Release Submission Thread

[Lady Stumble]

waa, didn't actually realized moots reviewed. Let's try again...​

Resubmission

slot: here

Command:"Sing with Abandon, Heart's Morning Star” ["Utaimakuru, Kokoro no Hitotsuboshi"]

Spirit Manifestation
A large female wolf with white wings, Kokoro no Hitotsuboshi has a myriad of violet tribal markings covering her white fur. She has thick fur at her legs, saber fangs, and eyes the same color as Okaeshin’s.

To her, Okaeshin is just a grown up baby sister, one who she can be immensely proud of. Kokoro cares about her deeply, but is not above teasing her relentlessly whenever the opportunity arises. Equally as playful, but a lot more sensible, and incredibly fierce in battle, she complements her wielder’s youthful passion with her wisdom, but gets easily frustrated when her advice is not heeded.

Kokoro no Hitotsuboshi

Released Form
When Okaeshin strikes her sealed zanpakutou vertically in the ground, the impact sets a vibration (similar to a tuning fork), and as she speaks the release command, the blade flows back around Okaeshin's hands, turning into incredibly thin strands of silk-like steel. The steel strands wrap around her hands, forming into wrist and hand wraps the same color as the unreleased uchigatana's blade. The strands finish loosely, forming a long ribbon on each end of the wrap, flowing continuously around Okaeshin's forearms over waves of sound. The individual strands in the wrap are sharp and as they vibrate, causing a slight tearing affect with each strike.

Every now and then, streaks of deeper violet lance through the wraps in tribal shapes.

Ability: Seiki (True Heart)

In the depths of a fighter is a hunter, a beast, a feral spirit, a true heart few people can ever bring themselves to recognize. With Seiki, the hidden depths of Okaeshin’s passion surface for all to see, and her instincts sharpen, elevating her wilder nature and reflexes along with all five of her senses.

With such raw instinct unleashed, the control Okaeshin had as a civilized being all but vanishes, leaving behind an individual surging with dynamic emotions. These emotions radiate from Okaeshin in vigorous torrents, revealing her deepest feelings for all to witness, whether it be fear, anger, despair, love, or happiness.

This ability costs 100 reiatsu every turn to use.

Ability: Kyuomei no Kinsen (Resonating Heartstrings)

The fear of the unknown had often haunted Okaeshin as a young street girl living in a hiding world. In order to overcome, she found the solution was not fighting the fear, but discovering what made her afraid. And so the unknown becomes known.

Strengthening the hum of her blades by singing softly and taking strength from her zanpakutou spirit's howl, Okaeshin can reverberate objects, and in receiving the disturbance of the air in return, she can map out the affected area in a 50 feet radius, including anything or any person within it. Subtle and efficient, this ability is difficult to detect unless those in the affected area have reiatsu 1.5 times that of Okaeshin’s.

Each turn costs 100 reiatsu

The hum and song are audible to those within a 10 feet radius of Okaeshin, and cannot be heard through a wall. The steady sound is punctuating by a rhythm of beats, but it seems to weave in and out of itself, giving it the musical quality of a canon.

 

[Redfin]

-Ability unmodified
-First attack has flat cost
-Took away draining from first attack
-Added a bit about damage resistance to first attack
-Took away arm disappearing from second attack
-Arm now drains reiatsu from Hotate
-Modified third attack a bit

Bankai

Name: Houshuku no Youki Matsuri ( 奉祝の妖気) Ghostly Festival of the Great Celebration

Form
The bankai has no form in itself. The zanpakutou will remain the same as always. But anything attached to it will disappear, leaving only the sword and sheath. The parts described below only appear when used.

Ability Form – The form of the ability is a white, glowing ring two meters in diameter. The ring is intangible to the touch by physical or energy means.

Ghostly Arm Form – The arm appears as a slender, human sized one with grey to dark blue skin color. The hand at the end is neither a left hand nor a right hand however but a symmetrical one where a second thumb replaces the pinky. At the end of each finger is a sharp, black nail. In the palm is a mouth filled with sharp teeth. The mouth can be used to speak.

Vengeful Spirit Form – The spirit is a tiny figure around the size of a hand. The top half of the body looks humanoid but the bottom half trails away at the torso into nothingness. It is completely black and had no facial features other than a mouth.


