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Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 345: Mangled Endeavor by Beaks.

A great number of things happened at once. The blacksmith's hammer came racing in a wide arc towards the runner's skull, causing Chase to move more on instinct and reflex than coherent thought. An awkward step-and-a-half backwards brought the runner hip to hearth with the oversized man's forge...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 340: Lineal Scratch by Beaks.

The morning light that was slowly building outside falls to a dim ambiance inside the Happy Hammer, the flickering glow of forgelight waxes and wanes while competing for dominance against the thin lines of exterior light that border the shuttered windows. Others might have considered the...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 339: Knot Howling by Beaks.

There was a quote Chase had read once, saying something to the effect of how a morning unfolded being a sign of how the entire day was going to go. It was a pretty little sentiment, with the beginning and conclusion wrapped up neatly and tied with a ribbon of prose. It was also a clear sign that...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 338: Justified Qualms by Beaks.

Mornings in the Emerald Jewel had always been something Chase had come to appreciate over the years, and almost love in a strange sort of way. Merchants were opening storefronts and placing displays that intruded as carefully as possible into the walkways. Each one was designed to catch the eye...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 336: In Trepidation by Beaks.

Three hours would have to be enough. There was too much to prepare and too many angles of approach to map and the crux of this situation was that there was too much to plan out and three damn hours of sleep was going to have to be enough. This repeated mantra was helping to collect their...

I appreciate the feedback, and will do my best to keep the spirit of the Lupanar in mind when I use it in the future. The Sharpe incident is detailed in my first chapter, Event Cascade.

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 332: Hazard Pay by Beaks.

It had taken nearly an hour for the water circling the drain to turn back to anything resembling clean. Sewage and rot and filth had come off the runner's body in long and revolting clumps, taking direct assault by both the water and Chase's feet to squish and scatter it enough to fall into the...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 329: Granted, Not Given by Beaks.

The storm drains and sewers running beneath Terminus were wonderful and dangerous things. Wonderful in the sense that anyone with a mind to could effectively disappear from life as a whole, and live and work a sustainable kind of life without ever having to deal with the troubles of the topside...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 328: Faulted Reasoning by Beaks.

"Aaaand of course they're waiting for me there." Chase's eyes were barely ventured over the edge of the shack's uneven roof, but it was more than enough to see that the Sharpes had been kind enough to send some hired help to await the runner at their home. The thoughts and plans buzzed around...

Username: Beaks Character Name: Chase (Formerly Darius) Tincliffe (They/Them) Age: 19 Race: Laicar (Terran) If Spurii, Select Bloodlines: N/A Racial Trait: Laicar - Adrenaline Rush (Enhanced Run Speed) Persona: Chase has built their reputation of competence and dependability over the course...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Lr] Week 327: Event Cascade by Beaks.

This was supposed to be the moment. This was supposed to be the moment where the strain and pain wracking their muscles gave way to that moment of raw bliss. The moment where all the aches and pains fell away and there was nothing but the touch of the wind, and the deafening euphoria as the...