GM Review Thread
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Hey will, just GM subbing a kai I subbed earlier. Anyway, I understand the kai staff comments and agree with why they denied it. It's more, I'm wondering if something like an improved clone kai could work in HD with the summoning rules. Instead of having one super giga-summon, would there be anyway to make more spammable clone+ summons work?
That is, instead of paying a large portion of your rei and a Bankai rei buff on it, be able to summon 10% of your reiatsu summons, which are easy to destroy but can be summoned in numbers. I was looking at more of an improved Ningyou Tuskaiken summon, where you'd pay in that say 10% and the summon would have X% of your stat as a single combat stat or a kidou stat. They would have a % cost, so they weren't instantly rei nuked the moment they were summoned by a soft breeze. The precent is lower at 10% (Even could lower it to 5%) because they're at least somewhat durable but still easily detonated.
I was thinking these summons, being easier to destroy and pretty much improved clone kidou could be allowed in both BK and SK. Here's a link to the kai. I have the feeling the numbers are waaaaay off, but just as a sort of example of what I was talking about.
Shun used to have a clone kai back in moots time, but the clones really didn't have stats or even a set amount of reiatsu and were indestructible so... that wasn't the best example haha.
That is, instead of paying a large portion of your rei and a Bankai rei buff on it, be able to summon 10% of your reiatsu summons, which are easy to destroy but can be summoned in numbers. I was looking at more of an improved Ningyou Tuskaiken summon, where you'd pay in that say 10% and the summon would have X% of your stat as a single combat stat or a kidou stat. They would have a % cost, so they weren't instantly rei nuked the moment they were summoned by a soft breeze. The precent is lower at 10% (Even could lower it to 5%) because they're at least somewhat durable but still easily detonated.
I was thinking these summons, being easier to destroy and pretty much improved clone kidou could be allowed in both BK and SK. Here's a link to the kai. I have the feeling the numbers are waaaaay off, but just as a sort of example of what I was talking about.
Shun used to have a clone kai back in moots time, but the clones really didn't have stats or even a set amount of reiatsu and were indestructible so... that wasn't the best example haha.
Kai info
Denied.
Consider that, on top of the five permanent, hard-to-destroy clones with 75% of one of her stats, Lucia can still summon the regular kidou clones.
The kidou itself is quite potent when used well. It allows a single attack at half of the caster's own strength. So it could serve as a distraction or as a way to get an extra hit in combat. There's also the Shade spell which allows a clone to cast a single spell.
Instead you have five minions who can each attack at nearly your own strength, can be three different styles, and use two spells if kidou-based.
The kidou has various limiting factors:
They can only attack once.
For each spell prepared, you only have one way to use it.
They take at least a few seconds to summon one.
They have a small fraction of your own capability.
They can only really be attacked once.
Taking out one limitation might be possible, but you took out all of them at the same time.
You want a spammable clone kai then reduce the effectiveness and the cost, compared to the kidou spells, and increase the numbers.
Consider that, on top of the five permanent, hard-to-destroy clones with 75% of one of her stats, Lucia can still summon the regular kidou clones.
The kidou itself is quite potent when used well. It allows a single attack at half of the caster's own strength. So it could serve as a distraction or as a way to get an extra hit in combat. There's also the Shade spell which allows a clone to cast a single spell.
Instead you have five minions who can each attack at nearly your own strength, can be three different styles, and use two spells if kidou-based.
The kidou has various limiting factors:
They can only attack once.
For each spell prepared, you only have one way to use it.
They take at least a few seconds to summon one.
They have a small fraction of your own capability.
They can only really be attacked once.
Taking out one limitation might be possible, but you took out all of them at the same time.
You want a spammable clone kai then reduce the effectiveness and the cost, compared to the kidou spells, and increase the numbers.
Alrighty. While looking over my BK, I saw that the representation dynamic wasn't really there. All Hare really had was his oak tree and not much else. Even that wasn't as awe-inspiring as I thought it looked in my head. So I'm hoping that the following changes to it can be made.
Sekiryoku Houshiki Xiezhi
New Sekiryoku Houshiki Xiezhi
Beaks
Wacky Woohoo Pizza Sadness Man
Time for the resident old fart of the RP to come up to the checkout and demand a refund.
