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Using the spec point won as 3rd place in the Espada Cup.
This is the toned down final draft, enjoy.

Shikai - Gravios, The Armored Terror

Release Phrase: "Swallow whole my despair, Gravios!”

Manifestation: Life riddled with loss and tragedy, friends lost and slain in the wake of the blood red Queen. Deep beneath the surface of Mabara Tsubaki lies an irresistible urge, a desire that supersedes and encompasses all: To Endure. Body and soul have been subjected to nearly every manner of assault known to man, from the teeth and claws of innumerable Hollows to the painfully invasive gaze of Leon Valiente Simeon himself. Countless lacerations, burns, eviscerations and the complete and utter rending of both body and spirit have exacted a heavy price from the Captain of the Blood Templar. This pain gave rise to the abyssal fire that Tsubaki wields so fiercely in battle, but alone it is not enough to guard her waning heart from the growing dread.

Over time both the soul of Tsubaki and that of her blade, Ippozenshin have been steeped in the very fires of hell, unholy flame that tempers as well as ravages her soul and very life energy. In order to sate that most primal of desires the flame has acted as both forge and pyre, weathering away at her lifespan while honing and making more resolute the body and heart that contain it. This radical reshaping of Tsubaki’s soul has changed the spirit of her blade as well, melting away nearly any trace of Ippozenshin that may have remained after emerging from the very forge of Hell itself.

The act of endurance itself carries twofold conditions within the seemingly innocuous deed. Firstly, one must weather all assaults upon flesh and essence no matter the severity and fervor contained by those who would call themselves enemy. This has given rise to the massive network of jutting plates and spines of stone and steel that dot the entirety of the hide of Gravios like a self-contained landscape of hostility. A seething and molten core of the most potent of anger and rage gives shelter and succour to the vulnerable heart contained deep within the inferno. Should a foe ever be made known who could strike through all semblances of defense and protection, her heart would be in the utmost of peril.

The second condition of endurance is the removal of that which would seek to cause pain and suffering, the forcible exorcism of any threat to Tsubaki’s dwindling lifespan. When a ferrous shell of nigh impervious nature and the boiling blood stoked by the fires of war proves inadequate, the very flames that keep warm the heart of Mabara Tsubaki may be whipped and churned to an unbridled inferno, devouring and wiping away any threat that would persist.

Visual Reference
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Appearance: Gravios is the most pure and palpable form of rage known to any realm, mortal or otherwise. The very zenith of brute cruelty and malice, unfeeling and unyielding. A colossus of stone and steel given life in a form born in abomination of both Heaven and Earth, standing nearly four stories tall by conventional measure. Jutting lances of ferrous fury dot his surface like a mountainous crag, beset by two eyes forged of the purest rubies of Hell. A great spire of bleached rock rises above his stout head in a horn that seeks to skewer the very clouds above, flanked on both sides by two gargantuan wings of weblike metal that shimmer and gleam even in darkness. The massive bulk of this unearthly wyvern is kept in balance by a long and deadly tail, measuring ten meters to the tip.

As the unholy blade makes the transition to its Shi Kai form, the modest ebony katana is replaced by a massive hammer, jutted with countless sharpened steel spines. Appearing at first to be a replica of the massive skull of Gravios, the weapon is in fact a fraction of the beast’s terrifying power given life in the world of the tangible. When initially summoned the jaws of this horror remained locked shut in a unified surface, but upon using certain techniques in battle the weapon’s maw opens, venting traces of dark smoke that issues forth from the Hellfire embers that are kept just behind the countless honed teeth.

Measuring one and a half meters from the end of the handle to the apex of the dragon’s spiked crown, the hammer weighs nearly thirty pounds in total. It is heavy enough to shunt weapons and shields, but little enough in weight that the Captain is able to wield it with the same speed and ferocity as a traditional sword.

Visual Reference Courtesy of my Shitty Phone
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Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, Unerring Infernal Blood - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power the world itself is barred from bringing about harm. Each round a shimmering scale of honed steel affixes itself to Tsubaki’s skin (usually on the face, neck, torso and arms) and becomes a part of her body as though it had been since the beginning.

