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(I feel compelled to point out... Aeria is the one who rescued him. Aeria piloted the ship that pulled Lea out of the ocean. A rather small ship, so they certainly saw each other there!)
I'm not used to seeing this side of your writing, Moon, and I rather appreciate a more emotional, introspective look at your characters. While the collab definitely felt mostly about and for Lea, Aeria's own trauma and stress are well represented, and the two play surprisingly well off of one another. I can feel the anxiety Lea feels as it's being described, and while part of that is having had panic attacks myself in the past, the other part is how well written the movements and words and actions are, the cognizance of the illogic of it all and yet being driven by it. Both characters have gone through some tough times, and while their struggles are nothing alike, the fact that they can share this little bond as two people seeking to heal is somewhat touching. Great job.
I'm not used to seeing this side of your writing, Moon, and I rather appreciate a more emotional, introspective look at your characters. While the collab definitely felt mostly about and for Lea, Aeria's own trauma and stress are well represented, and the two play surprisingly well off of one another. I can feel the anxiety Lea feels as it's being described, and while part of that is having had panic attacks myself in the past, the other part is how well written the movements and words and actions are, the cognizance of the illogic of it all and yet being driven by it. Both characters have gone through some tough times, and while their struggles are nothing alike, the fact that they can share this little bond as two people seeking to heal is somewhat touching. Great job.