Ignis of Animi
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I know it was quite a short chapter, but it did exactly what it had to do.
I liked the segmentation of the chapter, the split between description of Ignis' injuries (I know they were done in more detail in the previous chapters so they didn't need quite as much in this one) and the discovery of Arline's nature, right the way to Ignis' refusal to serve a creature that demands sacrifice. I look forward to what happens next!
I liked the segmentation of the chapter, the split between description of Ignis' injuries (I know they were done in more detail in the previous chapters so they didn't need quite as much in this one) and the discovery of Arline's nature, right the way to Ignis' refusal to serve a creature that demands sacrifice. I look forward to what happens next!