Technique - Weight of Ten Thousand Sins
Description -
Weight Of Ten Thousand Sins
Feat Type: Unique
Feat Description: Upon engaging the foe she was sent to dispatch in Hueco Mundo, Tsubaki fell prey to a feigned weakness on the part of her opponent. Once the beast used the moment of confusion to immobilize her, one of the core pieces of the Hollow took possession of her right eye, forever tainting it with the toxic presence of the beast's malice.
Each round the eye is in effect the victim will begin to suffer hallucinations of sight and sound. This begins with a high pitched scratching sound that penetrates even the most resolved sense of concentration. As it progresses, some may witness those they love suffer horrible deaths, others may hear the screams and wails of forsaken women and children. Should the effects remain in play for 4 rounds or more the victim will begin to suffer increased paranoia, even to the extent of feeling unearthly creatures slithering and twisting around their limbs.
Each round this feat is active requires a cost of 1% of Tsubaki's Reiatsu to maintain. While powerful, the longest Tsubaki can keep this technique active is 7 rounds. Once this time limit is reached the power seals itself and is unusable for the remainder of the battle.
Reason for...holy shit purple...kay, reason for request for refund - Simply put, it gets ignored entirely, more so than people somehow standing up and discussing the recent cricket game when I'm dropping 120k pressure F*** bombs. I'm fine with folks riding the highway to the danger zone and continuing to stand/fight/etc with that much rei pressure being chucked about, but I'm not too keen on keeping this lame duck of a technique.
Requested Compensation (If Approved) - 1 Spec Point.
Technique - Weight of Ten Thousand Sins
Description -
Weight Of Ten Thousand Sins
Feat Type: Unique
Feat Description: Upon engaging the foe she was sent to dispatch in Hueco Mundo, Tsubaki fell prey to a feigned weakness on the part of her opponent. Once the beast used the moment of confusion to immobilize her, one of the core pieces of the Hollow took possession of her right eye, forever tainting it with the toxic presence of the beast's malice.
Each round the eye is in effect the victim will begin to suffer hallucinations of sight and sound. This begins with a high pitched scratching sound that penetrates even the most resolved sense of concentration. As it progresses, some may witness those they love suffer horrible deaths, others may hear the screams and wails of forsaken women and children. Should the effects remain in play for 4 rounds or more the victim will begin to suffer increased paranoia, even to the extent of feeling unearthly creatures slithering and twisting around their limbs.
Each round this feat is active requires a cost of 1% of Tsubaki's Reiatsu to maintain. While powerful, the longest Tsubaki can keep this technique active is 7 rounds. Once this time limit is reached the power seals itself and is unusable for the remainder of the battle.
Reason for...holy shit purple...kay, reason for request for refund - Simply put, it gets ignored entirely, more so than people somehow standing up and discussing the recent cricket game when I'm dropping 120k pressure F*** bombs. I'm fine with folks riding the highway to the danger zone and continuing to stand/fight/etc with that much rei pressure being chucked about, but I'm not too keen on keeping this lame duck of a technique.
Requested Compensation (If Approved) - 1 Spec Point.
We might not be using spec points for much longer, but if you want, you can have this refunded.
Haven't you attempted it only once, in the mass confusion of the Espada threads?
Eidolon
Murderface Murderface
With the removal of stat kais, (hurray, I shot myself in the knee) this is no longer a relevant feat for Theron. I'd like to resubmit another in its feat.
[Eternal Hunger]
Whenever Theron applies a reduction to an opponent's combat stat, he gains an amount equal to half that reduction to his own primary combat stat, for the same duration. This does not stack from the same ability applied twice, simply refreshing the duration, but does add when different means of a reduction are used.
[Eternal Hunger]
Whenever Theron applies a reduction to an opponent's combat stat, he gains an amount equal to half that reduction to his own primary combat stat, for the same duration. This does not stack from the same ability applied twice, simply refreshing the duration, but does add when different means of a reduction are used.