Forged in the endless inferno of her very soul, each piece of glinting metal is a physical testament to all that which Tsubaki has endured, and will continue to do so. Desire made manifest, the plates of the Hell-born Wyvern will shield their charge through any injury.

Each scale grants the Captain a cumulative 1% Damage Reduction from any and all attacks, be they physical, magical or immaterial. As they absorb damage, the scales tarnish into a muddled bronze and fall away, replacing themselves at a ratio of two new scales for every single scale lost. The total number of scales Tsubaki can wear at any given time is twenty, and should the technique continue to operate any new scales will simply fall away.

Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Unyielding Infernal Breath That Splits The Earth - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power any who would seek to bring harm against Tsubaki have all but sealed their fate. Stoked by the very gallows of the Righteous Devil herself, an inferno whose true strength lies beyond the veil of definition or measure is tended. This flame burns in the most resplendent of ruby hues, mingling with the abyssal fires of Tsubaki’s heart like a malicious kaleidoscope.

At a cost of 30% of her total (Not current) Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequalled speed and ferocity. The destructive force is fortified by her own devotion to the killing arts, and for every 5,000 Zanjutsu she possesses (Including any fortifying techniques/effects) the beam is honed and made 10% faster, and its range is increased by 10 Meters. (The initial speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou)

In addition, any scales that remain on Tsubaki’s form dislodge themselves, each one adding 1% to the final damage of the attack. While the initial damage from Wrath of the Titan Lord can be mitigated and reduced via techniques and skills, the additional damage from the scales cannot be prevented or redirected.

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Ban Kai - Gravios, Immortal Tyrant of Death’s Flame

Appearance: Breaking the seal which holds the whole of her unbridled power in check, assuming the final form of the Infernal Wyvern is undertaken with the most serious of conviction, and is in itself nothing less than a vow to win, no matter the cost. The abyssal fire that burns from Tsubaki’s heart ascends to a level previously matched only in the skies above Tokyo. The doldrums of catastrophe are stirred, and the very heavens overhead are bent low in obedience. The dark and unstoppable energies of the Wyvern’s full power coalesce the clouds and turn the skies black, churning about the very air into the storm that will unmake creation itself.

While the hammer itself undergoes no change aside from the eyes and flames inherent in the manifestation of the unholy Wyvern grow to their most malicious, and purest hues of ruby. Tsubaki however, is another story. Her own eyes match the glistening crimson hues of her weapon. The smooth ebony hair that normally hangs calmly around her crown takes on a more jagged appearance, somewhat resembling the spines of the Wyvern contained in her soul.

In the blink of an eye Tsubaki is transformed into an unstoppable engine of destruction, Shinigami and spirit melded in unrivaled ferocity.

Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, The Seven Tragedies of Man - The scales of Gravios glitter in an everlasting hue of night, each brimming with the intent to cause pain beyond measure to the master that they defend. Two new scales affix themselves to the Captain’s form each round, granting 2% Damage Reduction per scale.

Through tragedy and pain one becomes stronger, through suffering one is sculpted into what they will one day rise to be. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm gives rise to an internal fervor that seeks vengeance against those who would inflict the suffering.

When Tsubaki is struck, two scales fall away per attack that the Captain endures. However, each scale that is peeled away brings to bear an event of great sorrow and loss in the life of an attacker. This recollection occurs in the foes mind, and cannot be circumvented via any mental discipline or conditioning. As before, each scale that is torn away is replaced by two its equal, stopping at a maximum of twenty scales.

Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Fury That Rends the Heavens - Rage made real, the ruby and abyssal flames that Tsubaki commands coalesce and concentrate within the maw of her hammer, the whole of her energies are set upon killing intent. At a cost of 50% of her total (Not current) Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequalled speed and ferocity. The destructive force is fortified by her own devotion to the killing arts, and for every 2,000 Zanjutsu she possesses (Including any fortifying techniques/effects) the beam is honed and made 15% faster, and its range is increased by 15 Meters. (The initial speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou)

Through tragedy and pain one becomes vicious, through suffering one is sculpted into their true
cruelty which will be inflicted upon the world. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm leads the calloused soul to carve their vengeance upon a world that would seek their sorrow.

