It's Only You (Poem)

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Comments appreciated.


It's Only You..


It's only you who makes me feel this way
The one I long for every single day.
It's only you who holds my heart
The one I want you to keep every little part.

I feel overjoyed whenever from you, I hear
You make me so happy I sometimes shed a tear.
In your arms is where I want to be
Even if I have to travel across the shining sea.

I love you so much, you cannot see
It's impossible to know what you mean to me.
From your words I feel such love
It's a love no one can shove.

My heart with you it feels complete
And to me you are the only elite.
The way that I feel I can't explain
For you, my heart goes insane.

It's only you who makes my heart leap
And that heart is what I want you to keep.
It's only you I long for every night
Only you who I want to hold me tight.

My heart has been stolen right from my chest
I'm just glad it was taken by the very best.
When I hear from you my day is alway made
With you holding my heart I am not afraid.

Unconditional, my love is for you
Just know that all this is true.
When I see your eyes I feel at home
Lost inside them I forever roam.

It's only you who holds the key to my heart
It's only you who knows how to make it start.
It's only you from whom I long to hear calling
It's only you for whom my heart has fallen.

 

[xRukiaxx]

That was very pretty, Michael-san.

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Thank you very much Mandy-chan! [^.^]

 

[HollowDrummer3919]

That was very well written man. I really enjoyed it!

 

[♥Orihime Inoue♥]

best poem i've read so far :bravo:
can i use that in my sig pic i'm gonna make of ulquihime? :m-moji:

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Thank you guys, writing is my passion!

And sure, go ahead. I'd appreciate a name as credit, but you don't have to. :smiling:

 

[DCDL]

:socute: :inlove: i love it, i really do

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Thank you D!! (25 char.)

 

[darkness_akuma]

beautiful are the words...
lucky is the pen (in this case...keyboard)
talented is the writer...
green eyed is me
brilliant piece of work Maikeru
keep it up ^^
omg i cant believe i just grabbed that out of my head
rofl

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Haha, nicely said akuma. Thanks!

Maikeru is green-eyed too.

 

[darkness_akuma]

Haha, nicely said akuma. Thanks!

Maikeru is green-eyed too.

oh?
green eyed?
why o_o

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

Because my eyes are green.

 

[darkness_akuma]

Because my eyes are green.

orly?!
*now jealous*
my eye color is too common
i hate it = =

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

orly?!
*now jealous*
my eye color is too common
i hate it = =

Yes, but I want to change the color.
To like Ulquiorra-colored.

 

[darkness_akuma]

Yes, but I want to change the color.
To like Ulquiorra-colored.

o_o
isnt ulquiorra's eyes green?

 

[Maikeru Shinigami]

o_o
isnt ulquiorra's eyes green?

Yes, but they are much cooler green than mine.

 

[darkness_akuma]

Yes, but they are much cooler green than mine.

rofl
ok ok
now i get why
*sniggers*