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Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for Week 370: A Sick Man's Dreams: Good and Gone by Chef Bryardee.

28 | A SICK MAN'S DREAMS: GOOD AND GONE 2,316 In the wake of Hugo’s eulogy, there was utter silence. Then, all those in attendance tapped their wine glasses together to close out the reception. Everyone took a hefty swig of their libation of choice, many of them already three sheets to the...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 302: Laws of the Skill by Chef Bryardee.

22 | LAWS OF THE SKILL 3,300 Apollo’s chin touched his chest as he scrutinized his reflection in the large shard of glass beneath his boot. He tapped it repeatedly, tracing the spiderweb cracks as they grew each time. Thin arcs curved through the acrylic paint on its surface like crow’s...

User name: Chef Bryardee EX Item Name: Crucible Alternate Names: User: Apollo Level: C Acquisition: Crafted by Apollo. Item Description: A crucible is a vessel made to subject hardened material to high temperatures to induce melting. The crucible is also capable to smelting...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 302: Heart or Death by Chef Bryardee.

21 | HEART OR DEATH 3,900 Cario pushed his way into the workshop through the double-hung doorway with a heavy satchel in hand. Working his way around the short wall just behind it, the boy found the shopkeeper knelt in front of large crate seated on a hand truck. Heaving the...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 301: Sacred Simplicity by Chef Bryardee.

20 | SACRED SIMPLICITY 1,900 “Hey, you ...” Apollo snapped around, peeking just outside the heavy tint of his teashades. It was a rapid movement, and he dropped his keys as soon as his eyes flipped up from his hands. The only reason he hadn’t instinctively reached for Hebenus was the puerile...

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 296: The Wolf to Men III by Chef Bryardee.

The "Tycho" that I started PT is actually Apollo. I changed his name to Apollo last week. I used Tycho for this story character because I have no imagination.

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 295: The Wolf to Men II by Chef Bryardee.

Please post any comments, critique, and other feedback here for [Oc] Week 295: The Wolf to Men by Chef Bryardee.

BRANCHES AND WITHERS The distant upheaval drew closer – the sharp sound of metal clashing followed by earth-shattering booms, the emphatic crack of lighting and violent thunder, dried tinder creaking and collapsing to withers and rubble under the immense heat of the crawling flames eating away...

TREMBLING KINGDOM The five-tiered substructure was cast in a different umbra than whence his quartet first arrived. Were he afforded the leeway to simply look up, he’d witness the interesting, wispy lines of the dark grey and white cloud slightly obscuring the bright halo illuminating the vast...