Shadowwind
Araevis' Lead Ecologist
Appealing a decision~
[ Spiegel] - "Looking Glass"
Normally a Quincy must divide their shuuhaku pool evenly among all the arrows they fire, Spiegel is the exception to rule. After paying 2500 reiatsu, the Quincy draws back one shot which when fired splits into the max amount of possible arrows the quincy can fire. One of these shots contains the bulk of the used shuuhaku, each other arrow contains only 1 shuuhaku to give them spiritual form. The true arrow in volley exhibits properties of the Adlerauge technique, however it will track up to two deviations from the original arrow path as it attempts to hit its target.
Requirements: 10,000 Kyuuzu
Ok so for the above, considering even a 20k rei quincy using their final release would only have a Shuuhaku pool of 2400, and I wanted this to be more of a trick shot rather then a finisher (thus something you'll want to use multiple times in a fight) I think essentually giving the ability a 1 turn cooldown where you can't fire arrows is a good trade off for what amounts to a trick shot.
Relevent Stuff
Normally a Quincy must divide their shuuhaku pool evenly among all the arrows they fire, Spiegel is the exception to rule. After paying 2500 reiatsu, the Quincy draws back one shot which when fired splits into the max amount of possible arrows the quincy can fire. One of these shots contains the bulk of the used shuuhaku, each other arrow contains only 1 shuuhaku to give them spiritual form. The true arrow in volley exhibits properties of the Adlerauge technique, however it will track up to two deviations from the original arrow path as it attempts to hit its target.
Requirements: 10,000 Kyuuzu
Ok so for the above, considering even a 20k rei quincy using their final release would only have a Shuuhaku pool of 2400, and I wanted this to be more of a trick shot rather then a finisher (thus something you'll want to use multiple times in a fight) I think essentually giving the ability a 1 turn cooldown where you can't fire arrows is a good trade off for what amounts to a trick shot.
Eidolon
Murderface Murderface
[Spiegel]
Pay a 5k reiatsu cost(not out of their pool, but reiatsu only!), and I'm fine with this. If paid in reiatsu, the detrimental affect on Shuu next turn sets it equivalent to the capstone costs for other techs (10k). Otherwise its the type of awesome a capstone tech should be.
Pay a 5k reiatsu cost(not out of their pool, but reiatsu only!), and I'm fine with this. If paid in reiatsu, the detrimental affect on Shuu next turn sets it equivalent to the capstone costs for other techs (10k). Otherwise its the type of awesome a capstone tech should be.
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Beaks
Wacky Woohoo Pizza Sadness Man
Got one in regards to my BK that's been bugging me for quite some time.
Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.
Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great lance of blackened steel from the mouth of her hammer. Upon this blade lies the etchings of time lost to antiquity, an endless chronicle of fury and vengeance carved across the tattered landscape of battle. This lance is fired from the wyvern's mouth at a speed equal to her striking prowess (ie: Current Zanjutsu total) and is fastened to the hammer by a chain of abyssal steel. The lance functions akin to a barbed arrowhead, lodging itself in the target once it has made contact. The maximum range for this strike is 30 meters, and once contact is established the projectile detonates. Should the projectile miss or be deflected the chain retracts, and the detonation still occurs from Tsubaki's position.
The runed spearhead carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, detonating in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a thirty meter radius from the point of detonation. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.
Suggested change: Allow 5 rounds for Tsubaki to manually detonate this attack after the spearhead is fired, rather than force it to be instantaneous.
Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.
Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great lance of blackened steel from the mouth of her hammer. Upon this blade lies the etchings of time lost to antiquity, an endless chronicle of fury and vengeance carved across the tattered landscape of battle. This lance is fired from the wyvern's mouth at a speed equal to her striking prowess (ie: Current Zanjutsu total) and is fastened to the hammer by a chain of abyssal steel. The lance functions akin to a barbed arrowhead, lodging itself in the target once it has made contact. The maximum range for this strike is 30 meters, and once contact is established the projectile detonates. Should the projectile miss or be deflected the chain retracts, and the detonation still occurs from Tsubaki's position.
The runed spearhead carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, detonating in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a thirty meter radius from the point of detonation. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.
Suggested change: Allow 5 rounds for Tsubaki to manually detonate this attack after the spearhead is fired, rather than force it to be instantaneous.
