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Changes:
  • Cost and radius of "Daiun Seiu" changed accordingly
  • Buffed "Seigetsu" by lowering cost
  • Increased cost of "Ryuuga"

Zennyo Ryuou
善如龍王
Goodness-Like Dragon King

With the rise of Akio’s final resolve, the Storm Dragon’s true form is called to the realm of the tangible. Upon invocation of Ban Kai, a shimmering wave of azure energy begins to emanate from the blade before it grows to consume Akio in his entirety. In a furious spiral of water that rises to pierce the heavens themselves, Zennyo Ryuou presents himself.

Forgoing the simple form of a basic sword, the Final Release returns the weapon to its form as manifested by the zanpakutou’s previous incarnations: an over-sized spear. Massive in proportion to its wielder, the yari measures a full eleven feet from end to end. The blade deviates from its more traditional counterparts by being significantly larger in comparison, measuring a full four feet long with a width of one foot. It also has a more western design to it, double-edged with a single, triangular point, and is much thicker than is normal. The shaft is round and made of hardwood, covered with black-lacquered bamboo strips to add a glossy and polished appearance. This measures seven feet in total length. Finally, a crescent-shaped blade is embedded into the base of the weapon, attached to the pommel by the outward curve, lending to both slashing and piercing maneuvers, completing the weapon and measuring one foot in length.

[ Daiun Seiu ] - 大雲請雨
(Great Cloud Praying for Rain)

Named after the sutra recited by those who wished to invoke the good-will of the rain god Zentatsu, the ability of Akio’s final release is a testament to the powers of the Dragon King. The manifestation of his desire to heal the world, Zennyo calls forth a great black cloud to take over the skies in his subjugation of heaven. From the mass of coruscating ebony comes a downpour, consuming the radius of the cloud-cover in its entirety and establishing the domain of the Dragon King.

Within his realm of influence Zentatsu has control over all manner of water. The rain, being the most abundant source, is his to control, and by extension, his wielder’s. With a mere thought, Akio can summon vast quantities of water to aid in the creation of any attack or defense imaginable, using the massive spear and his own body as a means to conduct the path and manipulate the shape of the insurmountable quantity of water within his control. In a manner similar to the weapon’s initial release, energy can be applied to any manifested construct, maximizing the potential it has to function as a tool in combat. For this, Akio may pay any amount of energy that may not exceed 15% of his maximum reiatsu in a single turn. Likewise, by paying the cost of any ability that attempts to claim water or ice as an affinity within the domain of the Storm Caller, he may nullify the power, exerting his superior control of the element. The speed, precision, and accuracy of the water-manipulation is determined by Akio’s zanjutsu statistic (including any accumulated bonuses). The radius of the storm is thirty meters.

[ Seigetsu ] - 霽月
(Moon Shining in a Rain-Cleansed Sky)

With the integration of both wills and powers granted by the ascension to this new level of power, Akio and Zentatsu are capable of achieving perfect harmony between their respective strengths. Through the fusion of their energies they can compound their chosen specialities to create a single, unified ability. By calling forth his mastery over the healing arts, Akio can temporarily influence the vast rain itself, imbuing it with any prepared chiyudou that he has at his disposal (so long as it can be channeled). As a result, the spell will begin to heal wounds based on its parameters, so long as the water makes contact with the injured, and they fall within the storm’s range (Akio included).

While it is true that the rain can breathe life into a land that is wrought with drought, it can cause destruction with the same amount of ease. Known enemies may be excluded from the healing effects of the empowered storm, and instead have their existing wounds begin to degrade progressively based on the description of the spell, provided the water makes contact (the energy restoration is not present during Seigetsu’s adverse effect).

Activating this ability requires that Akio must pay both the cost of the spell and 5% of his reiatsu, and the duration is dependant upon the spell at hand.

[ Tatsubi ] - 竜尾
(Dragon Tail)

Derived from Akio’s desire to protect, not only himself but his allies as well, Tatsubi further represents the powerful bond shared by the mender and his sword spirit. The downpour, as it drenches the battlefield in its entirety, makes the whole of Zentatsu’s domain apart of the technique that allows his wielder to halt any attack that dares to strike against the Dragon King or those under his protection.

Executed by using his own energy as a catalyst, Akio will polarize the blade of his weapon, causing it to function like a magnet for any and all water that falls within a relative radius. Then, by bringing the gargantuan blade of the spear to bear against an incoming attack the water may be released, generating a concussive shock-wave designed to nullify and blast away any offensive (be it of tangible or metaphysical composition). As a result, attacks counteracted by the Dragon’s Tail may be shunted to the side, knocked off-course, or dissipated completely.

This ability requires that Akio pay 15% of his maximum reiatsu. In the case of energy attacks, the ability of Tatsubi to defend is dependant upon cost versus cost. When dealing with physical assaults, relative strength is the determining factor.

[ Ryuuga ] - 竜牙
(Dragon Fang)

Derived from Akio’s will to fight in the name of his ideals, Ryuuga further represents the powerful bond shared by the mender and his sword spirit. Focusing the whole of Zentatsu’s unbridled might, the Dragon’s Fang is the final attack. Exerting his control over the water element, Akio will call forth a sudden surge of energy that will concentrate on the blade of the immense spear, only to be released a moment later in the form of single lance of highly-pressurized water. The deceptively small projectile (congruent to the size of the blade) moves with heightened speed, and strikes with biting accuracy. Designed to slay his opposition from a distance, this attack moves at a speed equal to 1.25x Akio’s zanjutsu (including any accumulated bonuses), and can travel anywhere within the radius of the downpour. Zentatsu's slaying fang may be summoned for 25% of Akio's remaining reiatsu.​
 
Sev: Approved
Just want to see a clause in form/ability 2 that says: Can't return any more rei to the people in the barrier then what it absorbs from an attack.