Ability: This was used to kill people in seven days
This can be toggled on and off but cannot be targeted. When it is on, the glowing ring will appear at Hotate's feet, though she can move it around at will.

While active, Hotate sends out a disruption field 50 meters in diameter that makes it harder to gather and control energy. What this means is that for races with the applicable stats, all reiatsu costs are doubled, the shuuhaku pool is cut in half, emptiness costs are doubled. Rage costs are unaffected. The power of the attack is unaffected as well.

Anyone standing inside the ring is protected from the effects and if Hotate is standing inside, the entire bankai is protected as well.


Attack 1: This was used to clean the room
Hotate can summons up to 20 ghostly arms at any point within 25 meters of herself with the cost of 100 reiatsu per arm. The arm cannot move from its origin but can turn around in a spherical manner. They have similar arm strength to Hotate and she can control them like extra limbs. These arms are strong against physical attacks but weak to energy attacks.

These last until destroyed or the bankai ends.

Attack 2: This was used for special effects
By draining reiatsu from Hotate, the arms can cast all techs, feats, release skills and kidou that she knows at the same strength she would use them. The only limitation is if said ability needs something such as eyes or legs.

Attack 3: This was used when feeling lonely
By paying 2% reiatsu, Hotate can fire off a vengeful spirit from her mouth or any of the hand's mouth. The spirit will pass through any obstacles and slowly home in on the intended target but only for two turns. It if it hasn't reached the target by then, it will disappear.

The ghost will haunt the person, starting at level 2. Every turn the person does not use an skill with a cost, the ghost will increase one level. If they happen to use an skill with normal costs at least an amount equal to 1% of Hotate's reiatsu, the ghost will lose one level. At level 0, the spirit will disappear and at level 5, Hotate can sacrifice the spirit and force the target to use one of their attacks/feats/techs with her paying half the cost and the person paying the other half. She will choose the target if one is needed.

Hotate must know the skill exists before being able to force the other person to use it.

 

[Chiisu]

Shikai Resubmission for Vincent Kreuz

Spec point being used can be found here.

絶対美徳 – Zettai Bitoku (Absolute Virtue)

Spirit: Zettai Bitoku appears to Vincent as a large gryphon. His fur is a bright gold, while his feathers are a darker golden brown. Zettai Bitoku carries gives off a regal air. He speaks impeccably, as if he were royalty, or at least nobility. He is extremely loyal to Vincent and always seeks the best for him, even if that puts him at odds with the boy. In fact, they often find themselves disagreeing on how Vincent should act or behave, and the spirit often chides Vincent for his childish actions, wishing instead that the boy would take the moral high road, a sentiment that is often lost on the child.

Release Phrase: “Torimodose, Zettai Bitoku” (“Redeem, Absolute Virtue”)

Form: Zettai Bitoku, when released, takes the form of a guan dao. The weapon is five feet long. The staff is made of a light wood, with glyphs, kanji, and various other words inscribed along it, not all of which are known languages. A silver ribbon, about two feet long, is tied to the staff, just below the blade. It too is covered with various symbols written in red.

Ability: Kinben (Diligence)

-When this ability is activated, the ribbon on Zettai Bitoku begins to glow a bright gold. It extends in length and spirals around Vincent, creating a spherical shield. This shield acts the same as the spell Tangent. When a force, be it physical or kidou-like, strikes the shield, an instantaneous burst of energy repels it. Because this is instantaneous, Kinben is useless against constant attack, such as a Cero. This ability costs 5% reiatsu and can only be used 3 times per battle.

Ability: Sessei (Temperence)

-This ability allows Vincent to channel his kidou through his Zanpakutou before casting it, increasing its power. When activated, various symbols on the ribbon begin to glow as the spell is channeled into the weapon. Which symbols light up seems to depend on what exactly the spell being amplified does. When used on its own, Sessei adds an additional 25% cost to the kidou channeled, and increases the output of the spell by 25% (damage, duration, etc). If used in succession with Kinben, the kidou channeled costs and additional 50% and increases the ouput of the kidou by 50%. This ability may only be used once per turn, and cannot be used in conjunction with Mahoubai (double-cast).

