Bleach: Final Soul (Sign Ups)

[Aero456]

I'm going to be writing this story myself.
But its hard for anyone to come up with a million zanpaktou's himself so...
I'm going to ask some people out there to fill out profiles.
I want you to make characters and swords for them so I can use them in my story.

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearance(may be written or picture):
Likes or dislikes:
Sword Name (Japanese and English- include shikai and bankai names):
Sword Appearance (in shikai and bankai):
Sword Powers:
Preferred Squad (out of the current 13):

Its not a roleplaying thread, its a story but I need help with the characters.
So please help me out on this.
I will be taking in 10 characters to begin.

Characters
Asashimo Kenbu (Shinigami)- SingNagareboshi
Keira Zakuri (Vizard)- The Moogle Shinigami
Jinkensu Kire (Vizard)- shadowkenny
Ichitou (Vizard)- Marmoset
Miko Hiyayaka (Shinigami)- espada5
Chaos Bones (Shinigami)- Sheath92
Estrella Lampara (Arrancar)- The Moogle Shinigami
Erubisu Funderu Sigebreht (Arrancar)- SilverRedstone
Yuzuru Genkishi (Shinigami)- Tai17
Hachi Hachi-ju (Shinigami)- Case88

 

[Aero456]

I hope this helps your decision making on deciding a squad.

Squad 1
Captain: Genryuusai Yamamoto
Vice Captain: Choutarou Sasakibe
Squad 2
Captain: Soi Fon
Vice Captain: Marechiyo Oomaeda
Squad 3
Captain: N/A
Vice Captain: Izuru Kira
Squad 4
Captain: Retsu Unohana
Vice Captain: Isane Koutetsu
Squad 5
Captain: N/A
Vice Captain: Momo Hinamori
Squad 6
Captain: Byakuya Kuchiki
Vice Captain: Renji Abarai
Squad 7
Captain: Sajin Komamura
Vice Captain: Tetsuzaemon Iba
Squad 8
Captain: Shunsui Kyouraku
Vice Captain: Nanao Ise
Squad 9
Captain: N/A
Vice Captain: Shuuhei Hisagi
Squad 10
Captain: Toushirou Hitsugaya
Vice Captain: Rangiku Matsumoto
Squad 11
Captain: Kenpachi Zaraki
Vice Captain: Yachiru Kusajika
Squad 12
Captain: Mayuri Kurotshuchi
Vice Captain: Nemu Kurotshuchi
Squad 13
Captain: Jyuushiro Ukitake
Vice Captain: Kaien Shiba (deceased)

And these show the personalities of the squads by giving the flower that is their symbol.

Squad 1
Chrysanthemums- Truth and Innocence
Squad 2
Tulip- Seek Nothing
Squad 3
Marigold- Despair
Squad 4
Bellflower- Those Who Grieve Are Loved
Squad 5
Lily of the Valley- Sacrifice, Danger, Pure Love
Squad 6
Camellia- Noble Reason
Squad 7
Iris- Courage
Squad 8
Bird of Paradise- Everything Is Obtained
Squad 9
Buttercup- Oblivion
Squad 10
Daffodil- Mystery, Egoism
Squad 11
Yarrow- Fight
Squad 12
Thistle- Vengeance, Strictness, Independence
Squad 13
Summer Snowflake- Hope

I hope this all helps you with your profiles.

 

[Aero456]

For Japanese translations for the sword names:
http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html

Its a very good site.
Look at my sig for an example name. But don't use it.
it means:
Shikai- Sand Fox
Bankai- Rising Storm Sand Fox
Please make profiles people.
I really want to write this.

 

[Lady Stumble]

heyos, I'm not a japanese native speaker or anything, but with what I DO know about japanese grammer, may help you a bit.

I see that your shikai is Sand Fox and you translated it with the words Sand and Fox. However when you want to use Sand as a descriptor, usually they go with "Fox of Sand", but in the Asian grammar way which would be (in Chinese, cuz I'm chinese) Sha [sand] de Huli [fox]

thus, it should be translated to Suna no Kitsune with "no" being the equivalent to "of"

Of course, I may be wrong, but I am about 80% sure that I'm not. Unless you type in the phrase "sand fox" and came up with that translationg, then I doubt it is grammatically correct ;D

btw, I've got a better translator for you. It gives you phrases along with words too. Like if you typed in song it will come up with "song" "love song" "old song" "war song" and such. It may help you: Japanese/English Translator

you can even translate to Kanji too ;D

 

[Aero456]

Well i didn't mean for it to be "Fox of Sand".
I wanted "Sand Fox".
And by the way, please post if you are actually going to make a profile.