Froggu: Approved with changes

Seigetsu: Spells without a specific cap on rounds of use stop at 3.

Ryuuga: Add a 1% total rei cost to enhance the speed of attack, then keep the 25% remaining part and we've got a deal.
 
Shikai

Name: Suukei no Shunkan (Revered Moment)

Release phrase: Let past converge into present, or simply converge.

Manifestation: His spirit takes the form of a skeleton whose bones have been burned black. He is clothed in a tattered golden cloak and he has a sword similar to Rei’s release. He also known to smoke a cigar most of the time that gives off a golden hue as it burns.

Inner World: The inner world is a large city halfway submerged in sand.

Form: When Rei holds the sheathe in his hand and says the release phrase, a torrent of sand swallows the sword and takes the form of a 39 1/2 inch shirasaya sword and two flexible metal gloves. The sheath of the sword, unlike most sheathes, is actually like the blade and is sharp as one as well. Because Rei holds onto the sheath in battle to fight with, the metal gloves are necessary. The sheathe is about an 1mm thick with 3 holes in the along it. The actual blade of the sword is 1/2 mm thick and isn’t used to fight with. It is a piercing red color that contrasts with the completely white and purple sheathe.


Renzoku no ibuki (Breath of the Continuum): When Rei releases, all of the reiatsu that would be gained from a release instead is infused into his sword.

Midori ryuu (Green Stream): Rei can release a powerful green shockwave from the sheathe. Each time he uses this, the sheath takes away 20% of the full energy used for the attack from the sword and stores this power for the next time this attack is used. The energy is continuously stacked upon previously taken power. When one moments energy has been taken from the sword three times, the energy and memory of the overall attack becomes permanently ingrained and is no longer taken from the sword. When the swords energy isn't able to complete a chain, the shockwave gets no stronger and is only as strong as costs and the permanent stacked energy. The range of the shockwave is 20 meters and the width and height is 10 meters. Speed and strength is based on zanjutsu. This attack costs 250 reiatsu. He can use this 3 times a turn.

Chikaku o henkou (Altered perception) : Upon releasing his zanpaktou, time around Rei is slightly distorted...making things seem slower. This allows him to pick up on things he wouldn’t be able to see normally. This is expressed as an increase in his physical stats (Zanjutsu, Hakuda and hohou) multiplied by 1.5. This does not increase the strength this only makes him able to perceive things better.

 
(I am not done with upgrading my personal data but i am around 1,5k connection now)


[— Inner World —]


At his first visit, his inner world is a chaotic place just like M. C. Eschers Relativity. Unable to leave this place, both his spirits clashed against each other again and again creating a lot of tension. The reason of this is because of both spirits trapped in one sword, this changes later on when Mitsuhito uses knuckles instead of a sword.
Later on its a big endless forest with enough room for both to avoid each other. This forest changes season whenever Mitsuhito enters his inner world, showing that nothing is steady in the universe. After he attained the names of his sword spirits he can change the season at will, after entering his inner world.


[— Manifestation —]

One of the spirits is a gray wolf named Kaono which is as big as a normal wolf. Some parts of his fur on his head is white, letting it look like a tattoo. He wears a shackle around his left forepaw. He likes to chase Mioki around and was sort of hostile at the first meeting with Mitsuhito.

The other spirit is a raccoon-dog named Mioki. she has no special outer appearance making it hard to spot her in a mass of many. She is very fast and likes to tease Kaono whenever she can. On their first meeting she was very warmhearted and is fond of Mitsuhito being their carrier.





Shi Kai
"Initial Release"

Name: Twain Beasts / tsū inu chikushou / ツー犬畜生

“Jagt sie alle, tsū inu chikushou”
“Hunt them all, Twain Beasts”

[— Form —]

After releasing his zanpakutou the normal knuckles he wears are extending themselves to form a pair of gauntlets going right over his elbows to the middle of his upper arms and are out of the same material a zanpakutou is formed. With these he is even able to block against some attacks. The gauntlets are of the same color as the knuckles. The first layer is in silver while the glove part of the gauntlets is in a black tone. At the upper end it has a little golden part giving it the finishing touch.

[— Abilities —]

身体の寄宿 Shintai no kishuku “reside (in a) body” [uses 2 ability slots]

Letting the spirits reside into some parts of his body instead of the weapon, he can amplify a stat which is bound to a spirit. The wolf resides himself into Mitsuhito’s arms, buffing his hakuda while the raccoon dog resides into his legs, buffing his hohou stat. The buff is 10%. It is essential for him to allow this to either both or no one, upon releasing his shikai.
Once Mitsuhito decides to let his spirits resides into the body parts though, the only way to get them out again is leaving the shikai form. Because of the concentration needed for that of all 3 parties, they can't concentrate on the reiatsu buff anymore, so the 10%/20% buff goes away.

球体込み Kyutai komi “Sphere attack”

Mitsuhito can infuse the air in front of his fist or foot with reiatsu into a ball-like sphere and can push that against an enemy. This can hit a target in a distance up to 20 meter. Each attack costs 1-15% reiatsu. The cost is calculated by the size of the ball, from 1% for a marble size to 15% for a medicin ball size one. At 1000 connection he can utilize this from 1-6%.
Each additional 1000 connection he gains the ability to form a bigger sphere, so the maximal cost is increased by 1%, capping by 10000 total connection.
 