 

[Shadowwind]

For Hisao Adachi of the 10th






Shikai: Gakuryoku (Scholarship)

Form: The constantly released form of Gakuryoku takes on a instrument of necessity for its master, a walking cane. Its 3ft tall appearing to be made of bamboo, if looked at closely hundreds of small runes decorate the cane, its durability is on par with a standard zanpakutou.

Manifestation: Gakuryoku’s world is a place thrived on the mind, where Hisao’s lack of physical abilities don’t matter, an infinite library. The shelves and rows of books seem to go on forever tended to by an army of small shadows. Gakuryoku himself is a Kitsune, dull grey and as old as his master. He wears a scholar’s robe with an old cloth wrapped around his eyes. When annoyed, or to point out a specific point, Gakuryoku is able to transform his shape into a human, strikingly similar to Hisao himself. The spirit will speak plainly and tends to point out the side of an argument that its master likes to ignore.

Ability: Kyokukan(Siphon)

The single ability of Hisao’s zanpakutou is constantly active. The old’s man reliance on kidou to defend himself has caused his weapon to be able to draw off energy from the very demon arts its master is so dependent upon. Whenever a kidou or kidou-like(i.e. cero, etc.) effect is used within Hisao’s sight 10% of the reiatsu cost of the spell is taken and stored within Gakuryoku. This energy can only be used for the sole purpose of casting more spells and does not take away from the actual damage of the kidou used. The total amount of stored reiatsu in Gakuryoku cannot exceed more than 50% of Hisao’s kidou stat and is always drained first when a spell is cast.

 

[Hase the Storm]

User: Rashii Bou of the 7th

Name: Panthera Leon – The Legendary Beast King

Manifestation: Panthera Leon is the Legendary Beast King of the Jungle, is a mysterious beast that even Rashii has only seen glimpses of.

The Beast King

Release Command: Reclaim your throne, Panthera Leon!

Released Form: As Rashii speaks the release command he simultaneously splits his sword into two equal halves. As the blades split they begin to wrap around his hands. The blades began to glow blood red as they solidify their selves into their final form.

End Product

Ability: Roar

When Rashii projects his monstrous yell, everyone in a 10 yard radius of his view, loses 10% of their Hohou a turn for three turns. After those three turns that person’s Hohou affected by the roar will return back to normal. Roar cannot stack with itself, but can with Bakudou.

Ability: Fist of the Beast King

The FotBK is a combination of Hohou & Hakuda attack. This punch is Rashii most prized ability. When Rashii throws this punch from either fist it looks like a lion’s head is flying toward you. FotBK puts a strain on your body so it can only be used three times regardless of which fist. This ability cost 15% of his reiatsu per turn.

 

[louhi]

Saso -

the range for the barrier is too big, either restrict it down to something like a 5% - 8% range or else you need to limit the number of times it can be used in battle to a low number. also are the walls just big rectangles or can they encircle something, and how tall are they, etc? the attack is fine


Shunsen -

The clone ability is fine but the barrier doesnt work. Read the section about barriers in the FAQ, or else just drop the barrier entirely and buff the first ability for a more distinctive kai

Beaks -

This is approvable as it is but moot says you don't really want it like this because the strength of it is seperating the opponent from battle but the final attack just negates it. The attack is okay but its not actually good at what it's good at. Shouldnt the memory deleting augment the final attack? etc. Also keep in mind if you get something approved, you would need to spend a spec point to add a third attack. Moot also says to talk to him in IM when hes not busy and not to waste everyone else's time by making him review it a bunch of times. Or, if you really want it this way, its approved.

Hiren - approved
also moot says he likes it. lol


Sing - wah...... wah....... *shock* approved

Finny - tthe ability and first 2 attacks are fine but the 3rd one doesn't quite work. the calculations are kind of annoying and it's not likely to actually gain levels. also the potential of making a guy suicide attack or team kill attack is kind of instant win if it does happen. the idea probably needs to be reworked


Cheese - approved

Shad - needs to be more specific on what 'kidou like abilities' are. are you including things from kai attacks, quincy arrows, etc? or just kidou, cero, and gintou?


Hase - a debuff must always be based off of your own stats, and can't be auto hit in shikai. 15% is too high for a shikai as well.

Nero - umm you edited this after we did the review so i'll just skip it until next time.

 

[Shun]

Third Attempt
Edit: I made it into two abilities. If it's one, please tell me, and I'll change it.

