Grading Session for Week 61

[Redfin]

Please note the changes to the grading groups. Castus is, for now, housing all inactive members. When members become active, they will be assigned to a group as appropriate, but should post as [Ca] until they are assigned.

The grading groups and their graders are currently as follows:

[Ca] Castus - Inactive Members

Castus List

Bish
Bob
Bunz
Cheese
Dil
Freckles
Kaze
Lambo
Nella
Puppet
Sev
Tetsu
Thana
Zerieth

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[Oc] Occultus - Finny

Moon
Shade
Sparx
Thread​

[Be] Bellator - Will

Berri
Dys
Rob
Shrub​

[Se] Serpens - Hiren

Doc
Loko
Minj​

[Aq] Aquila - Raph

Hare
Resh
Val
Vin​

The Rotation for the month of October 2015 is:

[Oc] -> [Be] -> [Se] -> [Aq] -> [Oc]​

Please post your thread titles beginning with your grading group, then the week number, like follows:

[Ca] Week 01: Title Should Be Here​

Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST on Tuesday, 10/13/15.

 

[Redfin]

Moon + 150 bousn
Prologue: 118

Mm, alright, I am feeling this. I like the documentary/diary style that this has going on, and I can sense the upcoming strangeness from this first part. This really feels like an exploration into some strange and horrible place. You can color me whetted.

 

[Apeiron]

Nothing from AQ

http://www.postterminus.com/showthread.php?981-Aq-Week-061-A-Winning-Argument

 

[swaswj]

Hare - 110/115 +11 Consec + 150 Faction = 171

Not sure entirely what's going on here. It would have been good to give more description of the lizard man, and most of this chapter seems reliant on either information given in other chapters/collabs or not yet given out. As such, it's hard to form an opinion on it. Small typos popped up throughout. Remember that even though MS Word automatically "corrects" it this way, if you end dialogue on an exclamation or question mark, but transition to narrative, you still must make it lowercase:

“Sit!” Demanded the thief, breaking the silence that had fallen on the room.

Should be:

“Sit!” demanded the thief, breaking the silence that had fallen on the room.

Not much more to say here. It was not bad, but it feels more like an aside or a prelude than a chapter which stands on its own.

+150 Faction

A Winning Argument (1146) 110/115
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