Group 5 -> Group 4 -> Group 3 -> Group 1 -> Group 2 -> Group 5
Group 1 (Will): 1st/5th/9th Divisions
Group 2 (Rob): 2nd/3rd/6th/11th Divisions
Group 3 (Drag): 7th/10th/12th Divisions
Group 4 (Hiren): 4th/8th/13th Divisions
Group 5 (Bunz): AHs/Vizards/Quincies
Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST on Tuesday, 24 June 2014 (yep, everybody's late)
Sorry this is late. It didn't even dawn on me until just now that grading wasn't already done.
Rob - 51/51
I'm both kind of lost and kind of intrigued. The description and imagery in this chapter was great, in terms of the characters. However, Lina might as well have been chained in an empty void. I had no sense of where she was or why she was chained, just that she was, and she was losing her mind. There weren't any noticeable grammar or proofreading errors, and overall it flowed well... I just feel like we need a little more substantial than these 1k vignettes.
Ketch: 53/53 aaaaaand +150 div bonus cuz of my crap and because you do good work...just take it. “Steps in the Sand” Haha this week we have Puff the Magic Bus climbing a steep hill. This was a rather fun chapter, with the joint and all LOL. I’d be worried about the driver getting a contact high like I did at Coachella, but I guess the Quincy dont care.
They are like the Vizards that way....oh and the outcast part...are they outcasts? I guess not, anyway Im interested to see how this goes...dont let my late grades make you think other.