Release Level: Shikai

Name: Momentos

Release phrase: (陳列 題材 ) Show them the truth, Momentos

Manifestation:
The manifested spirit in Shunsen's zanpakutou, Momentos, resembles an ordinary male child. This boy possesses gray hair and prefers dressing himself in a jumpsuit or a jacket followed by jogging pants. His colors are very plain mainly white and gray. The only distinguishable feature that is different from everything else are his eyes. They appear to be cat-like and they have a light green tint. If Momentos happens to wear a jacket, he usually tears some of the fabric near the upper part of his sleeve. Of course, this is just his way of fashion and displaying it.

Release form:
During shikai, Shunsen‘s zanpakutou has the same form of a katana. The only feature that is different is the design. Now, there is a blue linen cotton attached to the hilt as well as one dragon crest on each ends of the handle. These crests have amethyst gems on them that is similar to Shunsen's hair color which is a semi-dark shade of purple. There are also japanese characters on the surface of the blade that stand for, “Good fortune.”

Ability:

Two abilities: Kuro-n (cloning): Since the manifested spiritual being within his zanpakutou is a child and Shunsen's own physical appearance resembles that of a teenage boy, they have many things in common. By performing this kai, they both become “one” or interconnected. This ability benefit’s the young third division soul reaper because he can create two solid clones of himself. Each of these clones hold the same katana as Shunsen. This costs 600 of Shunsen’s reiatsu per turn while this ability is in effect. These clones last three turns maximum. This kai can only be used twice per battle.

Limit Break- If Shunsen has both of the clones surround an enemy, they jump up into the air. As they plummet to the ground, they rotate around like a drill and release a volley of slashes (can range from 2-4 slashes from each clone) at the opponent. [Costs 1150 reiatsu each time it is used]

 

[Shadowwind]

Shikai: Gakuryoku (Scholarship)

Form: The constantly released form of Gakuryoku takes on a instrument of necessity for its master, a walking cane. Its 3ft tall appearing to be made of bamboo, if looked at closely hundreds of small runes decorate the cane, its durability is on par with a standard zanpakutou.

Manifestation: Gakuryoku’s world is a place thrived on the mind, where Hisao’s lack of physical abilities don’t matter, an infinite library. The shelves and rows of books seem to go on forever tended to by an army of small shadows. Gakuryoku himself is a Kitsune, dull grey and as old as his master. He wears a scholar’s robe with an old cloth wrapped around his eyes. When annoyed, or to point out a specific point, Gakuryoku is able to transform his shape into a human, strikingly similar to Hisao himself. The spirit will speak plainly and tends to point out the side of an argument that its master likes to ignore.

Ability: Kyokukan(Siphon)

The single ability of Hisao’s zanpakutou is constantly active. The old’s man reliance on kidou to defend himself has caused his weapon to be able to draw off energy from the very demon arts its master is so dependent upon. Whenever a kidou, cero, or gintou is used within Hisao’s sight 10% of the reiatsu cost of the spell is taken and stored within Gakuryoku. This energy can only be used for the sole purpose of casting more spells and does not take away from the actual damage of the kidou used. The total amount of stored reiatsu in Gakuryoku cannot exceed more than 50% of Hisao’s kidou stat and is always drained first when a spell is cast.

 

[youngsaso]

Spec Point

Your Orders Are As Follows - Summer 2008 PM: Open Collab all 13thBringing Stratagy To Orders - Summer 2008 PM: Collab with Sormeki and Lil_Shiro

Shikai Resubmission

Attack: Ishikabe – Stone Wall

With Ishikabe, Shoju can form square walls forged from sturdy earth and mentally control them to either defend against an attack or trap an enemy within a cube for a cost ranging from 5% to 8% reiatsu per wall. A maximum of six walls can be formed at one time; the size of these walls is determined by the size that Shoju wants when he summons them but, can not exceed eight by eight feet. Each wall can withstand the equivalent in damage to the amount of reiatsu put into it. Any form of attack that surpasses this amount obliterates the wall without any decrease in potency, continuing through basically unobstructed.

