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Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 432: DREAMS OF THE WORLD WEARY - ACT I, CHAPTER II: The Beginning by K3.

Chapter I ACT I, CHAPTER II The Beginning A speck of blue stood amongst the expanse of a white-pebbled beach that stretched to infinity, the gently-rounded stones watched from above by a cloudless sky of silver-blue, lit by a sun that was not there. A fathomless ocean beyond approach, and...

As was promised. To begin with, the formatting work here helps take advantage of the medium in a wonderful way. Separating Edax's dialogue with color gives a straight-forward and easily-digestible way to understand that his words are not spoken aloud, and as such cannot be ignored or put out of...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 391: DREAMS OF THE WORLD WEARY - ACT I, CHAPTER I: The End by K3.

Prologue - Next Chapter ACT I, CHAPTER I The End Footsteps echoed in the dim half-light of a long-forgotten temple, its ruinous edifices long worn away by seawater that ran down its walls through cracked and pitted stone. Luminescent moss shrouded in curtains of overgrown seaflora lit the...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 303: Rust-Colored Skies, II by K3.

Rust-Colored Skies // The Endless Spark Chapter 3 // Chapter 1 (4250) Gewehr had always found the sounds of machinery soothing in troubling times. When his deft hands worked careful tools and slowly roused life into inert mechanisms, his mind was often plunged into a strange and wonderful...

Ante Omnia Armari: Approved Good flavor, very suitable for a character that excels in multiple types of weapons.

A character will be Joining the Main Forces and performing Sabotage.

My Rating: 8.5 / 10 Quick Impressions: A gripping story of non-sequitur madness that's only really held back by a lack of clarity and an over-abundance of stylistic work. The Good: + The dream-like state of things once the passage of time has been established adds wonderfully to the atmosphere...

My Rating: 7.5 / 10 Quick Impressions: It's very hard to juggle dissociation with genuine tension in a way that feels more unsettling than tedious. I'm very glad that you navigated that line. The Good: + 1st-person perspective is so underrated and challenging, great stuff to see you take that...

The Interview [For the record: I am Doctor Larry Steiner of the ▓▒▓▓▒▓ State Behavioral Health Clinic. This was my fifth interview with Patient 120497, name ▓▓▓ Davis. Mr. Davis' condition had improved admirably since his transfer from his previous facility, and had requested this interview...

11/10. This is art.

Oh hey guess what it's the angry one here to lay down some truth facts real quick. So hey, putting aside the dumbass spurii shit that's going around in circles for a bit, here's the deal with demvir: You're a regular Joe working in some backwoods nowhere. Or maybe you're an important person...

Annora Caestrum - Twilight of Rose Notus Virens - If You Still Believe Leidan Halbert - A Dragoon Killed in Action Caterva - Battle Theme 2

Grade: 200 + 20(Consec) = 220 + 75 = 295 Bleed: -74 (Annora)// +74 (Notus) Total Vigor: 21903 Annora Caestrum [/td] Vigor: 15,500 Latens: ---- Skills: Discipline of Militis (Adept) Discipline of Battuentis (Novice) Discipline of Contigeri (Novice) Discipline of Barbaris (Adept)...

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Grade: 885 Bleed: -2161 (Annora)// +2161 (Notus) Total Vigor: 21608 Annora Caestrum [/td] Vigor: 15,574 Latens: 74 Skills: Discipline of Militis (Adept) Discipline of Battuentis (Novice) Discipline of Contigeri (Novice) Discipline of Barbaris (Adept) Discipline of Pugilis (Novice)...

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Rust-Colored Skies Chapter Two (1000) The days aboard Mistral grow long during the rainy spring, and Captain Caterva's temper grows shorter in turn. Her cabin is the picture of military perfection. Her bed is made to perfection – a comfort that she partakes in as much for her own comport as...