Recent content by Valero

So after much deliberating and talking myself out of it multiple times, I've finally taken the plunge and have officially started doing music commissions! If you're interested in having a theme made for your character or to capture the mood of a particular piece of writing, just send me a...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Aq] Week 355: Instruction of the Lifted by Valero.

Instruction of the Lifted [3,285] Deni's eyes slowly flickered open. A quaternity of sensations came into focus. Touch. He was not alone. His head rested on somebody else's as the pair of them swayed with the gentle motion of the water. One hand rested on her lower back. His fingers were...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Aq] Week 353: Innovation of the Lowered by Valero.

Innovation of the Lowered [2,504] The Epimelitis strode down the corridor. Her coppery scales glistened every time the dim glow from the artificial ocean lights touched her through a window she passed. Skin-tight dark clothes hugged her figure from neck to toe, shrouded only by a long coat in...

In PT specifically, given enemies in the PMs and such, I don't really feel like anyone is really a primary antagonist, they all just made bad decisions based on their resentment and current situations. Going off of the NIN (I really like them, might have to work them into some of Deni's stories...

Firstly, I'm glad I'm not the only one who uses the F-bomb in my writing! With that aside, watching the banter between Keydis and Geppa was the driving point of this chapter and using the competition as a way for the two smiths to better themselves was a good way to break up the crafting...

Having written (and not yet posted) a similar chapter for Deni's crafting challenge from Prince Caput, the thing I found the hardest was how to keep it interesting and maintain the crafting terminology and processes. There was a lot of terminology in the first half so I definitely enjoyed the...

Further Confessions ~ Starring ~ Val as Deni Dys as Ignis [4,069] After the events in Pelagia, Ignis returned to her home at a mid-sized estate in Avelyn --Brigid’s Hearth. The large building was round, like a stout observatory tower with patterned tiles on its exterior in rich shades of a...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 325: To Feel and Confess II by Valero.

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 325: Plane Intentions by Valero.

Plane Intentions ~ Starring ~ Val as Deni Brood as Vita [2,254] Deni breathed a cloud of smoke as he strode down the street. He found himself in an unfamiliar district of Terminus, though the strong Hiemis winds were just as bitter as Lupanar. They lashed at his sleeveless black trench coat...

It's not metal but I really can't stop listening to this song D:

Anybody on here interested in making a digital logo for my solo music project? I had a guy that was going to be doing it a while back but he fell off the face of the Earth and just wondering if anyone on here was interested? I know it goes without saying but I'm willing to pay. Just private...

So I'm assuming massively that I'm posting in the right place for a shameless self plug, but I just can't contain my excitement. The debut EP of my solo project, Fight the Tornado, is now out! It's called Maelstrom of Thought and it's available to listen to on spotify and other streaming...