Chef Bryardee
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Even with your previous reply explaining the names, it still took some getting used to. Kept thinking of Tycho as your character and was wondering why he was so out-of-character until Apollo appeared.
Surprisingly cocky in this one. Previous chapters had me thinking Apollo was extremely careful, but while he's methodical in his actions here, he really gives away a lot more than he needs to. I'm curious about how the brat got his blueprints, though. Tense exchange and a good window into the two characters and their motivations.
Surprisingly cocky in this one. Previous chapters had me thinking Apollo was extremely careful, but while he's methodical in his actions here, he really gives away a lot more than he needs to. I'm curious about how the brat got his blueprints, though. Tense exchange and a good window into the two characters and their motivations.