Warmth

[Luhy]

Starry-eyed and hypnotized,
crimson despair, hearts unfair...
promise upon promise,
sweet, sweet, promise...

Looking towards the sky,
thinking why, oh why~
The winds soft kiss,
crushing me with moment's bliss...

Trapped inside the cage
of my own torn heart...
Where is my other half?
The one who holds the key?

I thought I found you,
I still think it's you...
My heart beats wildly
with thoughts of you...

Sealing my eyes,
smile on my face...
Seeing you here with me,
my heart begins to race...​

 

[melBoyd~]

*thinks of smtg diff to say* hm, the font is nice XP kk, another beautiful poem u've written here, the tone for this one at least when i read it, feels very light. maybe because u used symbols like 'wind', 'sky' and 'bliss' thus this is my fav stanza >.>

Looking towards the sky,
thinking why, oh why~
The winds soft kiss,
crushing me with moment's bliss...

and also the third stanza; we dont really own our heart coz there's always someone else that will open it up for us. maybe like bringing the best out of each one of use xP
that's how i interpret it ;p also the stanza reminds me of aizen XD...key..

 

[Luhy]

lol, the kings key to Inoues heart ;o it's okay if you say the same things as long as its honest ;p I like hearing what you have to say whenever I write... makes me want to write mroe just to get comments from you ;3 I kinda liked the stanza you quoted too... I thought adding some Oxymorons would be fun... the winds soft kiss... but it crushes you with bliss... XP glad you liked it ^^