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Sunlight danced its way into the waters depths, broken and dim. The Hydra was well within the suns illumination range, its construct and details emerging like a lost city on the ocean floor. It was obvious who had built the mighty ship, her design clearly demvir in origin. The appearance...

Although the large demented beast had, for the most part, decided to seek purchase with other prey, it had barreled its way towards Seneca with the speed of a freight train. No sooner had it decided to change its direction for the Velen man was the serpent already mid bite. Apertures widened...

“Under any other circumstance, sure, I’d say there was no way you’d get to see that ship sail again.” The feminine Demvir spoke as she crossed her arms over her chest, the velvet indigo cloak she wore preventing the metal surfaces from scraping together loudly as she shifted her weight to mostly...

It’s strange the things one will agree to if left with no other choice, perhaps some of the things more extreme than others. Certainly many in this group had already given up something so personal, something that was so wholly them and their very being. While at first the idea had sounded so...

What in the Vis’ names have we stepped into all of the sudden? There was a sour air about this being that was now addressing the group gathered before him. At first Seneca hadn’t glanced twice at this odd employer, shoving him off in her mind as one of the handful of ugly spurri that one might...

Grade: 0 (Adding up) Seneca di Contritio Vigor: 2,367 Latens: 367 Exa: 300 Skills:Art of Ingeniarius (Novice) Way of Pistolii (Adept) Way of Polybolii (Novice) Way of Cannonis (Novice) [ Antique Six Shooter: Mundane ]

It was hard to believe the events that had unfolded in the past twenty four hours, yet all of it was true, just not graspable to all at this time. An entire district which had been home too so many and a source of livelihood for countless others had been eviscerated by melevalentness. Dust had...

Let me know if I forgot you, also from what I hear this group is being taken over by Raph next week. Hare- 261/261 “Prophet” Nice story telling and dialogue here, your last post didnt have that hanging feeling that happens to people sometimes in a thread like this. Not sure if that was the...

Hare- 107/107 “Sweet and Sour” Hmmm it doesn't even feel like I’ve missed any of your writing, by the way your descriptions feel a lot better here than they have in other chapters. Your character interactions and dialogue were also exceptionally good here, the whole chapter was a nice read and...

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh sorry I got side tracked and stuff u.u VIN: 560/560 you'd get a long thing here about what I thought of your writing here but this is late, take that grade. VAL: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm confused by that GM edit there...I'm not sure if you get this grade but uh...if you...

Hare- 124/124 “The Question Is” Hare, Kincaid is surprisingly interesting really. Reading this it’s like he’s a whole other person, which I suppose is the point. There are points where I wonder if he really is turning his life around, but I don’t want to be too hopeful of that. This was a good...

Vinny- 222/232 “Missions” Seemed easier to write that rather than the long title. First thing is just a style thing, it’s neither good nor bad, you have a a very spoken word style to your writing in my opinion. I’ve said this about a few people here, so it’s just how I interpret a few chapters...

Hey there guys, I'm grading Aq for Sev this week and next, so lets just jump right in and that sorta thing! Val- 139/139 “The Axeman Cometh” Alright I’m just going to jump right in here and pull up the first thing that feels like a mistake to me since I’m grading as I read to save time...

WC:1100 “I can’t let this piece go for less than five hundred exa. That’s an amazing deal considering that this is an original Amandeus.” A steel digit pointed to the bottom left corner of a large square canvas, to where a neatly scrawled signature was positioned. The painting itself was...