Alternately, the Captain may choose to release the energy on a physical strike with the hammer, concentrating the whole of the unholy fire in a single instant. In addition, any scales that remain on Tsubaki’s form dislodge themselves, each one adding 2% to the final damage of the attack. While the initial damage from Wrath of the Titan Lord can be mitigated and reduced via techniques and skills, the additional damage from the scales cannot be prevented or redirected.

Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.

Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her total (Not current) Reiatsu, summoning a great etched stone from the Earth below. Upon this obelisk is the final testament of destruction, etched by the fiery hand of the Captain herself. This stone rises thirty meters from base to tip, gleaming with runes of burning fury that gaze upon all creation with ire. (Should the cost of this attack exceed Tsubaki’s remaining Reiatsu pool, she is instead reduced to 1,000 Reiatsu and the damage is adjusted accordingly)

The runed monolith carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, detonating in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a twenty meter radius. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.

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My (modded post discussion) PM to Shade says:

Kai reviews

Ig
Approved, just note that in ability 2 for each target beyond the first in range, only 1% rei is drained from them.

Approved baby. Yeah.

Hiren

Ability 1: Note that this manifestation of memories can't change Ciro or anyone else's features, position, and so on with its manifestation and we're good.

Ability 2: Summon . . . math adds up.

Summon abilities: You still have 1 too many.

Tethys: This is pretty good, but you need a limit on use, as unlimited empathic blocks is too strong a defense. (3x?)

Okaenos: No problem. If you're going to split into 2 summon abilities per 1 release slot, though, the power is shikai level for the two, so max debuff of 15%

Iapetos: Needs work. 1, a 'lock' in a slot like this would be like, locks 1 thing he sees for 3-5 rounds, can only lock 1 thing/target for that duration

Resubmit and we can spit shine this to gtg fast.
Beaks

shikai
Note: Nice looking weapon, are you trying to get a date with Theron with that sexy beast? It'd work.

Ability 1: I'm not sure if you want a technique that is actually a type of damage reduction, in which case for a shi kai, we could say that you ignore all minor wounds entirely. Or, if you want to be able to erect a barrier that stymies off a certain % of damage by forming a skin around her body. Either way is fine, but just need to tweak the way the mechanics read to fit that.

Ability 2: Shi kai are 'typically' limited to 10% rei use in a single slot. Since yours is a two slot kai, I'd be quite willing to say 15% is find for rei use from shikai. The faster moving part and the unstoppable damage part should go. Just tie it in to your zanjutsu stat and call it a day. I will not approve kais that: give 2 for 1 uses on reiatsu, as well.

Post talk: 20% is cero equiv, I can live with a cero equiv.

Bankai
Note: I love your descs in this.

Ability: Just like the shi kai version, in terms of my concerns. If I left it as is, you'd basically end up with a 40% rei barrier for free over time, that's too much. Considering you're using an ability slot of a BK here, though, I think we can make this sexy. What would be a normally minor wound is ignored, what would be a moderate damage is minor, and what would be major is moderate. Or, if you wish, you can have the ability to sheath yourself in a 40% rei body barrier. I'm flexible here, so talk to me and we'll make this work.

Attack 1: 50% rei beam of death. Cool with me. Tie it to her Zan stat and call it a day. The part about the scale tie in, speed changes, and so on, need to go. The part about using it with a melee hit is implicit, so doesn't need to be explicitly stated in the kai. (I did a collab once where I taught Harm's old 3rd div pc this very trick about energy attacks in kais.)

Attack 2: I like explosions. Right, your cost thing is wonky, so either say 95% of total rei, or 95% of remaining rei or do what I suggest belowj. In the advent of kidou amps being attached to attack slots of BKs, I'm more then willing to be flexible about kai costs to keep it fair for others. With that thought in mind, saying paying between 50% and 90% of total rei or some such. is perfectly workable. You could also increase the AoE range of the explosion a lot, for something this freaking expensive, saying 30-50m is plausible, of course, with the law of conservation of energy, keeping it tight would indeed, make the effect more deadly to those within.

