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My Cousin Vinny – History Wears a Mask // The Dong is Coming All Over Her Face Unlike past reviews, I’m gonna have to focus more on grammar this time around rather than the overall plots of your chapters. As a little side note, however, the story structures by themselves were solid. It’s...

A millennia’s worth of life and loss, years of constant turmoil and endless death. There, now laid bare before him, was a revelation once hidden behind lies. The legacy in which Kyuketsu stood underneath was but a falsehood, a petty, baseless tale spun by misconstruing tongues. The ancient...

Still drowned in the fires of warfare, the electrifying madness which swelled within the captain only grew with wretched candor. He was belligerent even in the face of true despair, unyielding to the dawn of chaos possessing the city. With Prometheus’ miasma flowing and pulsing in his veins...

Busy busy busy. Al – Swarm, Part 2 It’s filler, but it’s still nice seeing you up and about again with your writing. As always, your style of writing when it comes to fights is vivid and engaging. At best, it’s Die Hard in literary form and at worst, it’s an guilty pleasure B-movie. Yeah...

His entire body, as if caught in the pull of a river’s current, was immediately consumed by the unholy pillar forged of emptiness and insanity. Among the purgatorial outcries of the deceased, within the biting and mauling of shattered bones, the captain struggled desperately to liberate himself...

Welp, there goes consec. Again. Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 51,768 Tenzansatsu - 62,122 Fuhen Souryokusen - 72,475 Zanjutsu: 39,168 Hakuda: 100 Hohou: 6,000 Kidou: 6,500 -- Reitouten, Hadou #50 // 1000 Kidou --- Saju Sabaku, Bakudou #63 // 1200 Kidou...

1. Working out has probably become my most avid hobby compared to anything else. I was particularly engaged with the science behind it--in this case, nutrition as well and how the body reacts to certain types of strains put on it i.e., strength, endurance, or hypertrophy training. It's kind of...

Vin – Father and Son Welp, you certainly didn’t disappoint with Richard’s introduction. Right off the bat, he was calculating, tactical, and surprisingly convincing when it came to interacting with Garren. It was a short chapter, yet despite its length, you’ve managed to introduce a lot of...

http://www.mangaden.net/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=801&d=1366605262 Amidst the pandemonium, concealed underneath the spewing chaos ruling the land, a small glimmer shined close by. There, catching sight of a war-torn land, drowned in the abysmal promise of death and decay, appeared a...

I was bound to post sooner or later. @Kago, I'd say 5 pounds in 8 weeks is pretty easy even for a beginner. If anything, I'd suggest going for double that if you're really committed to your diet and exercise. I'm not a fan of getting technical with counting calories, but if you're down for...

@Ketch: You cheeky fucker <3 Grade: 783 + 78 (Consec Bonus) = 861 + 200 (Grader Bonus) = 1,061 Reiatsu+ 1,061 Zanjutsu+ 1,061 ----------------------------------------- Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 51,768 Tenzansatsu - 62,122 Fuhen Souryokusen -...

Man, the PMs sure were downers this time around, weren’t they? Al – Rattling Bones Let me just get this out of the way right now. This was the first, out of many other threads, that went and failed to meet expectations. To start things off, the meeting with Gorou and Udo kinda dragged on...

Almost instantly as he heard the girl’s voice, a pang of change quickly overcame the captain. The cold, robotic demon that once possessed the man stepped aside for the moment, replaced instead by the affable, almost suspiciously docile individual known collectively more by the denizens of the...

A frigid hell overtook every fiber of its being. The bottomless, gaping emptiness from once before was filled with a purging cold that simply could not be overcome. The blood in its veins froze solid, the sinews backing its muscles breaking apart and crumbling like fragile snowflakes tramped...

He watched callously as the flames engulfed the beast, eyes dead with a sense of cruel sadism all too present in the glimmer of his swords. As the last of the blaze was extinguished, not another word came from the captain’s lips. No celebratory remarks, no final farewell to the fallen foe. The...

Unleashing the massive cero had taken its toll on the beast, winding it a bit right as it faced the old man’s proceeding strike. Vuoto turned away from Dellius, pushing back with its hind legs as to evade the corrosive roar. The scion’s vicious speed still proved its worth, saving the lion from...

IN terms of advertising and bringing in new people, might I suggest venturing out of the box a little bit? Ad site for RPGs like the one we're already in is nice, although I'm thinking more of other outlets like Reddit. I'm not particularly well-versed in the community there, but the traffic...

Vuoto had its fangs sink deeper into the old man’s flesh, penetrating further still in hopes of severing the limb completely. In its adrenaline-fueled thrashing, it nearly failed to realize the move brought forth by its foe. With the scion’s tail clamped tightly in the shinigami’s hand, its...

Grade: 100 + 10 (Consec Bonus) = 110 + 50 (Division Bonus) + 200 (Grader Bonus) = 360 Reiatsu+ 360 Zanjutsu+ 360 ----------------------------------------- Reijuu Kyuketsu :: Captain of the 11th Division Reiatsu: 50,707 Tenzansatsu - 60,848 Fuhen Souryokusen - 70,990 Zanjutsu...

Is it just me, or is the RP pretty slow lately? Barely anything from Group 4, let alone 11thers. Oh welp. Vin – The Adventures of Quincyman, Part Deux I gotta say, for writing a Quincy, you’ve managed to make the story pretty engaging. This was a nice back-story chapter on Garren’s...