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Reviewed [OC] Week 204: A Little Night Musing - Feedback

PTSD, survivor's guilt, impostor syndrome, reasoning your way out of an emotional hole but acknowledging that it's still there... all woven together to give a real good look inside a person's head. That's some heavy stuff you've written about, and I think you've handled that weight well :)

Why are TorBru going after her? Would that add anything to this piece?
 
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