 

[Lady Stumble]

.......i don't really hold with other ppl making characters for you, but as I love profiles and making up characters, why not.

However, I want to make something clear first n.n'' I know you want Sand Fox, but in Japanese grammar, the way they do that is the way I explained. It means the same translated to English. But if you rather stick with what you have, wotever.

Name: Asashimo Kenbu (eastern order [Morning Frost, Sword Dance])
Gender: Female
Age: Looks 19, is actually 769
Appearance(may be written or picture):

Deadly Beauty: (deadly huge picture xD)

Likes or dislikes
likes:
- rushing water
- lychee
- shiny things
- running
- laughing
dislikes:
- vain people
- rain
- immodest people (as in not humble)
- slow people
- chicken (food)
Sword Name"
shikai - Juhyou [Frost Covered Trees]
Bankai- Juhyou no Akatsuki [Dawn's Frost Covered Trees]
Sword Appearance (in shikai and bankai):
shikai- a glaive with tribal engravings on the blade edge. Every time it is swung, it leaves a trail of fine frost which freezes the air it travels through. The blade is of an iridescent white hued with a violet that flows along the blade like a flame
bankai - neh...I dun like thinking up bankai
Sword Powers:
- when the blade cuts through an enemy, Kenbu releases through her blade a shock of frost into their bloodstream, which depending on how strong she is in relative to her opponent, can either slow their movements, or freeze the victim to death.
Preferred Squad (out of the current 13): 13th

one more thing. The way I often think up characters is by basing them off of people I know. Changing, exaggerating, adding stuff. Also, always add some defining thing to your character. Earings, tattoos, an obsession with ice cream, whatever.

;D good luck

 

[Aero456]

Thank you for making a profile.
I wanted to try this kind of story out because i have exhausted my mind on characters lately with my two other stories (both non-bleach).
So i decided to try and get other people to help me out.

 

[The Moogle Shinigami]

Alright I'll help it, I wanna see how you play this character out.


Name:Keira Zakuri (Kiyra zackUree)
Gender:Female
Age:16
Appearance(may be written or picture):

I didnt want it to take up so much space

Also her mask picture(yeah thats right shes a vizard but if ya wanna change that...
http://www.flickr.com/photos/weirdrubikscube/79085386/in/photostream/ I'll post the link it wont let me post the photo

Likes or dislikes:Likes Manga(Grabs a few from the human world),Any kind of meat dish,Anything pickled, Hates people who whine,Byakuya Kuchiki, and anyone who isnt intelligent.
Sword Name (Japanese and English- include shikai and bankai names):Shikai:Ryouken No Kokuei (Dark Shadow Hound)Bankai:Kagemusha Ryouken (Shadow Warrior Hound)
Sword Appearance (in shikai and bankai):

When sealed

Shikai

Bankai

Sword Powers:Shikai: Uses the surrounding shadows and creates copies of hell hounds(See picture) Bankai: Transports target(s) to a created world (Again see pic)
Preferred Squad (out of the current 13):7

 

[shadowkenny]

i'll help


name: Jinkensu kire (eastern order)

gender:male

age:17

appearence:

appearence

yes my char is a visard i just think there kwl so heres the spoiler to the mask

vizard mask

likes and dislikes:likes anime + manga more manga than anime,he also likes to play fighting games. dislikes anyone who doubts anyone else


sword name:houka doragon.
shikai command:kashou,houka doragon
bankai:nenshou kemono doragon

appearence of....

sealed:

sealed

shikai:

shikai

bankai:

bankai

shikai power:shots cero like flame from tip of sword

bankai power:manipulates fire

prefered squad:13

 

[Marmoset]