Aw, what the hell. If Unholy's posting, I might as well too. Let's get this over with and see if it works. Resubbing kai and using last spec point. Hollaa

Shi Kai

Name: Still thinking of one
Form: Still thinking, but most likely similar to current sword

Ability: The spirit of the sword, unlike that if its predecessor, prefers direct and instantaneous results over psychological and morale-crushing initiatives. Hence, no longer does it choose to dabble with petty abilities like increasing the amount of pain its victim feels. Instead, its killing capacity is spiked upon awakening. Once released, Kyuketsu can pay a fine of 500 reiatsu per turn to drastically increase the cutting capabilities of his blade. Although doing nothing to enhance his proficiency in zanjutsu, the overall sharpness of the sword heightens, allowing it to slice through most targets easier and cleaner.

Attack: Upon reclaiming a zanpakutou, Kyuketsu found that his new weapon retained one vital aspect of the previous Massacre Sword--the highly destructive ability to release energy. Capped at 20 meters and with a width ranging from 5 to 10 feet (depending on the user’s choice), the crushing torrent of flaming spiritual energy costs 5% of the shinigami’s current reiatsu and delivers the same amount of damage equivalent to the price.


Ban Kai

Kyuektsu's Ban Kai is considerably one of the largest Final Releases in regards to size once activated. Beginning from the space on where he is standing, a crystalline coat quickly spans out from the ground and covers a distance of about 1000 feet in diameter. The entire battlefield and all rooted inanimate objects caught within the ‘realm’ are then blanketed by a mirror-like surface which reflects everyone and everything inside in perfect clarity. A thousand feet above, another phenomenon takes place as a bright crimson sigil of elaborate design and similar size lights up the skies in tandem. The swordsman himself is altered as well as his shihakushou morphs into a coat reminiscent of his previous Ban Kai’s skin, though his sword remains looking the same.

Ability: The grounds on which Kyuketsu stands is now considered his territory in every sense of the word. Every living being, regardless of affiliation with him is unwelcome in the crystalline paradise. In turn, the mirror which now coats the land innately reveals the true personalities of those nearby. Everyone within a 15 meter radius of Kyuketsu has their reflections altered to suit who they truly are on the inside, the same case also applying to the user himself. The masks which conceal all falsities and lies are instantly dissolved, allowing only for the absolute truth to come out.

Further explanation: All affected individuals have their reflections swapped to show what kind of person they truly are. Concealed identities aren’t revealed, but instead their personalities are disclosed through subtle imagery. For example, a charming-looking girl would reflect as a disfigured and mutated version of her old self if she’s a vile and despicable entity on the inside. An intimidating man who’s truly a coward would appear on the mirror as nothing more but a shivering little worm, and so on.​

Ability: Improving its initial Shi Kai ability of cutting amplification, Kyuketsu’s Ban Kai takes it a step further. The level on which his zanpakutou can cleave through targets now surpass previous limitations to a different league on its own. With this maximized sharpness in tact, hardened obstacles that the shinigami previously couldn’t slash through are now easily shrugged off with the swipe of the sword. This massive augmentation costs 1,000 reiatsu a turn.

Attack: In Ban Kai, Kyuketsu’s sword still has the ability to unleash waves of concentrated spirit energy in the form of coruscating black flames. It is now able to fire shots tantamount to 15% to 25% (cost is equivalent to this) of the swordsman’s current reiatsu in exchange for its range lowering to only 15 meters. Its width on the other hand increases to a maximum of 20 feet in diamater.

Attack: When releasing his signature blasts of fire, Kyuketsu first augments his reiatsu into his sword before the energy converts into an ethereal form. He can choose an alternative for this and instead save the torrent of power by implanting it on a target by cutting them. Once instilled on something, Kyuketsu has three turns to detonate the wound (by mental command or snapping his fingers) before the reiatsu neutralizes and dissipates. He can embed reiatsu ranging from 5 to 10 percent of his current reserve. The cut, as it is first delivered, will glow a noticeable shade of black.

If willing, the target is able to counteract and erase an already energy-embedded cut by paying 1.5x the cost of reiatsu used by Kyuketsu.
 
Unholy - Denied

Note from Van: After spending hours on a concept and trying to help you get it into a manageable state, you turn around and submit something entirely different, and vastly too strong to allow. Further, you blatantly ignored several of the things I told you during that time spent. I am not pleased with wasting my time.

Form - Ok

Ability 1 - Storing the rei as a sort of tool or cost to the user, but regenerating 20% of your reiatsu in 3 turns as just a shikai ability is way too much. Try saying he can grow it by 2% of his max rei for up to say, 10 turns, and its something closer to the realm of workability.

Ability 2 - This needs to be reworked. You've basically got a kai slot that logarithmically increases the amount of free reiatsu you get every time you use it. And it isn't a trite amount when you evaluate it, you could be getting over 100% of your rei added to attacks each turn. No.

Ability 3 - You basically want a 50% buff to zanj, hak and hoh, but only for defense. No. For a shikai, you could feasibly get a 10% defensive buff to *one* stat with a 3 slot kai. A one slot kai could probably even hit 35%. But that's all it'd do.


Mitsu - Approved with change.

Ability 1 - We are ok with this. You're trading your reiatsu buff for two stats at 10%. This is basically a three slot kai, so normal would be 5%, but you're effectively loosing a release bonus. So . . . yeah, we can live with it.