Attack 3: Missing I want more death!

Resubmit this, because we both like where its going, and we'll get this mammoth mofo rolling.

P.S. Did you notice my sig in here somewhere?
 
Subbing it again and in a new way. Goodbye summon, hello human puppets. P.S. it's wordy but still has a lower WC than beaks' kais 8D. *challenges louhi for most creepy kai ever*

Name: Bochi Gekijou - "Graveyard Theatre"

Form:
Initially, there is no outward change to Ciro’s appearance. Crimson sparks of reiatsu snap, as he activates the full extent of his abilities appear around him. Every one of Ciro’s Tarot cards levitate from his deck, creating an enormous ring around Ciro and his combatants. The radius of this ring is equal to the radius of Mnemosyne. Projected from each card, humanoid figures representing each card stand along the circumference. Each being is in a gray-scale, golden banners wrapping around their eyes as blindfold. On each banner, the name of the Card is etched into it. Each figure is an empty shell, standing still and unmoving like puppets. Every once in a while, the puppet may repeat words Ciro has said in complete unison. These phantasms are not completely physical, and cannot affect the combatants in anyway. The final part of this devilish puppet theater is the quiet sound of an out-of-tune music box playing over the battlefield.​

Bachiatari Makuake - "Cursed Opening":
By selecting a Tarot Card from his deck, he can draw out specific memories involving the negative properties of the card. This costs 2% of his reiatsu, however, he does not need to activate the following portion of his awakening when the memory is read.

When the memory is read, he can choose to forcibly materialize the memory into a 30 meter radius around himself. As each turn passes, the illusion becomes closer to reality, as the events continuously loop in the background. This ability cannot change the features, position and so forth of Ciro or his opponent when activated.

By paying 2% per turn activated, first their sight is affected, allowing them to see the memory. Each turn, another sense, Hearing, Touch, Smell, and Taste, falls under its domain. Ciro can choose the order of the remaining senses. When touch is under the domain of the illusion, both Ciro and his target are able to freely interact with the inanimate objects in the environment. If an object is demolished, the broken pieces disappear, reforming again in their original location. Ciro can freely switch swap the memory he’s materializing by paying the cost once more. Doing so does not reset the sense counter.

Musei Makuai - "Silent Intermission":
Each Tarot card holds a fragment of his memories. As such, each husk is by extension, a piece of Ciro’s soul. Calling upon his old puppeteering abilities, he can create a reishi threads from each of his fingers, allowing to link himself up with one of the empty puppets. Unlike his old abilities, where he controlled the servants, he has now learned to become one of them. He can merge his physical body with the body of the being, taking the form of it instead. A weapon is created in Ciro’s hands the moment that he merges with the being. The merger with the puppet is not an armor, so wounds done to the puppet are the same as if they are done to Ciro. He can freely change which puppet shell he is in, but doing so does not heal any wounds that he has taken, instead all the wounds are transferred to the new shell, and by extension Ciro himself.

Due to each puppet representing his own memories, when merging with the puppet, he gains control over his opponent’s memories as well. By expending 5% of his reiatsu per strike, with each successful strike to his opponent, he is able to wipe a memory from their subconscious, with the happiest memories the first to be erased. Ciro can circumvent this requirement if needed and choose specific memories to wipe. Similar, but stronger than, the effects of the highest grade memory-chikan, the memories are locked away; however, outside influences may trigger the locked memory, causing the person to remember it. This repeated long term damage wears down their opponent’s pysche, hampering their ability to fight. Each strike reduces their main combat stat by the amount paid in (5% of his reiatsu) maxing at 30%. The debuff caused by each strike lasts 3 turns before waring off.
Youkai Shuukyoku - "Phantom Finale":
Though he almost never places full trust in an ally, Ciro has learned that sometimes it is necessary for success in battle. By paying 5% of his reiatsu, Ciro can create another set of reishi threads from each of his finger tips. With the consent of the target, he can link the strings up to a person he has United Front with. When this occurs, he gains control over the movements of each of the person’s limbs, allowing him to manipulate them in ways that they may not naturally be able to do.

