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Having written (and not yet posted) a similar chapter for Deni's crafting challenge from Prince Caput, the thing I found the hardest was how to keep it interesting and maintain the crafting terminology and processes. There was a lot of terminology in the first half so I definitely enjoyed the second half more with the reunion of Aeria's professor. It helped break up the craft-speak and brought more character to the chapter. I can't help but feel this should have been longer... I haven't been following much of Aeria's back story but with the excitement Aeria showed seeing Craxtus I imagined they have a lot to talk about! Maybe there's some follow-up chapters waiting in the wings?