie): 2nd/8th/10th Divisions Group 3 (Rob): 3rd/12th Divisions Group 4 (Wayne): 4th/9th/11th Divisions Group 5 (Moony): AHs/Vizards/Quincies Grades...

810 That Which Confounds a Man Probing up and down the human’s apartment, the three shinigami looked everywhere for any sign that could lead them to the thief’s whereabouts. With the driver patched up yet still unconscious on the sofa, Kyuketsu and his men rummaged through everything worth...

From underneath the locks of pale hair, his right eye twitched bitterly at the sight. It was not too long ago that he came face to face with Haresuno’s final release, though failing, in the end, despite admittedly haggard attempt at victory. Xiezhi was a troublesome weapon, equipped with an...

1,124 That Which Frightens a Man The hurried, panicked steps came to a halt. Leading to a building’s rooftop in downtown Ikebukuro, the stalking had reached its end with the final click locking off the only exit in sight. Two figures stood before one another, the persistent silence which...

1,458 That Which Drives a Man Traffic began to pile up. Closing in on the city’s Narita International Airport, the streets had gone from desolate to congested in but a matter of minutes. The cacophonous noise of blaring car horns shattered the worthwhile silence that kept their spirits calm...

Grade: 42 Reiatsu+ 42 Zanjutsu+ 42 ----------------------------------------- Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 57,502 Tenzansatsu - 69,002 Fuhen Souryokusen - 80,503 Zanjutsu: 44,902 Hakuda: 100 Hohou: 6,000 Kidou: 6,500 -- Reitouten, Hadou #50 // 1000...

Comments are gonna be short this week guys. Last few days kicked my ass back to the Middle Ages. Vin – Lightning An improvement over the last three- way collab you had, although with still a few kinks needed to be worked here and there. Turn order again should be kept consistent, and while...