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Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Be] Week 187: Quod Qualitas de Purgatorio by Dysney.

Quod Qualitas de Purgatorio 1626 Ignis lay still, holding her breath, afraid to open her eyes. Her death had been quick, painless compared to all the fighting that preceded it. The enlil wouldn't have chosen this end for herself; it was far too plain to be a nameless casualty even in a war. She...

I promised I would give feedback, sorry it's so late ^^; I enjoyed the collab, though some of the dialogue does flow awkwardly (Will already explained this so I won't go into detail there). Don't be afraid to splice turns. I like how you emphasize what kind of person Arrento is through his...

Ignis of Animi (33.5k Vigor) Art of Ingenarius -Skilled Calling of Fundibuli -Skilled Calling of Pythonis -Skilled Way of Pistolii -Adept School of Aquila -Adept School of Occultus -Adept Discipline of Pugilis -Adept Feats Familiar Feat: Patronus ex Silva [Unique Ability Slot] Personal...

Now that we don't have weekly grades I have a few questions: Do we all have a single latens pool to spend on either character? Is vigor still the combination of latens and the total cost of skills? Does the single latens pool apply to the vigor of both characters or is it evenly split??

Many apologies for the lateness. Mwn/Fin Sumptuous Arrangements 164/164 + 75 faction for each of you This was a good collab in that your turns played off each other well. There were a few spots where I would have rearranged paragraphs to make the narration flow more smoothly. Other than that...

Ignis shrieked when Cora was battered by the burning lasers, talons digging into her palms and making them bleed. She stood, frozen on the spot -- when had she gotten to her feet? Despite the frantic commands from Ignis, the drone fell from the air and crashed into the bloody, ice-slicked...

Iudicium I Berri, I enjoyed the start of your collab. You did a decent job of world building and fleshing out Bas, even though he played a minor role in the overall story. Mentioning his routine and referencing his habits made him feel like a real person instead of a flat plot device. Your...

The sudden heat made Ignis panic; she was going to burn again. Her pupils swallowed her irises, though it did little to help her see through the darkness. Breath catching in her throat, she whispered a prayer to Aquila and jumped. Her legs folded beneath her before propelling her body out of the...

Pressing Concerns 1439 words Dys as Dianette Will as Tirien The Conexus sergeant strode away from the three women quickly, lips firmly pressed together. Her bright pink cartilage, pulled back into a braid, swept back and forth across the back of her shoulders in time with her strides. Despite...

The women saw the dark shapes above and for a moment, they just watched. Dianette cursed, Laurel frowned, Ignis trembled. “Let's move!” Laurel commanded. Their platform rose swiftly, curling protectively around the women. The vines shifted to allow them to see outside and shoot at any...

Once they neared the top of the mountain, Ignis sought out familiar faces. From her perch on a floating nest of vines, sticks and leaves. She'd stuck close to Aeria during their ascent, preferring ranged attacks to getting up close and personal. Her cloak was ripped in several places and smeared...

Grade: 169 + 60FB = 229

The spurii's shouts went unnoticed at first, not quite breaking through the din. Then, an assistant healer approached them quickly. “What--” she didn't even finish her question as the blue robed woman caught sight of the woman on the ground. “Oh Castus, that's her!” The laicar woman's face...

“Can it be two?” Ignis asked, yawning again. “We'll need plenty of rest to deal with Toast and other demons to come.” Amicus rustled contentedly as Aeria stroked him and crawled into her lap. “Traitor,” the enlil mumbled half-heartedly. She curled herself around Aeria. “We should nap,”...

Ignis wrinkled her nose and wiped her foot off in the dirt as best she could. “Gross,” she muttered. The avian briefly wondered why Aelflead had to be so crude. Amicus growled, but calmed when his partner stroked his leaves soothingly. Her friend's response made her feel a little better. “It...

Ignis scooted closer to her friend so she could lean on Aeria's shoulder. She used what was left of her sleeve to stifle a wide-mouthed yawn. “I'm fine,” she lied through her teeth, “just a bit tired.” The enlil chose to not to respond to Aelflead immediately in favor of closing her eyes, a...

The aftermath of battle was ugly. The corpses, the scent of blood growing old mixed with excrement and charred flesh, the mutilated survivors, and the pain of her own injuries was too much for Ignis. Somewhere along the line, she had decided it was all just a scene from a graphic war novel, even...

Week 151 (137+100) Week 153 (182+150) Week 165 (1028+100) =1697 1128 to Ignis, 569 to Harper Ignis of Animi (Prominent) Vigour: 22,295 Latens: 3,745 Art of Ingenarius-Skilled Calling of Fundibuli-Skilled Calling of Pythonis-Skilled Way of Pistolii-Adept School of Aquila-Adept...

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