Attack: Wakazemaru - Slashing Wind Circle

Violent winds begin to form a sphere with an eight foot diameter that contains multiple currents of extremely sharp air currents; anything caught within this orb will be severely lacerated. The circular technique takes mere seconds to form near the tip of Shoju’s zanpakutou and when projected, ceases motion upon impacting the target. The attack sustains itself for around ten seconds before dissipating. This technique costs 7% reiatsu per use.

 

[Nero]

Submission for Shi Kai

Name:
Vardoger

Spiritual Manifestation:
The actual form of the spirit has never been revealed to Nero, but its realm is simply a slab of marble-tiled land, just wide enough to contain four towering mirrors that stand as if to represent north, south, east and west. Bright red curtains are also found slightly ahead of the mirrors, their beginnings too high up in the darkness above, leaving Nero wondering where they even came from.

Release Phrase:
Curtains up

Released Form:
Upon release, the zanpakutou renovates into a sinister-looking dagger. The spear-point blade is curved at four dimensions in a wave, while the dark black hilt completes the nefarious theme, with a lifelike miniature snake twisting and coiling about it.

Ability – Doppelkiss:
Note: I'll be keeping track of the slot occupants in my profile.
As long as any part of Vardoger (even its sheath), comes into contact with a target, Nero is able to permanently fill 1 of his 4 Doppelkiss slots with a complete copy of the target’s identity which includes its face, form, voice, movements, and reiatsu signature.

There can only be one occupant per slot memorized at a single time.

In the event that all 4 slots are already occupied and Nero wants a different Doppelkiss occupant to fill a slot, an occupant of his choice will be chosen to relinquish its place for the new one.

Nero may evoke any of the Doppelkiss slots at a cost of 200 reiatsu and assume the identity of the slot's occupant.

 

[Beaks]

Revised after talking with the all-knowing Mootikins. =)

Bankai-Tenkei Yorozu No Shiraha (Heaven's Wrath of Ten Thousand White Feathers)​

Appearance: After invoking Bankai, Tsubaki disappears in a violent squall of gilded light and white hued feathers. After the transformation completes, Tsubaki is clad head to toe in a white Shihakushou. Her normal katana has been replaced by a seven-branched-sword roughly five feet in length, devoid of any color save for white. The scouring aura normally contained with Shiraha swirls around the newly released blade in wisps of energy.

Ability: Suishoku (Fading Color) An evolved form of Shikisaicho Setsu, Tenkei Yoruzu No Shiraha's ability encompasses a 30m radius around Tsubaki and her foe. This ability once again reduces all matter within the area of effect to black and white. Any other individuals caught in the radius will be forcibly ejected, and will not be able to interact with either individual inside the effect until it is dispelled. This ability costs 10% of Tsubaki's reiatsu.

Ability: Henshoku (Change of Color) As Suishoku activates, Tsubaki is able to activate Henshoku for a cost of 5% for 3 rounds. When activated, Tsubaki chooses between black and white. This choice effects her outward appearance, turning her to the chosen hue. While Tsubaki is white, all projectile attacks that would be turned white from Suishoku are reduced in damage by 50%, and while black all projectiles that would be turned black are reduced in damage by 50%. Conversely, if Tsubaki is hit by an opposite color the damage will be increased to 125%, forcing her to choose carefully while activating this ability.

Attack: Heimaku (Falling Curtain) Once a foe sets foot within Suishoku every aspect of their body and soul is permeated by the abilities of Tsubaki's weapon. After extensive training with Shiraha, Tsubaki has learned to obliterate not just enemies, but the distractions and obstructions in one's mind that detract from the fight itself. By expending 1% of her Reiatsu for every strike, Heimaku wipes away one memory or personality aspect of her foe. This ability is limited to memories and personality, and cannot wipe away fundamentals such as one's name or allegiance. The loss of these traits is temporary and restricted by Suishoku's radius. Any foe who either dispells or otherwise nullifies Suishoku has all of the erased memories returned at a rate of three (memories or traits) per round.

Attack: Nagurikorosu (To Strike Dead) Tsubaki's final strike costs 25% of her total reiatsu, and consists of a frighteningly fast downward blow. In addition, any erased memories or quirks are violently thrust back into the mind of Tsubaki's foe, doing an additional 1% damage each up to a cap of 5%. On a downside, after this attack lands Tsubaki is totally open to counterattack, demanding that this technique only be used when all other means fail. Nagurikorosu is only usable after a bare minimum of three strikes from Heimaku, and due to the straining energies involved may only be used once per battle.

