Grading Session for Week 328

[bankzu]

Group 3 -> Group 2 -> Group 5 -> Group 4 -> Group 1 -> Group 3

Group 1 (Will): 1st/5th/9th Divisions
Group 2 (Raph): 2nd/3rd/6th/11th Divisions
Group 3 (Drag): 7th/10th/12th Divisions
Group 4 (Hiren): 4th/8th/13th Divisions
Group 5 (Bunz): AHs/Vizards/Quincies
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Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST on Tuesday, 29 April 2014



Note the updated Grading Rules here.
New rotation this week.
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[bankzu]

Dys - 150 division bonus
Just Some Easter Fluff [73/73]

A nice, relaxing piece to read. The Spanish was a really nice touch to add and it ran quite smoothly throughout the whole chapter. I got a nice "at home" feeling from this particular one and it was quite nice to read, in the midst of everything else. Great job!

Saving Private Ren [94/94] - PM bonus applied

First off, are you trying to make me blind?

You wrote words, created sentences, posted collab. The piece was well written, you did what you were supposed to and played off Adele nicely. I liked it. Can't wait to read the next part. You might want to get in touch with another GM or so, since Lil has been MIA for some time now.

PM bonus has been added to the grade.

Don't think I missed anything. If there are any questions, you know how to reach me.

Rob
Time's Up! [52/52]

Gosh, the land of the free huh? Crazy drivers and sick people huh? All good, all good. You got this writing thing down man, almost as if you've done it for years. Good job, well written chapter. It's was quite nice to ease into it and It did not really feel as if I was left out as a writer but some backstory would be nice, even a post of the previous chapter. Found a simple error or two, which happens, nothing to worry about. Good post all in all.

 

[Rob]

Alrighty, I'll be stepping in to grade Group 2 for a while again while Raph goes to focus on some other stuff.

I don't really care who grades my piece as long as it gets graded, so here you go:

http://www.mangaden.net/forum/showthread.php?38970-Week-328-Time-s-Up!

 

[swaswj]

Not seeing anything to grade this week, and have nothing to be graded.

 

[Nargles]

SORRY on lateness. Forgot what day it was. Finals week syndrome. No comments since I'm horrendously brain dead post analysis exam. Ill fix that next week. Yay summer

Gloam
Saving private ren [47/48]

I think the pm bonus only applied to the threads lil started.

Conversation [70/70]

 

[OssumBunz]

Ahhhhhh group 5 why are you so crazy and so active? u.u
Shiiiiiiiit I’m just doing so poorly so you get a group talk!
Group 5, you are all doing very well, no real complaints just that I have a lot to grade and that I am lazy/distracted by things that arent important. You guys really keep the rp moving so good work!

Hattrick:
“Traitor in Waiting” -27/27

“Conversation Over An Evening Meal” -70/70

Mewn:
(omg Mewn Group 5 is crazy active wtf LOL)
“An Unknown Quantity” -52/52

DragonKaos:
(Whaaaaaat cerb has a new guy!? Welcome, sorry your grader is lazy)
“The Way of The Fist” -162/162 (all parts)

Zenny!:
(shit be crazy, man)
“Ominous Ramblings” -54/54