Ketch +88 etrgh
Good Fellows: 132
Tycho just has bad business sense. Just randomly handing out guns to anyone that gives money, even if the gun belongs to someone else already. I enjoyed the difference in tone between Tycho's suspicion and Apollo's salesmanship. This could either go smoothly, or blow up real good.
Charity: 182
Glad to see someone taking on those longstanding bounty missions. Nice to see some helpful people in Tycho's quest, too. This was a decent fact-finding collab.
I'm kinda hoping that Amgine is in Eleutheria because I think that's a more interesting scenario. Perhaps Tycho can put together a team, it's probably easier to herd cats that do that.
Doc + 86 trtrhg
Roar VIi: 302
How relaxed of the guards to not even want to ask any questions. Speedy's encounter with Baron was really well done. I enjoyed the return of consequences for past actions. Now Baron just seems so sad.
“is there something you need?”
New sentence. Start with capital.
“I need to see Diomedes Adrastus,” The velen paused to bare a toothy, predatory smile.
Two different sentences. The dialogue should end in a period.
The second part of the chapter was intense. It was a thrilling encounter between Speedy and Tydeus. Speedy should have just shot him, man. Should've just shot 'im. But the tone and atmosphere was really
well done.
Good fellows: 132
I liked getting to know Apollo better in this collab. I got more of him here than I did previously, and he's a pretty interesting guy. What a smooth talker. I enjoyed the difference in tone between Tycho's suspicion and Apollo's salesmanship. This could either go smoothly, or blow up real good.
Will
Charity: 182
Captain Rayes be making a lot of assumptions from a man just saying his name. It's nice to see people taking up those bounties, isn't it? For the part of information dispenser, Rayes was alright. I was more interested in what he had to say rather than the person, though, but oh well.