In this case, giving full control over 5 rounds to detonate that much power is a bit too much. You could play hot potato with the runehead if you have that much time. The way it's written, you could use the attack, miss, and then book at your full speed for five turns to hug someone who's not expecting it.
So there's two concerns to look at. Time and control.
You're already given a lot of control due to it being aimed via your zanjutsu, something few people can compete against. I don't think, given that, you really need to be able to choose when to detonate it. That somewhat defeats the purpose of the chain, however.
Here's my proposed change:
Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.
Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great lance of blackened steel from the mouth of her hammer. Upon this blade lies the etchings of time lost to antiquity, an endless chronicle of fury and vengeance carved across the tattered landscape of battle. This lance is fired from the wyvern's mouth at a speed equal to her striking prowess (ie: Current Zanjutsu total) and is fastened to the hammer by a chain of abyssal steel. The lance functions akin to a barbed arrowhead, lodging itself in the target once it has made contact. The maximum range for this strike is 30 meters, and once contact is established the projectile detonates. Should one avoid the wyvern's fangs, they must still contend with its gusting wings and its barbed stinger: Tsubaki may attack with the chain for one additional round if no contact is made. The lance will detonate at the end of this round, regardless of where it is.
The runed spearhead carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, erupting in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a fifteen meter radius from the point of detonation. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.
If we go this route, it removes the "detonate from Tsubaki if it misses" aspect. Also, reducing the detonation radius to 15 meters, because that's more than enough and might help you avoid killing yourself every time you use it.
So there's two concerns to look at. Time and control.
You're already given a lot of control due to it being aimed via your zanjutsu, something few people can compete against. I don't think, given that, you really need to be able to choose when to detonate it. That somewhat defeats the purpose of the chain, however.
Here's my proposed change:
Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.
Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great lance of blackened steel from the mouth of her hammer. Upon this blade lies the etchings of time lost to antiquity, an endless chronicle of fury and vengeance carved across the tattered landscape of battle. This lance is fired from the wyvern's mouth at a speed equal to her striking prowess (ie: Current Zanjutsu total) and is fastened to the hammer by a chain of abyssal steel. The lance functions akin to a barbed arrowhead, lodging itself in the target once it has made contact. The maximum range for this strike is 30 meters, and once contact is established the projectile detonates. Should one avoid the wyvern's fangs, they must still contend with its gusting wings and its barbed stinger: Tsubaki may attack with the chain for one additional round if no contact is made. The lance will detonate at the end of this round, regardless of where it is.
The runed spearhead carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, erupting in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a fifteen meter radius from the point of detonation. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.
If we go this route, it removes the "detonate from Tsubaki if it misses" aspect. Also, reducing the detonation radius to 15 meters, because that's more than enough and might help you avoid killing yourself every time you use it.
lilmangoseed
Mango Queen
So I realized that my BK doesn't bar anyone -- within the 30 m radius -- from the mindraping. I don't always want to mindrape everyone... :3
If Lilith has obtained United Front and established a strong enough connection to select members within Kerushi's domain, then she may freely choose to omit them from the effects of Futaku Matawa Goshujin Chuushin.
.:: Futaku Matawa Goshujin Chuushin ::.
(Submit or Open Thy Heart)
Lilith's mastery of emotions has grown with the realization of her Bankai. She overwhelms the opponent with any emotion or set of emotions she chooses. The sky, the ground, the weather changes in a way to reflect the current emotion. The emotion selected may last throughout the entirety of her released bankai or may change at any point. Within this realm, emotions are stifling, driving her opponents into a powerful frenzy led by the heart. Drowning and submerged in what they feel, it becomes easiest to simply withdraw from the fight altogether.
However, if the enemy chooses to fight, a hole the size of a bullet wound appears over their heart. Blood drips from it, staining their clothes and chest. The wound continues to grow every round, becoming increasingly worse. Each round that they insist to continue the battle, the opponent will experience pain equal to 2% of Lilith's reiatsu that is drained from her pool. This ability only lasts within her 30-meter range.
