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From the Ashes 1225 words After stuffing her face with Deni and Aeria, Ignis parted ways with her friends. She told the velen that she would drop by his place after a quick errand. The Pelagian accepted her reasoning, too sleepy to argue or press for detail. Besides, Ignis had just given him...

This has been something I personally haven't written about much. Harper did encounter some discrimination in his childhood after the death of his parents. Despite being a child on his own and clearly in need of help, people weren't eager to help a spurii child. Some just ignored him, others only...

Ignis relaxed, glad the fight had ended, joining in Deni's laughter. Her giggles, however, had a nervous quality to them. She crouched at Aelflead's side and patted her face rather sharply. "Hey now, you're too drunk to be getting in fights. You need to sober up. I'll let you go once you've...

Amicus seemed to enjoy Aeria's attention quite a bit, snuggling closer as she petted him. The little mons infans turned his head to follow Aeria's gaze. Ignis winced as Aelflead and Keydis began to fight. "I can't say I'm surprised, love," the red feathered woman replied, leaning against Deni's...

Ignis smiled up at Deni warmly, resting her head on his chest as they slowly whirled around the bar. Her claws trailed against his chest gently, preening at his scales through his shirt. "Another time, then," she agreed easily. "I am a bit dizzy." A giggle escaped the rust feathered woman's...

So sorry you had to wait this long for feedback Will & Berri. I do enjoy the world building and descriptive language you both use, you balance character movement and environment descriptions well. I like how it paints a picture of what's going on without being overwhelmingly detailed...

Hi Pho! Good to see you join us for this RP :) I like your application for a lot of the same reasons Will listed. The details and your writing style will be a nice addition to our crew. There's nothing wrong with your application that should hold up your progress. +1

Ignis smiled up at Deni as their dance became more fluid. "What was your first time dancing like?" Her fingers curled around the velen man's larger hand, face flushing as Deni's other hand grasped her hip. Shyly, the pale avian looked up at her partner through curled lashes. After the kick, she...

Hey, Thread This was a compelling chapter to read. There was a lot of groundwork laid for future story with a girl walking around with her resurrected parents. I do enjoy the moment where Beatrice yells at the vendor selling candy, it shows how despite her bright demeanor, Beatrice is very...

Ignis took Deni's offered hand, her mischievous grin softening into something more tender. She followed Deni's instructions and movements to the best of her abilities, but the dance was a bit complex. That, and the pale skinned avian wasn't used to dancing. Though she had danced on her own as a...

Ignis glanced at Aelflead, frowning a bit at the spurii's usual attitude coming to the surface. Fortunately Keydis dismissed the aggressive redhead's childish insults. Then, Deni swept in and began to strike up conversation. "Either could still have sexual connotations if you really wanted,"...

Ignis' smile tightened when she heard Keydis' boisterous voice next to her. She ran her claws through her short, black head feathers. So much for escaping, the avian thought, glancing at the way Aelflead bristled. "This is Keydis, a bounty hunter by profession. Fortunately we're off the...

"Impressive," Ignis replied to Keydis' anecdote a bit flatly. She turned her attention to her drink, draining the last of the fruity wine with relish. Withstanding bullet wounds wasn't a feat that impressed the rust-feathered woman or made her feel threatened. Sure, her and Deni's abilities...

The merry atmosphere brought a satisfied expression on Ignis’ face. “If you're feeling so generous, then you can pay for this,” the avian said, gesturing with the wineglass in her hand. She pecked Deni on the cheek. “And maybe one more. One more of these please, Cicely. I forgot what it's...

Squished between Deni and a laicar fellow who had been downing beers like water, Ignis sat in her infamous red cloak. Perhaps the enlil would never see the world the same way after the mess she had been through in the past two years --the Black Portal Mission had only been a culmination of her...

Chiming in here; I enjoyed the clash between Diamantus and Amanita. I think I commented on the tension between the two of them earlier, so it's nice to see it continuing. I did sense a bit of increased tensions this time around because they disagreed over Conexus and actually had a short...

Alrighty *cracks knuckles* this chapter came as a pleasant surprise. Well, for everyone but Deimar and Adria. I do enjoy the contrast between Eximium and Vexus' responses to the dilemma and Deimar and Adria. It's clear that Eximium doesn't want to punish people who risked themselves and nearly...

Portal PMs Roll 1 64 Bigatium Pulveris x 5 3 Nothing 64 Bigatium Pulveris x 5 87 Auritium Lateris x 5 61 Bigatium Pulveris x 4 87 Auritium Lateris x 5 94 Vitatium Pulveris x 1 1 Nothing 56 Bigatium Volantis x 2 Roll 2 9 Nothing 81 Auritium Lateris x 3 13 Nothing 27 Dahlitium Lateris x 3 91...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Aq][Be][Oc] Week 188: Phoenix by Dysney.

Phoenix 5473 words After the shock of Dikaiosyne’s banishment wore off and speeches in favor of ending the bloodshed had sunk in, the soldiers and vigilantes alike began to shuffle towards the airships that had arrived. They left the weapons strewn across the bloodied field, only taking the...