Kawazoe
Member
I'll say sorry in advance, because I don't have a lot of time to make this post and so it'll be pretty short.
Content-wise, this chapter's better, but Roo has a point. You need to learn where to put periods and when to capitalize words. Read your chapter out loud to see what I mean: I guarantee you it'll sound off.
Content-wise, this chapter's better, but Roo has a point. You need to learn where to put periods and when to capitalize words. Read your chapter out loud to see what I mean: I guarantee you it'll sound off.