Ability 2 - The range on expendable % is too high. Three slot kai, so, lets aim for a 5% margin. 1-5%, 5-10%, etc. You can just edit that in or repost, and you're good to go.


Wayne - Notes:

Shikai - We really do need a form before we can approve. Don't want you saying your shikai is Godzilla after we look at it. But, We'll offer thoughts on what you've got.

Ability 1 - Cool. Sure you don't want this to be a % value, so your cutting power goes up with your overall reiatsu?

Ability 2 - Sure. Could make this a 5% range if you wanted.


Bankai - We'd approve this

Form - Its big, but not exploited. So ok.

Ability - Nice.

Attack 1 - Yes. This can add on to zanj techs and all that.

Attack 2 - Big Bankai attack. Nice.

Attack 3 - Exploding cuts, we like it.
 
Here we go then

Shi Kai

Name: Still in the works
Form: Though the inhabitant of his sword now differs completely from the last, Kyuketsu's sword managed to retain most of its previous physical characteristics. Its blade still boasts the same midnight shade of black, along with the nodachi-like length its entirety spans. In light of the power shift that transpired within the boy's inner world, the haunting chimes which once resonated from the zanpakutou's edge no longer exist. Instead, it simply leaves behind a trail of faint purple afterimages in its path as it moves.

Shi Kai Abilities
Ability: The spirit of the sword, unlike that if its predecessor, prefers direct and instantaneous results over psychological and morale-crushing initiatives. Hence, no longer does it choose to dabble with petty abilities like increasing the amount of pain its victim feels. Instead, its killing capacity is spiked upon awakening. Once released, Kyuketsu can pay a fine of 500 reiatsu per turn to drastically increase the cutting capabilities of his blade. Although doing nothing to enhance his proficiency in zanjutsu, the overall sharpness of the sword heightens, allowing it to slice through most targets easier and cleaner.

Attack: Upon reclaiming a zanpakutou, Kyuketsu found that his new weapon retained one vital aspect of the previous Massacre Sword--the highly destructive ability to release energy. Capped at 20 meters and with a width ranging from 5 to 10 feet (depending on the user’s choice), the crushing torrent of flaming spiritual energy costs 5% of the shinigami’s current reiatsu and delivers the same amount of damage equivalent to the price.


Ban Kai

Kyuektsu's Ban Kai is considerably one of the largest Final Releases in regards to size once activated. Beginning from the space on where he is standing, a crystalline coat quickly spans out from the ground and covers a distance of about 1000 feet in diameter. The entire battlefield and all rooted inanimate objects caught within the ‘realm’ are then blanketed by a mirror-like surface which reflects everyone and everything inside in perfect clarity. A thousand feet above, another phenomenon takes place as a bright crimson sigil of elaborate design and similar size lights up the skies in tandem. The swordsman himself is altered as well as his shihakushou morphs into a coat reminiscent of his previous Ban Kai’s skin, though his sword remains looking the same.

Ban Kai Abilities
Ability: The grounds on which Kyuketsu stands is now considered his territory in every sense of the word. Every living being, regardless of affiliation with him is unwelcome in the crystalline paradise. In turn, the mirror which now coats the land innately reveals the true personalities of those nearby. Everyone within a 15 meter radius of Kyuketsu has their reflections altered to suit who they truly are on the inside, the same case also applying to the user himself. The masks which conceal all falsities and lies are instantly dissolved, allowing only for the absolute truth to come out.

Further explanation: All affected individuals have their reflections swapped to show what kind of person they truly are. Concealed identities aren’t revealed, but instead their personalities are disclosed through subtle imagery. For example, a charming-looking girl would reflect as a disfigured and mutated version of her old self if she’s a vile and despicable entity on the inside. An intimidating man who’s truly a coward would appear on the mirror as nothing more but a shivering little worm, and so on.

Ability: Improving its initial Shi Kai ability of cutting amplification, Kyuketsu’s Ban Kai takes it a step further. The level on which his zanpakutou can cleave through targets now surpass previous limitations to a different league on its own. With this maximized sharpness in tact, hardened obstacles that the shinigami previously couldn’t slash through are now easily shrugged off with the swipe of the sword. This massive augmentation costs 1,000 reiatsu a turn.

Attack: In Ban Kai, Kyuketsu’s sword still has the ability to unleash waves of concentrated spirit energy in the form of coruscating black flames. It is now able to fire shots tantamount to 15% to 25% (cost is equivalent to this) of the swordsman’s current reiatsu in exchange for its range lowering to only 15 meters. Its width on the other hand increases to a maximum of 20 feet in diamater.

Attack: When releasing his signature blasts of fire, Kyuketsu first augments his reiatsu into his sword before the energy converts into an ethereal form. He can choose an alternative for this and instead save the torrent of power by implanting it on a target by cutting them. Once instilled on something, Kyuketsu has three turns to detonate the wound (by mental command or snapping his fingers) before the reiatsu neutralizes and dissipates. He can embed reiatsu ranging from 5 to 10 percent of his current reserve. The cut, as it is first delivered, will glow a noticeable shade of black.

If willing, the target is able to counteract and erase an already energy-embedded cut by paying 1.5x the cost of reiatsu used by Kyuketsu.
 
Shikai

Name: Shitsuyou Arashi (Relentless storm)

Release phrase: Show them persistence

Manifestation: His spirit takes the form of a skeleton whose bones have been burned black. He is clothed in a tattered golden cloak and he has a sword similar to Rei’s release. He also known to smoke a cigar most of the time that gives off a golden hue as it burns.

