Reviewed [collab] Week 288: Quaere - Feedback
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This collab made me... prickly. That's a good thing, though. It comes from the strong characterization of Vox and Laermont. I like how you two maintained the tension between your characters without going hostile. The hints of annoyance, the careful verbal probing, and the game structure all made it feel like a spy movie. I'm excited to see where this goes.
I appreciate your vivid descriptions of your characters, Ink, it's quite a delight when I get a chance to read your work. Mwn, I like how you explain what expressions Laermont would've made if he could. It's a good reminder that despite seeming impassive, he does have feelings.
I appreciate your vivid descriptions of your characters, Ink, it's quite a delight when I get a chance to read your work. Mwn, I like how you explain what expressions Laermont would've made if he could. It's a good reminder that despite seeming impassive, he does have feelings.