 

[Several Zombies]

Now I don't know if I did this right; and I'm still confused about the point at which AH's actually submit a release (as is everyone else it seems), but regardless, here it is.


Initial Discovery:

Form: Saiseki Toku - "Hide of Broken Stone"

Masato's abilities manifest as a a mass of jagged, dark grey material that he can extend to cover his entire form. The material itself is like a second skin, and is highly flexible despite it's rock-like appearance.


Ability: Shouheki - "Barrier"

Masato's ability uses his own Reiatsu to draw in and compress Spirit Particles into a dense, tangible form around himself. By focusing, he can control where and when the ability manifests as opposed to totally engulfing himself in the shield, thus conserving his energy. The compressed Spirit Particles are highly resilient; capable of stopping bullets and blades in their tracks, as well as providing Masato a great degree of protection against various other things. Though tough, the shield is not indestructible. Enough force on a particular point may crack the material, and even shatter the shield in its entirety. Should this happen, Masato must expend 5% of his Reiatsu to gather and reform the particles. While in his released state, Masato's natural strength and endurance are greatly enhanced.

Visual

Basically I'm just gonna have it appear on my PC's arm to block an attack breifly with the ability above for the 'unwitting release'. That's it LOL.

EDIT: I guess it doesn't matter now that I've reached 1k Harmony >.>

 

[FogOverLondon]

Okay, thanks Mewt~

Shikai Submission

Name: "Bein Mala" (Bone Grinder)

Form: A large, heavy sledge hammer-ax hybrid. Connected to the two foot long wooden handle is leather stripping that wraps down to a loop at the base.

Sketch...it's bigger than I thought sry

Ability: (all thanks to Mewt)

"Slitna" (Break)

The ability to determine the "weakness", "critical point"or "soft spot" in a body or structure. Everything has a physical weakness, a place that if hit will usually cause massive damage or leave an opening for a critical hit. This applies to anything with a physical or spiritual-phsycial makeup such as someone's body, buildings, objects or landscape. This is a constant ability as long as he's released so no cost associated.

 

[Wolfie32]

Nariko Tanaka
True Awakening

Nariko is a ticking time bomb. The longer she goes without releasing; her body will show the effects. Her hair will get brittle and frizzy; her skin becomes dry, blotchy, and cracked. The woman who holds her beauty in such regard becomes ugly.

The only way to regain her looks is to do the thing she has hated since she first got her ability. She needs to completely surrender to her ability and when she does, destructive things happen. Nariko leaves her physical body and becomes pure fire and energy, unable to touch anything without destroying it. That includes attacks against her in her ethereal form. Physical attacks on her will simply pass right through her. However she leaves her body behind which is completely defenceless.

In order to maintain this state, it costs Nariko 5% reiatsu per round. After which she is forced to return to her body or lose the ability entirely to return to her original form. Nariko must also stay out of her body for at least five rounds since that is the minimum time it takes for her body to regenerate. This regeneration will bring Nariko back her looks which also means she will forever look like she’s 19. It should be noted that this regeneration only heals the degeneration her abilities have her on body. It in no way heals attacks she takes on in this state.

 

[Hase the Storm]

User: Rashii Bou of the 7th

Name: Panthera Leon – The Legendary Beast King

Manifestation: Panthera Leon is the Legendary Beast King of the Jungle, is a mysterious beast that even Rashii has only seen glimpses of.

Release Command: Reclaim your throne, Panthera Leon!

Released Form: As Rashii speaks the release command he simultaneously splits his sword into two equal halves. As the blades split they begin to wrap around his hands. The blades began to glow blood red as they solidify their selves into their final form.

End Product

Ability: Roar

When Rashii projects his monstrous yell, his hakuda stat raises by 7% for two turns at the cost of 7% Rashii's reiatsu. After those two turns Roar's affect cannot be used for two turns.

Ability: Fist of the Beast King

The FotBK is a Hohou & Hakuda stat-based straight punch attack. A reiatsu in the shape of a lion's head glows from Rashii's fist. The reiatsu causes no external damage but causes a short electrical charge internally on the nerve cells on the skin, muscles and bone, causing a loss of feeling and numbness for a turn. Rashii's footing is everything when utilizing FotBK, which causes Rashii be within a few inches from his opponent after the attack. FotBK has a cost of 8% reiatsu per use.