Name:Ichitou--One sword, yes I wanted to make his name opposite from his Bankai. Growing up in Rukongai, he doesn't have a last name.
Gender:Male
Age:21
Appearance(may be written or picture)ale skin, thin, muscular build, about 6 foot. Blue hair with white streaks in it. Styled like Hitsugaya's. Uder his eyes there are blue marks that rsemble lightning bolts pointing toward his chin, they turn black when he uses Bankai. He has blue eyes that also turn black(like the vizards) when he uses Bankai. His face, other than that resembles Grimmjow's. Wears the traditional Shihakusho.(pardon the spelling) Very fast and agile, a master of shunpo.
Likes or dislikes: Likes: Fighting, running, strategy games.
Dislikes: When people don't give their all during a fight.
He is indifferent to pretty much everything else, not really caring about what's going on in Soul society. He has a very clam, cool, and collected demeanor.
Sword Name Mira Ken: Mirror Blade Bankai: Mira Ken Zenhansha--Total Reflection
Sword Appearance (in shikai and bankai): Sealed:Black Hilt+Blade in a white sheath, Hilt guard shaped like Isshin's. Shikai+Bankai in powers
Sword Powers: Shikai: May change into whatever weapon I wish
Bankai: Makes up to 16 copies of the sealed blade which I can control wit my thoughts. Some fly around me for defense, others fly out for attack
Fighting Style: Uses his speed and agility to overwhelm his opponents. Also uses his shikai to confuse them, and when all else fails, crushes them with his Bankai.
Preferred Squad (out of the current 13):11

Hope that's okay, kinda running short on time.

 

[Aero456]

Not bad.
We have two Vizards now.
I'll have to think about what I'm gonna do with those.
This will make the story very interesting.

 

[The Moogle Shinigami]

>.< Kenny ripped me off anyway yeah I thought it would be interesting

 

[Aero456]

I was thinking someone else in the story a Vizard.
But I might not seeing as we have two now.
Maybe there will be a twist with one of them. Hmm...
Hahaha.

 

[The Moogle Shinigami]

If you cant tell my character is a designed after me..so no killing!!! >.< jk do whatever you want but if death is what you have planned for her then I request non-to painful one please

 

[Aero456]

Oh I don't know about that.
Its a little early on to be thinking about killing anyone off.

 

[The Moogle Shinigami]

Alright be nice anyway............no putting in six squad

 

[espada5]

here......

Name: Miko Hiyayaka

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Apperance: long black hair, about 6' 6, 185lbs., always wears all black

likes: when people get injured, blood, people who dont talk alot
Dislikes: stupid people, people who fight to save other people

Sword Name: Shikai- Tenkuu Kirite (Air Cutter) Bankai- Soudai Boufuu (Grand Windstorm)

Sword Apperarance: carries a sheath around his waist with what appears to be nothing in it. his shikai form from the air inside the sheath and is brought forth by saying the command -dageki(blow)- forms a sword made of air that can grow to any length...Bankai is many tornados form around the battle area and are controled the same way byakuya controls his senbon. Final form of bankai is where a dome of wind forms around the battle area

Sword Powers: Shikai- an air sword forms in his hand that is very sharp it can be elongated to any length(the air spins in the his hand taking the shape of a sword causing it to be very sharp).....Bankai- the tornados spin at very fast speeds, he controls the tornados to hit his enemy or traps them in it causing hem to become severly injured or deas.... his Final form of Bankai is released by saying kujiku(crush), it forms a dome around the battle area inside objects fly around at huge speed hitting random spots until you are killed it is almost indistrutable

Squad: 3 or 9( wht ever u think)

 

[Sheath92]

I got one.

Name: Chaos Bones

Gender: Male

Hair: Messy Red and with black Highlights

Eyes: Red

Height: 5'11

Weight: 155

Looks: Average

Likes: Cake, scary stories, Green Tea, Naps, and reading.

Dislikes: Squad 9, Soifon, and Kira Izaru.

Seat: 7th seat, Squad 13
Zanpaktou: Dansu Oujou

Sealed:
A black katana blade

Shikai:
A Black Scythe
Special attack: Dansu NO Kai, Spins in a circle and cut attcks and opponets.
Bankai (When Achived): Wears a black gothic Cloak and carries two scythes one white one black, Increases speed and gets te ability to teleport to super speed, Example can go to Hueco Mundo in a snap from anywhere, Dansu No Maru Ni increases to a different dance combining teleportation and destroying all opponets in the area.

Vizard?

Personality interview from members from squad 11 and 13.

Kenpachi Zaraki, "Him? He Runs From me if I want a fight from me."

Yumichika Ayasegawa: "I don't look at ugly beings so I wouldn't know anything about him."

Yachiru: "Funny Hair? He's Fun he gives me cake all the time!"

Ukitake: "He's good at battle planing and thinking of others before himself."

Fighting style: Uses Speed, thinks before he swings, Kidou always seems to be a last resort, but trys to get the job done fast.

 

[Marmoset]

My character's Vizard mask (if he's one of the vizards you're talking about) is the one on the top left of the picture.

 

[The Moogle Shinigami]

Oh...three vizards.........good luck there

P.S. Sheath Get working on your fanfic!!!!!!!!