Suggested Change:(Submit or Open Thy Heart)
Lilith's mastery of emotions has grown with the realization of her Bankai. She overwhelms the opponent with any emotion or set of emotions she chooses. The sky, the ground, the weather changes in a way to reflect the current emotion. The emotion selected may last throughout the entirety of her released bankai or may change at any point. Within this realm, emotions are stifling, driving her opponents into a powerful frenzy led by the heart. Drowning and submerged in what they feel, it becomes easiest to simply withdraw from the fight altogether.
However, if the enemy chooses to fight, a hole the size of a bullet wound appears over their heart. Blood drips from it, staining their clothes and chest. The wound continues to grow every round, becoming increasingly worse. Each round that they insist to continue the battle, the opponent will experience pain equal to 2% of Lilith's reiatsu that is drained from her pool. This ability only lasts within her 30-meter range.
If Lilith has obtained United Front and established a strong enough connection to select members within Kerushi's domain, then she may freely choose to omit them from the effects of Futaku Matawa Goshujin Chuushin.
No problems here. Something someone brought up in chat earlier, however, is that United Front isn't character exclusive. Even if you've attained United Front with another RP'er, that doesn't necessarily denote a connection between their character and Lilith in-game (someone brought up that Arano has never met Lilith despite you and Raph having UF). While I wont deny this change based on that alone, it's still something worth noting. Perhaps this should only apply to those whom Lilith has actually had contact with.
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lilmangoseed
Mango Queen
nvm, question answered. xD
Stygma8 4:19 pm
Stygma84:17 pm
it was kind of
a gentle must
since it makes no sense
if she's never met the character she's supposed to have a connection w/
:3
LOL
lilmangoseed 4:19 pm
haha, i know
Stygma8 4:19 pm
okeeee
lilmangoseed 4:19 pm
i just wanted to see how far i could push you
Stygma8 4:20 pm
pffffft
Beaks
Wacky Woohoo Pizza Sadness Man
After reconsidering the alternative I'm withdrawing the suggested change. Besides, near-suicide builds character.
...at least I didn't have this kai at my Taishuu? =3
Froggu
Prince of the Pond
So, I'm here to make a few mechanic changes to my first unique feat, here:
Changes:
Changes:
- Name
- Mechanics (though these are just a preference, and don't really matter)
- Added a maximum range
- Tied the speed to a stat
Concerning the current 8th Division Item (Enchanted Blades):
As listed, this item provides an effect which is almost identical to a previously made division technique, Armory (13th Division: Zanpakuto Masters):
Reasons for Change: For a Faction Item, Kaikoroku does far too much. It provides an instantaneous return of a zanpakuto at a range that is negligible in its impact upon the item on a basis that is not only out of the reach of the item, but stronger than the technique it's based upon. Armory's effects only ever took place the following round, and required a percentile cost.
Proposed Changes: I propose that this item be usable a certain amount of times per fight/collab, with a suggestion as Item Staff being 3 uses maximum.
Current Item
As listed, this item provides an effect which is almost identical to a previously made division technique, Armory (13th Division: Zanpakuto Masters):
Provided Technique
Reasons for Change: For a Faction Item, Kaikoroku does far too much. It provides an instantaneous return of a zanpakuto at a range that is negligible in its impact upon the item on a basis that is not only out of the reach of the item, but stronger than the technique it's based upon. Armory's effects only ever took place the following round, and required a percentile cost.
Proposed Changes: I propose that this item be usable a certain amount of times per fight/collab, with a suggestion as Item Staff being 3 uses maximum.
IshinOnigami
New Member
Ok guys, so it has been brought to my attention that i have been rather lax in getting my stuff looked at since the new Rules went into effect. for that, i apologize.
PLEASE NOTE WHAT FOLLOWS IS A LARGE AMOUNT OF TEXT! I took out what i could, but.....
First, my Kai. Now so far as i can tell, its just the connection parts that need to be tweaked. if i am wrong, lemme know and i will work on it this weekend.
Next up is the 7th div techs.....
PLEASE NOTE WHAT FOLLOWS IS A LARGE AMOUNT OF TEXT! I took out what i could, but.....
First, my Kai. Now so far as i can tell, its just the connection parts that need to be tweaked. if i am wrong, lemme know and i will work on it this weekend.
Fuyustuki
Next up is the 7th div techs.....
7th techs