 

[ururu_blue]

Aight, this is the kai that Mootles and I worked out in place of my nerfeded kai:

Uraryuu
(Reverse Flow)​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Form: [/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Uraryuu is a katana in unreleased form. The blade measures 26” in length, and the hilt is 12” long. The grip is covered in white rayskin, while the guard is oval-shaped and imprinted with a wave pattern.[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Shikai
[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Omoiokotte, Uraryuu [/FONT]
[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif] (Awaken in a dream, Uraryuu)[/FONT]
​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Form:[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Upon release, Uraryuu becomes a tanto. The blade's length is 12 inches, while the handle is 6 inches long. There is no hand guard in this form.[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Ability:[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Forms a bubble 3 ft in diameter in which time is stopped for 15 seconds. Once the bubble is anchored to a wound, Moira can use multiple chiyudo within that time period. Cost of use is 1000 reiatsu.[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Ban Kai[/FONT]
天地の 裏流
[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Tenchi no Uraryuu [/FONT]
[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif] (Reverse Flow of the Heavens)[/FONT]
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[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Form: [/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Upon release of her Ban Kai, approximately 100 spirit threads emerge from Moira. They can extend to a length of 20 feet and can be used in various ways, including gripping objects and people or providing a stable surface for her to stand upon. All the while, Uraryuu remains in tanto form to better accommodate her preferred fighting style.
[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Attack:[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Teishou (Abeyance)[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Forms a bubble 12 ft in diameter in which time is stopped for 30 seconds. After anchoring it over the injured person, Moira can cast multiple chiyudo within that time period. Cost of use is 2000 reiatsu. [/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Attack: [/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Kishou Suiageru (Damage Syphon)[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Using her spirit threads, Moira can reach out (20 foot diameter) [/FONT][FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]to touch the injuries of wounded allies and transfer the damage onto herself. Cost of use is ???[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Attack: [/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Taikou (Deterioration)[/FONT]​

[FONT=Trebuchet MS, sans-serif]Moira touches a wound with one of her threads and anchors a fist-sized bubble over it. Within the bubble, her manipulation of time moves forward at a rate where healthy tissue can deteriorate and die, leaving her foe with a wound that won't heal. Cost of use is 1000 reiatsu.[/FONT]​

 

[Fallen_Angel]

Release Level: Shikai
Name: Shiruba
Release phrase: Scratch and Scar

Manifestation: Shiruba is named after the colour of her fur, silver. She shines brightly in the mind of Tenchuu, giving him her warmth and strength. Her golden-yellow eyes give no emotion, but convey the same beauty as her coat, which shines brightly in the sun of Tenchuu's inner world.

Shiruba

Release form: Tenchuu has a black glove on each hand, with black ribbons going up his arms over his sleeves. There is a weapon on each glove: on the left hand metal claws become attached to Tenchuu's fingers, making it appear that he has long, sharp tendrils; and on the right hand there are three blades that are attached to his knuckles, shorter in length to the claws on his left hand. On the end of the middle blade is a small hole, used for the 'Silver Bolt' ability.

Shikai

Forgive the poor splicing

Ability: Silver Bolt
The small hole in Tenchuu's right-hand middle blade can fire a silver bolt of Kidou similar in strength to Hadou #8. Because of the size of the holes it is fired from, the energy is compressed into a long, straight beam of concentrated energy, the bolt is stronger and more deadly than it may appear, and capable of piercing straight through someone's body with a tiny pin-prick hole.
Cost: 75 Kidou theshold / 10 Reiatsu per shot
Weakness: The destructive power and arc of fire is pretty low, as this is a precision shot technique, which in the heat of battle can be difficult to use.

Ability: Wolf's Speed
The ribbons around Tenchuu's arms grow in length and wrap themselves around his legs as well as arms. This takes a single turn. Then Tenchuu gains 10% Hohou. This can last up to a maximum of three turns
Cost: Tenchuu spends a base of 5% Reiatsu per turn, however the % of Reiatsu increases by 2% every turn. (e.g. Turn 1 Tenchuu spends 5% Reiatsu, Turn 2 Tenchuu spends 7% of the remaining Reiatsu)
Weakness: Very Reiatsu draining for the bonus it gives. Usually used in a stealth or escape situation.

