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Laermont stood at the opposite end of the Arsenic from Garus, staring at the ocean speeding away underneath the hydrofoils as the great ship was flung across the surface of the waves. As always, his expressionless face gave away nothing. He stood absolutely still, save for the motions of the...

Diamantus screamed one simple word into the teeth of the collapsing temple's rending destruction: RUN! The muscled velen pushed herself even harder and hoped that her companions would be able to make it out. Her main concern was to save herself and Aeria, the others would (sadly) have to fend...

Laermont listened, focusing his eyeplates on Amanita. He shrugged and shook his head, somehow managing to give the impression of a wry smile crossing his expressionless face. “She does have a rather uncanny knack of showing up at the right time. You may just be right about her having you...

Aeria’s face twisted into a smirk and after the others had said their piece to Dante and wandered off she patted him on the back. “Good work. You successfully managed to annoy the royal entourage.The guy with the mustache looks like he wants to strangle you. Also really? Staring at sixteen year...

Laermont's ever-sweeping gaze had turned to watch the interactions between the two archers, one of whom was decidedly more battle-hardened than the other. He seemed to sit quietly, as if he was gathering and storing up as much information as possible about the pair. His attention was caught by...

Aeria drove her elbow far harder than necessary into Dante's side as she stood next to him. She leaned in and whispered in his ear in a tense voice. "I can't believe you said that out loud, Dante. What the hell?" She dug her elbow in again, driving its bony point against her companion's ribs...

As the little scene had unfolded behind the three chatting people, Diamantus had only briefly flicked her eyes over to Garus and the commotion as she replied to Amanita. “Nah. Rank is for people serving under me. Keep on calling me whatever you want because you’ve earned the right. In this...

Laermont inclined his head to acknowledge Amanita’s greeting. His face was, as with all demvir, expressionless but his voice was cordial. “Perhaps we are, as you say, one of the odder sights on this dock.” Diamantus gave Amanita a look with a similar half smile on her face. “Well, nice to see...

More familiar faces had stepped into the Geamhess’ lavishly appointed sitting room as Aeria, Dante and Deni had been talking. The spurii’s keen violet eyes moved across the tapestry of those with whom she’d interacted in the past. Her face remained expressionless, save for slight raising and...

Diamantus may have been a rebel against the Conexus, but as she stood and smelled the tang of salt in the air, she seemed to straighten a little more and adopt a more serious bearing. She was wearing the full velen military uniform complete with a series of polished medals that indicated her...

Aeria tapped Dante on the shoulder and shook her head. "There's no need for that sort of thing, Dante. Deni's a friend. He's saved my ass from some pretty nasty scrapes. However..." She ran an appraising gaze over Deni and 'tsked' before smirking at him. "What are you wearing? You look like a...

Without any questioning, Aeria turned and began trying to limp/drag herself out of the room, struggling with her damaged body. Diamantus rushed up behind her and put a powerful arm around her. In an easy motion, the muscled velen heaved the slight spurii off of the ground and carried her bodily...

Aeria Luxus strode onto the deck of the Geamhess dressed in her finest armor and clothing. A bright crimson cloak hung from her surprisingly solid shoulders contrasting with the bright silver breastplate that she wore. Fine traceries of design ran across it, but it was also built for function...

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Deep in the innards of the ancient marble edifice that housed the detectives of demvir’s police force, Detective Laermont and his deputy Calvinia sat across a plain wooden table from the muscle-bound velen prisoner. His purple and blue scales looked dull and a nasty swelling rose over one eye...

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Overall, I can just simply state that I am enjoying the budding interactions between Rosa and Micali. I want to see how their relationship develops and how their bond might increase. You do an excellent job of slowly drawing them together and also at illustrating their connection that Micali is...

I will attempt a bit of feedback, but I'm terrible at the idea of being more critical. I am not someone who likes to dig into others' work and make comments that are negative or too critical. Mind you, the truth is that in the case of this chapter there's not much negativity that I can muster. I...

Diamantus wandered around the room's edges, at least as far as she could go before the darkness blotted out the room. The strange aural dynamics of the place had her glancing backwards at the starry stuff that was creeping across the room. She also kept an eye on the mouldering zombie. He seemed...