Well... How... slice of life. So as a person who worked a short time as a barista, I'm kind of getting Vietnam flashbacks reading this. There's a certain amount of... impatient asshole customers... missing.
That aside, some really fun chapters to read. Is Cicely going to slowly go through every drink possible? Is she going to go into smoothies as well? I can't believe I'm even asking these questions, but you made basically making coffee a really fun thing to read. I really enjoy how you give the little actions and almost mundane things a lot of depth when so much of the RP focuses on big flashy action. It really builds out the RP in it's own unique way. Also, I was tempted to take 1 point of for making a PSL.
Will: A Friendly Drink [179/182]
Nice follow-up from your collab with Hare. Naev is kind of a dick, but I think that's what you were going for with the character. He seems pretty much similar to the way he acted in the collab with Hare, which is nice to see. Early writing of characters can sometimes get a bit... schizophrenic at times as people tend to struggle to nail down their personalities. Other than that, I enjoyed the back and forth and Naev is really a person who shouldn't be invited to parties if this is how stubborn and pushy he gets when talking to people. I suppose it kind of plays up the almost Asperger's vibe he's got going.
My only quip was that I didn't really get a good feel for how anyone other than Naev looked like. Lapsus in particular felt like a bit of blank slate appearance wise other than the brief amount you mentioned early. I don't mean do a full exposition dump on how the person looks but perhaps try focusing on introducing it slowly through the chapter/writing.