 

[blademaster3090]

thanks to will and moot for helping

SHIKAI : GARUDA​

Release Phrase : Soar, Garuda.

Form : Haaji's hilt turns brown and feathery, while his white blade remains the same in length. However, it reduces in weight, and a long black chain connects the hilt of the sword to a hard snakeskin glove, worn by Haaji on his left hand.

Spirit : Garuda is a half-eagle, half-snake, heavily inspired by the Hindu mythological creature of the same name. Garuda looks almost exactly like an eagle, except for its tail, which is a serpent. The two have very different personalities, the snake usually the quiet one, giving useful tips and advice only when he needs it the most, and the eagle being more talkative, and butting into Haaji's daily matters unexpectedly.

Abilities (mad props to will hehe):

1.) Tiruppu : Haaji, for only once in a fight, will be able to reflect back any kidou which is less than 75% of his Kidou stat at the sender, using his glove. He pays the cost of the kidou spell cast at him, when he uses this ability.

2.) Navuru : By paying an additional cost of 15% of the kidou cost of the spell he casts, Haaji can steer any projectile kidou he casts at an opponent. Spells such as Kireha would be unaffected though.

 

[louhi]

Shunsen -

the second attack isn't an attack, just something you can do. You dont need a seperate attack to be able to do that. Keep in mind that what you pay is all the damage your clones can take, and remove that second attack, and you are approved.


Shad - approved


Saso - approved


Nero - approved (thank you for not adding a random attack and/or barrier. really!)


Beaks -

mootiman: (10:59:25 AM) when he activates his bk
mootiman: (10:59:33 AM) he needs to choose which attacks are black and which are white
mootiman: (10:59:37 AM) like the enemies attacks
mootiman: (10:59:42 AM) for the purposes of that one ability
mootiman: (10:59:53 AM) so that they wont be mad if they get their attacks reducedd
mootiman: (11:00:32 AM) on the 3rd attack
mootiman: (11:00:39 AM) the link is kind of weak
mootiman: (11:00:49 AM) i'd prefer if the 2nd attack links to the 3rd better b/c its so ripped
mootiman: (11:01:08 AM) so like have it start at a lower amount and have the hits increase the damage by a higher amount
mootiman: (11:01:13 AM) so the linkage is strongar


Lambo - you misspelled physical once, but other than that, approved


Wolfie - approved


Hase - you dont need to pay for or have a time limit on a stat boost.
The attack is confusing still; what do you mean by hohou and hakuda based? Is it because it involves hohou to run toward the guy and hak to punch him or ? The bit about footing is kind of confusing too.

Roo - approved with changes:

specify the bubble can only be formed on an injury and that the only thing she can do is cast chiyudo in it. same with bk

the damage siphon doesn't need a cost.

fallen -

same with hase, a stat boost doesnt need a cost or time limit. It's not really the best ability to have, though. The attack is weak because it can never get stronger than it is, with the cost that you gave it. its approvable that way but you probably will end up wanting to change it later on... you can talk to me in IM about kai if you want since i am your captain and all.


blad misty - 1st one should probably cost more because it reflects as well. its also somewhat flawed as it only works against shinigami. the 2nd one is fine.

 

[Hase the Storm]

User: Rashii Bou of the 7th

Name: Panthera Leon – The Legendary Beast King

Manifestation: Panthera Leon is the Legendary Beast King of the Jungle, is a mysterious beast that even Rashii has only seen glimpses of.

Release Command: Reclaim your throne, Panthera Leon!

Released Form: As Rashii speaks the release command he simultaneously splits his sword into two equal halves. As the blades split they begin to wrap around his hands. The blades began to glow blood red as they solidify their selves into their final form.

End Product

Ability: Roar

When Rashii projects his monstrous yell, his hakuda stat raises by 7%.

Ability: Fist of the Beast King

The FotBK is a straight punch attack. A reiatsu in the shape of a lion's head glows from Rashii's fist. The reiatsu causes no external damage but causes a short electrical charge internally on the nerve cells on the skin, muscles and bone, causing a loss of feeling and numbness for a turn. FotBK has a cost of 8% reiatsu per use.