Inner World: The inner world is a large city halfway submerged in sand. The area is always raining though the water evaporates the minute it touches the sand, leaving a constant mist around the area.

Form: When Rei holds the sheathe in his hand and says the release phrase, a torrent of sand swallows the sword and takes the form of a 39 1/2 inch shirasaya sword and two flexible metal gloves. The sheath of the sword, unlike most sheathes, is actually like the blade and is sharp as one as well. Because Rei holds onto the sheath in battle to fight with, the metal gloves are necessary. The sheathe is about an 1mm thick with 3 holes in the along it. The actual blade of the sword is 1/2 mm thick and isn’t used to fight with. It is a piercing red color that contrasts with the completely white and purple sheathe.


Arashi no iki (Breath of Storms): When Rei releases, all of the reiatsu that would be gained from a release instead is infused into his sword. When all the energy is depleted or is at a state where the abilities cannot be used, it regenerates 3% of Rei’s maximum reiatsu until it is full.

Midori ryuu (Green Stream): Rei can release a powerful green shockwave from the sheathe. Each time he uses this, the sheath takes away 20% of the full energy used for the attack from the sword and stores this power for the next time this attack is used. The energy is continuously stacked upon previously taken power. When one moments energy has been taken from the sword three times, the energy becomes permanently ingrained and is no longer taken from the sword. The amount of energy stored cannot exceed 5% of Rei’s maximum reiatsu, this doubling upon achieving bankai. When the sword has reached this limit, the shockwave gets no stronger than what is already stacked. The range of the shockwave is 20 meters and the width and height is 10 meters. Speed and strength is based on zanjutsu. This attack costs 250 reiatsu. He can use this 3 times a turn.

Arashi no ikari (Wrath of the Storms) When Midori ryuu has reached its limit, this ability can be used. When Rei strikes the enemy either with sword or body, he marks them. Afterwards he must pay 5% of his reiatsu to activate the effect. Half of the total amount of stored energy in the sheathe is added to all of his opponents reiatsu costs for 4 turns. There is a 4 turn cooldown before he can use this again and all of the power stored is gone.

 
I'm using a spec point earned from Vice-Captaincy to add an ability and adjust the current one.

Link for point of reference

Ability: Kuro Tacchi (Dark Touch)

The jian is coated with a mix of deep purple and black. Using the tactics from Seeping Darkness, the attack will cause opponents’ movements to be lethargic and less skillful. The primary combat stat of the victim is reduced by 10% of Mizuki's Zanjutsu for three turns. The effects of this attack begin after she makes a solid strike on the opponent. This will cost 5% of her reiatsu. The ability cannot stack; it can only be renewed by striking an opponent again on the recovery round or later.

Ability: Kuro Kansen (Dark Infection)

By paying 3% reiatsu, Mizuki will release dark energy from her blade that affects the blood and damages all flesh that it passes through, causing extreme pain as it moves through the bloodstream. After a while, the victim will find themselves in constant pain and they won't be able to sleep or find any rest. If left untreated, they will experience visual hallucinations and nausea.
 
O hay its shades turn to post in here. :3

Unholy: Denied for 3 weeks (As in wait 3 weeks until you resubmit a kai). Barely anything has changed here and your submissions lead me to believe you either didn't bother to read or don't completely understand the kai FAQ. Frankly me and Van are tired of the constant denials so now you have plenty of time to come up with and proof a kai that won't be denied and which won't be resubmitted in three months.

Harm: Approved



Note for your benevolent Kai Staff: Ban kai have 1(one) ability slot: they are diverse and strong and cool. After that, they have 3(three) attack slots that are more tame, and typically have a cost and material effect. People seem to mis-labeling or misunderstanding this.
 
Yay.... I can finally submit my bankai I am so happy.
Bankai

Name: Aquila di Piume d'Acciaio

Form: Once released Aquila takes the form of a special suit to protect Lucas and grant his greater fighting ability in combat. A pair of green blades extend four inches past his elbow and along his forearms and curve around to the front of his knuckles. The blades are about two inches wide and are mode out of pure energy, little lighter green wisps of the energy whisk and dance around the blades as if they were alive.

Other than the blades his arms are bare up to his shoulders. His chest is covered in a silver breastplate and upon closer inspection is engraved along the entire piece is a pattern of interwoven feathers. From his waist down to his feet, he is also covered in the same type of metal with matching engravings.

A solid metal mask wraps around his head blocking off his ears, nose, mouth and eyes while leaving his out in the open as it connects down to the breastplate and protects his neck as well. Despite the fact everything on his face is covered his senses are not hindered at all.

Ability 1: Tseen Foo

The will of Aquila and Lucas combined has grown to such a degree that their strength and will to protect people has granted him the power to weaken any and all attacks down to basic attacks when slammed against his barriers. Showing their opponents the meaningless ideals of attacking them.

During any round Lucas is able to pay 3% of his max Reiatsu to cause any barrier he casts in the round to have an absorption effect equal to 30% of his Kidou stat. This effect only absorbs damage that is above the base damage of any attack the barrier blocks.

Attack 1: Altair

Aquila is the epitome of bakudou mastery and has granted Lucas with the ability ‘Altair’. This ability grants Lucas the ability to strengthen any bakudou spell he casts making his spells more fearsome and the face of his enemies, and allows him to also cast more spells. Altair is represented as the wings of the eagle.

While Aquila is activated Lucas is able to amplify the strength of his bakudous by up to 5% of his reiatsu. This additional reiatsu spent is not applied to his kidou threshold.

