I could still use a grade for my part in Misericorde, if anyone's up for it.
PM - Ferocitas
'Toasty' is a great word to describe this thread, not just Aeria at the end. Val, great job with Ferocitas and Tharros, for starters (although I feel like maybe you forgot his name for most of that, because he was just 'the archmagi' for the bulk of the thread). Both came off as credible threats, and the direction you went with Tharros' motivations, vague though you were, was perfect. You were also relentless, repeatedly throwing heavy attacks and keeping everyone on their toes just to survive.
Minja, there were some typos, especially toward the end, and some of the fourth-wall breaking was awkward, but overall your writing wasn't bad. There is one distinct problem, however: throughout the majority of the collab, Aelflead didn't actually get involved. She was separate from the group from the start, but instead of linking up, or supporting from a flanking position, Aelflead spends pretty much the entire thread running toward Ferocitas/Tharros, and only arrives at the very, very end. Tactically, you could have done a lot more to help in the fight, even if just forcing Tharros to throw more Repulsors your way.
Dys and Moon, I actually wanted to reference something here, but you two probably wouldn't catch it. I'll just say that you guys did a great job carrying the bulk of the fight, tanking and blasting like crazy, but you should really consider trying to dodge sometimes! I liked the cleverness of using the halberd as a lightning-rod toward the end. Ignis really shouldered a lot of the work, having to defend, maneuver, heal, and attack -- really putting all of her skills as an Overseer to the test.
Dys (5153): 1028/1031 + 100
Minja (3001): 585/600 + 50
Moon (3509): 695/702 + 75
Val (3443): 685/689 + 75