If the target’s weight is below the amount he can lift with the AH base technique Internalize, he is able to lift them up into the air with his superhuman strength. When Ciro is freely able to control their limbs he can quickly cover for the target’s blind spots and manipulate them accordingly. This control remains for up to 4 turns before dissolving; however, it can be canceled earlier if needed. He can only link up to 1 person at a time.​
 
Resubbing my kai due to new rules, spec point not needed. Kai change effective post-tourney. I'll probably submit my Bankai soon too (since I'm in range for that), but I want to work some kinks out of that concept before I present it for critical review.

Shi no te - The Hand of Death
Release Phrase: "Reveal yourself, Shi no te."

Inner World:Ri's increase in powers and his strange fascination with the Mask of Nashru has caused the sword to evolve in response to Ri's own evolution. Previously represented by four winds, each representing a cardinal direction, Shi No Te is the aspect of the sword when the East Wind, known for his twisted and cruel ways, has become dominant. The avatar of the East Wind is similar to before, an angelic young man with hands stained in blood, but he sits now on a throne of bones, a long sword on his lap. Hollow Masks and Humans skulls alike form his throne. Each of the other winds (the North, South, and West) are forced to echo his every statement in sibiliant whispers, where they sit chained and forced to genuflect towards his dias.

Form: The Zanpakutou lengthens, becoming a single-edged nodachi. The back of the blade is correspondingly thicker, to compensate for the increased length of the blade's shaft. The sword appears to be a nimbus of wind corresponding to the dimensions of a single-edged nodachi.

Ability: Kaze no manto, "Cloak of Wind"
Similar to the fabled Assassin technique, 'Reiatsu no senpuka', Caishin can shape the reiatsu in his immediate area to mimic the ambient reiatsu in his immediate area and to hide his form, rendering him effectively undetectable to everything but touch and smell. He cannot create illusions or hide others with this ability.

'Kaze no manto' requires dedication and restraint, the act of attacking disrupts the delicate reiatsu manipulations required to maintain Kaze no manto, rendering him detectable in the moment of attack.

Caishin cannot hide the secondary effects of his actions. If, for example, Caishin was wading through a pool, his immediate presence would be obscured, but the waves and ripples he generated would not be.

This ability costs 3% of his reiatsu to engage and then maintain every turn, and renders ineffective all detection attempts that cost less than this to use. Ri can end and then restart 'Kaze no manto' at will.
 
Zanpakutou: Harbinger

For seven generations spanning thousands of years, each and every Ascanian patriarch has appeared the same. Similarly to that tradition, each has carried a zanpakutou of identical make. Next to nothing is known about the tradition of the weapon, or what its release capabilities may be, as none in recent history can attest to seeing its full release.

It is a slightly longer weapon over all, reaching nearly five and a half feet in total length, but of typical japanese make, with a curved, single edged blade of hundreds, if not thousands of folds extending from a tsuba protected hilt around a full-hilt length tang wrapped in sturdy leather and enhanced with a pure ivory cloth to improve grip. Its scabbard is a slender, bleached wood case designed to be worn on the hip, its cap and opening rimmed with pure silver of plain design.

Manifestation

A darkly clad specter of masters past and avatar present, Harbinger appears to the wielder as a beshadowed, cloaked figure who carries about a scythe, using the tool of harvest as a walking stick. Its voice comes with a chorus of six, each past wielder of the blade imparting a fraction of their psyche and grace into the weapon, as well as a part of their powers, allowing the release to evolve and grow distinct with each new wielder.

The landscape for this chorus of master's past is one of rolling, mist shrouded hills, similar to the ones that can be seen in the distance of the Ascania estate. The sun ever shifts its position in the sky, seeming to always be upon the back of the manifestation who dwells within, forever keeping its face out of sight.

When it does speak, Harbinger communicates through a dulcet chorus of six voices working in perfect symmetry and harmony to bring forth wisdom from thousands of years past.