Attack 2: Deneb el Okab

The tail of the eagle grants Lucas with unique ability granting him the power to with call a part of the cost of any spell he casts should it miss its mark and granting him greater longevity in the heat of battle. Lucas’ hands shimmer a light green color when the power activates.

Any targeted bakudou spell that does not hit an opponent returns 50% of the spells cost back to Lucas and only the 50% he spends is applied to his threshold.


Attack 3: Bezek

Aquila during its transition to his next stage has retained its former ability granting Lucas complete mastery over the kidou tree, bakudou

While in bankai, Aquila grants him the ability to bypass Bakudous at such a level that any bakudou he bypasses is cast at 100% strength.
 
Shikai

Valdnad
"Tillhall, Valdnad”

[Form]

Zanpakutou form does not change.

[Spirit]
The spirit of Valdnad makes itself known as floating indigo specter with no legs visible, and mostly translucent and illuminated.

[Inner World]
Svea’s inner world is limited to a dark, rocky island surrounded by black seas. Two structures are situated on the lonely island, a lighthouse and a home for a caretaker. The home appears abandoned, with rotting floors and peeling wallpaper inside. Long halls seem to go on forever with numerous doors leading to hidden rooms. Water is visible out of every window as if the lighthouse had never existed at all when inside.


[Poltergeist] - たたり
Poltergeist’s primary ability is deceptive in its simplicity. By expending 250 reiatsu per every turn it’s active, Poltergeist allows Svea to freely manipulate objects within fifteen feet of her using her mind. This telekinetic influence is limited to inanimate objects, or beings with very low reiatsu. The maximum combined weight she can lift with Poltergeist cannot exceed 250 pounds for every 1,000 points in Zanjutsu.


[Troggen Ande] 本当の精神
"True Spirit”

While telekinesis in and of itself has very few offensive uses, Svea’s Troggen Ande allows her to apply her power in more direct ways. Once an object is in her grasp, she can focus her telekinetic abilities on it -- causing it to accelerate with great velocity and momentum. As with Poltergeist, Troggen Ande is deceptively powerful -- as even the smallest of objects can be pushed to extreme speeds and hit with an incredible amount of force. Each use of Troggen Ande costs Svea 2% of her reiatsu.



[Skarm] スクリーン
"Screen”

While her zanpakutou is released, Svea is acutely aware of everything within its field of effect. With this augmented spacial awareness, the Shinigami can counter attacks on her very quickly and efficiently. By paying 5% of her reiatsu, Svea can surround herself in a dense shell of telekinetic energy that acts as a barrier -- blocking inbound attacks and forcing them away from herself.
 
Van be gone so thus another week of shades posting

Bob: Approved. Keep in mind against barrier break techs for your ability they would still do damage equal to what they cost without being effected~
Bunz: Approved

Wow so difficult.
 
Spec Point
Acquired from Captaincy of Cerberus Corporation


残虐無道
Fujin – "Inhumanity"

|Manifestation|
His own powers having mutated with his exposure to the insurmountable amount of chemicals within Kurohi Hourou's own body during their brief encounter, Arano has experienced both an evolution and a regression of his Awakening in terms of his capabilities.

Upon being utilized, Fujin warps his body on a much more base level: slowly coating his body with marrow in a way that appears to replace his skin entirely. This thin membrane is easily broken, but regenerates at such a rate that all damage to it is rendered relatively moot. The more his powers are utilized, the further this membrane spreads in an almost pot-mark fashion.​

|Shikaka Ri|
The token trait of his powers, Shikaka Ri, stays true to its original capabilities entirely...just in a different manner. With the dilution of his own chemical makeup (a vital component in his status as a Chimera project), Shikaka Ri has become unable to form a construct of marrow larger than a square foot.

Quantity, however, is now a much more viable venue of use. Thus, by paying 300 reiatsu, Arano can create up to 3 of these miniscule constructs to mould as he sees fit (with the three constructs adhering to the same shape within their selected mould). Making up for the seeming lack of size that once ruled Arano's creations, these condensed ones' have a durability that far surpasses most others, capable of clashing with any decently-sized weapon regardless of the size difference.​

|Kirekomi|
A regressed strength once discarded in favour of Arano's growing need to match up against titanic foes, now resurfaced with his declination in need for lethal combat. Upon contact with either the membrane of marrow created by Fujin, or any construct of Shikaka Ri's, Kirekomi becomes an available ability.

Paying 1% upon contact, a thin needle of marrow breaks off into the target's skin, piercing only lightly but causing a definitive pain. Every round following, Arano may choose to pay 1% per needle used to force a growth of said needle, causing it to dig in and worm its way below the surface accordingly with the amount of energy paid, fully capable of burrowing its way through arteries, organs, and even opposing marrow on its quest to create an exit wound.​

|Shoukyaku|
Even with Arano's less inclined personality for destruction, the dangerous cocktail of chemicals created by his exposure to Kurohi's matured powers created a volatile new ability – Shoukyaku.

Overloading any designated construct (either of Shikaka Ri or Kirekomi) or Fujin's marrow membrane with reiatsu by paying 4% to it, it blackens and chars, exploding upon contact with a solid surface. This effect acts similar to an afterburner combined with a grenade, creating a pressure wave that can launch either Arano or his target while spreading shrapnel throughout the vicinity.​
 
Spec Point
Spec Point from Halcyonic Entropy PMs
Pimeyden Kukka


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Release Phrase: Kuki, Pimeyden Kukka (Bloom, Flower of Darkness)[/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Form:[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The sword itself has only few cosmetic changes, turning to black in colour, while hilt turns crimson. A three foot long vine grows out of the hilt and wraps around Shizuka's arm ending just at the shoulder, where a small black rose lays. [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Ability 1 - [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The rose on Shizuka's shoulder is nurtured by her reiatsu. As a result, it consumes 2% of her reiatsu per turn to grow. [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Ability 2 - [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The rose can channel the reiatsu it has absorbed to enhance its wielder's kidou. By spending 1.5 times the cost of a kidou spell, Shizuka can imbue the spell with a numbing poison. The extra cost must be supplied entirely by the flower. If a person is hit with this poisonous kidou, they will suffer a penalty to their highest combat stat (Zanjutsu/Hakuda/Combat/Rage) equal to 10% of Shizuka's kidou stat for three rounds.[/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Ability 3 - [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The rose can channel the reiatsu it has absorbed to enhance its wielder's kidou. By spending 1.5 times the cost of a kidou spell, Shizuka can imbue the spell with a hallucinogen poison. The extra cost must be supplied entirely by the flower. If a person is hit with this poisonous kidou, they will suffer a penalty to their kidou/ability stat equal to 10% of Shizuka's kidou stat for three rounds.[/FONT]
 
Erm ... yay shikai? :3​

Mushoku no Kujaku
Colorless Peacock

「 inner world 」

Yuurei’s inner world takes the form of a suspended land which possesses a kind of exotic beauty. Its spacious ground is mostly covered with a vast array of flowers, all of which are poisonous. At the heart of the suspended land stood a castle made of diamonds, one which Yuurei herself cannot enter. Trees are scanty in the area, yet all of them shows evidence of old age. Her inner world often portrays a starry night sky, except on moments when she is troubled, when the sky turns into either a crimson dusk, or a colorful display of aurora borealis. Beneath the speck of land is a vast blue sea, with plenty of water lilies floating around.

「 manifestation 」

Mushoku no Kujaku takes the form of a large, pure white peacock. Its tail is barely open, and its ‘eyes’ consist of hues between black and white instead of the flamboyant greens and ceruleans. Its body is roughly one and a half meters long, and its tail extends to an overwhelming length of two and a half meters, which makes it a relatively larger peacock. Most of the times, a faint, ethereal glow radiates from her plumage, which makes her easy to spot in Yuurei’s inner world.

Image Reference
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「 shikai 」

あなたの本当の色を示して、孔雀の無色
Anatano hontou no shoku wo shimeshi te , Mushoku no Kujaku
"Show your true colors, Colorless Peacock"

Her zanpakutou consists of a fan with thirteen blades, with netted needle-like blades criss-crossing to hold the wintry blades together. Instead of ‘eyes’, there are small circles on the blade itself, each depicting a different symbol. The length of the fan is roughly 75 cm.

Image Reference
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Ability
みおぼえ
Mioboe
Remembrance

Through Mioboe, every person who have seen Mushoku no Kujaku becomes immortalized in Yuurei’s memories through symbols, in such a way that a fragment of them becomes imbued on one of the 'eyes'. This symbol can take absolutely any form, but mostly a symbol in which Yuurei remembers them most.

Once an eye becomes imbued with a symbol, a white orb appears in her inner world which stores information on the person -- all the abilities it had shown her, and the remembrance of the person itself. With this, it seeks to know who the person is, not what he can do. Also, through Mioboe, Yuurei can discover a significant moment in a person’s life, and it can be stored in the orbs too, but this highly depends on the person’s personal connection to Yuurei. It discovers that information not by number of rounds, but by encounters.

Fated Alliance - 1 encounter
United Resistance - 2 encounters
United Front - 3 encounters
Nothing attained - 4 encounters

For every 10, 000 connection gained, the number of encounters needed to learn a secret lessens.
Side note: This does not analyze the technicalities and the inner workings of the person's releases, techniques and such; but she may view these little orbs to analyze it herself.​
Attack
汚職
Oshoku
Corruption

Any time during a fight, Yuurei can use 5% of her reiatsu to increase the lead in her blade, and by the same token, enable her to increase the amount of lead of whatever it hits while the ability is active. It lasts two turns, and will need two turns before it can be used again. If it inflicts a wound on the opponent, it will subject the opponent to lead poisoning. During the fight, minor symptoms such as abdominal pain, headache, confusion and irritability will occur. When this ability is activated, the fan's edges glow in a faint gray hue.

Although its effects may persist even after the fight, it can be easily healed with Chiyudou or any medical treatment. However, unless it is treated, the body contamination will continue, which can lead to interference of the body’s processes.

For every 2, 500 Connection that Yuurei gains after attaining shikai, she can prolong the use of Oshoku by one turn, maximum of five turns.
 
Seraph - Clarification needed Everything looked fine, except for the lines in the first ability:

"hus, by paying 300 reiatsu, Arano can create up to 3 of these miniscule constructs to mould as he sees fit (with the three constructs adhering to the same shape within their selected mould). Making up for the seeming lack of size that once ruled Arano's creations, these condensed ones' have a durability that far surpasses most others, capable of clashing with any decently-sized weapon regardless of the size difference."

If you are saying he can spend 300 rei a round to make 3 1'x1' zanpakutou strength objects? If so, that's a little much.

If you are saying he can spend 300 rei a round to generate 3 1'x1' mold-able bone pieces, that's just fine.

Shadow Threader - Approved.

Note: You don't have to make it (with the kai being as it is otherwise) a forced eating of your rei every round. You could make it so you choose to stuff up to 5% of your rei into the rose. Your call, feel free to mod that if you wish.

Amaryllis - Approved

We think we are ok with this. Odd, coming from us, I know. But, be sure to understand that your degree centrality on an 'encounter' is 1. That is, you can't meet someone who knows someone else you know, and get info about this 3rd party. Its got to be a person you are meeting with to you sort of thing.
 
Adelaide Pierce: Shikai Submission

LASHIEL
The Seducer


"Any last words? Lapsus, Lashiel!"
Lapsus is from Angelorum Lapsus, "Fall of the Angels".

ZANPAKUTOU SHIKAI FORM
Upon releasing Shikai, the tsuba slides along the blade, leaving a quarterstaff-like pole in its place. The etchings on the blade transfer to being on the staff itself, in a pure white that turns red upon use of Kidou. The top of the staff extends in a rather visually stunning but harmless blade of fire that settles into position as a scythe blade of black with silver edges on both the inside and outside of the curve. At the center of the poll-side edge is a sigil of several simple lines forming something reminiscent of a rudimentary kanji, but not actually of any real word. This is the symbol of Lashiel, the Seducer.

THE SEDUCER; LASHIEL
Sometimes called "Lash" by Adelaide, Lashiel herself is a woman with long black hair, eyes of pure black and very little clothing. Her form feels at once alluringly sensual and yet is accompanied by a feeling of discomfort akin to having forgotten something important. Her voice, too, is striking. It is like an angelic song, but it also gives a sense of something amiss. Lashiel has the ability to suppress or manifest wings of pure (though clearly harmless) fire.

The dual form of her beauty and discomfort in form is matched in personality. While Lashiel is a graceful companion (wise, poetic, talkative), she clearly has an agenda. Lashiel will consistently tempt Adelaide to use Shikai in circumstances where to do so would be overly dramatic, inappropriate, or reckless. In all honesty, Lashiel would like to get away with convincing Adelaide to use Shikai for kicks on a Saturday night.

Essential to maintaining a functional relationship, let alone earning the respect of the Seducer, is overcoming the temptation to use excessive force. Whereas most zanpakutou are symbiotic with their wielder, Lashiel seeks the "life" (as she calls it) that she derives from use, and views her wielder as a mechanism whereby her powers are released. Therefore, the relationship sought by this sword spirit is not truly symbiotic. She is also willing to let Adelaide believe anything in order to achieve these goals.


LASHIEL'S ABILITIES
Hellfire
A purely Hadou-enhancing ability, Hellfire allows the casting of Hadou at an additional 1.5 times Reiatsu and Kidou cost for a corresponding 20% boost in spellcasting area, power and/or duration. If used with the chromatic fire Hadou or actual Fire-based Hadou, the cost is two times and enhancement is increased to 40%. In addition, Hellfire adds a cosmetic effect: the area both around Lashiel and around the target smell strongly of sulfur.

Fallen Allure
Lashiel can inflict a group of enemies with what any good seducer would: lust. At the initial cost of 10% Adelaide’s Reiatsu she can inflict any single target within five meters with a powerful... we’ll call it infatuation. The effect varies in strength based on the relative power of her adversary. Those with a Reiatsu more than twice Adelaide’s who are afflicted find it hard to hurt her too badly: they cannot use Kidou or abilities against Adelaide with a higher cost than one-third Adelaide’s Reiatsu. Those with a Reiatsu similar to Adelaide’s have an even harder time, being unable to attack Adelaide consecutively. Lastly, those less than half Adelaide’s strength are so overcome with desire that they are stunned each time they attack Adelaide. At the cost of 5% of her Reiatsu per turn, Adelaide can extend this effect for up to four turns. At any time, a person may pay Reiatsu equal to Adelaide’s overall investment to rid themselves of this affliction.
Note on Allure
Shades said that this cost might be a bit high for the effect. Any adjustments to balance it out would be helpful.
 
Kuusou (Daydream)

Form - Arashi’s eyes will become a soothing light brown. His hands will be coated in tan reiatsu cloak and a fine mist made of reishi spills from his hands.


Ability 1 - Yume no Kuni (Land of Dreams)
He can pay 5% of his reiatsu to flood the area within fifteen meters of himself with the mist and force anyone touching it to enter into a dream-like state. In this state, a combatant’s agility/hohou/sonido and primary attack stat are lowered by the amount paid into the mist. They feel as if they are in the state of half-awareness between sleeping and waking. This lasts for 4 turns unless he pays another 5% to keep the effect going.

Ability 2 - Yume Keshiki (Dream-scape)

Yume no Kuni alone is nothing more than a dense fog of reiatsu. Not exactly the best place to have a dream! But by paying 100 reiatsu upon activation, Arashi may change what an opponent sees inside the fog. A victim of this ability could see and hear anything from an ocean to a desert to a mountain range high in the sky. However, this change only affects an opponents sight and sound and lasts as long as the mist is active.

Ability 3 - Masayume (Dream Coming True)

When people enter Yume no Kuni, they become susceptible to their own desires and fears. Arashi can spend 3% of his reiatsu to show anyone within his fog their greatest friend, worst enemy, or someone important to them. Arashi can only create one apparition per person. Each apparition can be touched, but their insides are filled with explosively charged reiatsu. If touched, the reiatsu inside of the apparition combusts violently after a few seconds of physical comtact. The explosion has a two meter radius. Arashi can consciously decide to neutralize the internal reiatsu and allow a victim to interact with the apparition. Regardless of what happens, he can only maintain each guest for three turns before they combust. Arashi can only summon two apparitions per turn and only four can be active at one time.
 

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