Shikai
Phrase – Reap, Harbinger

Form
Harbinger extends and sprouts a long, jagged edged bone blade from the end of the now long, ivory shaft fashioned of dense bone, the segmentation and hue of it resembling a spine. Opposite the blade is a skull, shaped as a human’s, the jaw and set of the eyes suggesting malevolent intent. The overall length of the scythe is six feet and the blade extends three feet through its curve. By twisting the haft of the weapon correctly, the head of the scythe becomes detached, linked by a bone linked chain that can extend up to 15 meters akin to a kusari gama.

Ability – To Cut Through – 3% per round
Harbinger’s traditional power has passed on to Theron, the ability of the weapon to apply a tremendous cutting force to things it encounters. When stopped by a barrier or obstacle, Harbinger uses the reiatsu infused into it to explosively increase its cutting potential, using 30% of the user’s zanjutsu stat to determine damage, though it cuts against flesh normally.

Attack – Threads of Fate – 1% reiatsu
. By paying 1% of his reiatsu, Theron is able to animate Harbinger’s chain, controlling fully its course, extension, and retraction even at normally impossible angles by using his zanjutsu stat.

Vizard – To Cut Through Light – 6% rage, 3% emptiness

By consuming a strong portion of the hollow power within Theron’s soul, Harbinger is able to attain a unique power to his wielding of the blade. By expending 6% rage and generating 3% emptiness, Theron is able to allow the blade of Harbinger, while under the effect of To Cut Through, to apply this damage to all things that it touches, save living flesh. If it is able to overcome the power of what it travels through, the blade continues on unhindered and will do so until it meets something strong enough to stop its motion.


Harbinger of Dusk

Form

When in its full release, Harbinger elongates the hafts of bone to a total of nine feet, and another, opposite facing blade emerges from the other end of the haft from the first, both reaching 5’ in total length. Each has a sinister skull set across from the extending blade, while the connecting chains on both end of the pole arm now extend up to 30m.

Ability – Immortal Tyrant of Night
Touched by Theron’s soul, Harbinger has taken on to itself some of his own unique qualities. Expressed in his final release, for each 2% reiatsu that Theron gains through any means, a single wound of his choosing is reduced one category in severity. However, due to the strain on one's body and the limits of of regeneration, only three lethal wounds may be potentially healed.


Attack
– To Cut Through Reality -5% reiatsu
With his final release expressed, Harbinger’s power grows magnified. By consuming 5% of Theron’s reiatsu, Both of the weapon’s heads may inflict 30% of his zanjutsu stat to all things they touch, save flesh, which is cut normally. This power leaves a distinctive noise behind the weapon’s motions, air rushing in to fill that which is destroyed in the blade’s wake.

Attack – Threads of Destiny’s End -1%
Taking some of Theron’s spiritual pressure for its own, Harbinger’s chains are able to be animated, each moving independently and taking unnatural angles, their movements controlled by his zanjutsu stat.

Attack – Reaper of Life - 2% of reiatsu
By imbuing the blade with a touch of his spiritual pressure, Theron is able to coax forth its core nature and reap from that which opposes him, in order to feed his own strength. For the remainder of the round, each thing the blade applies its cutting force to with spiritual pressure transfers up to 2% of Theron’s reiatsu from it back to him.

Vizard – Reaper of Souls – 6% rage, 3% emptiness
When tapping into the power of his hybrid nature, the touch of Habinger becomes yet more dangerous to his enemies. By draining 6% of his rage and generating 3% emptiness each round, Harbinger is able to harvest the power and efficacy from what it touches and bestow a portion of that vitality onto Theron. Each touch of the blade inflicts a 5% penalty to his opponents strongest combat statistic based on Theron’s zanjutsu, to a maximum of 20%, while adding 3% to Theron’s own zanjutsu, to a maximum of 15%.
 
Shikai - Gravios, The Armored Terror

Release Phrase: "Swallow whole my despair, Gravios!”

Manifestation: Life riddled with loss and tragedy, friends lost and slain in the wake of the blood red Queen. Deep beneath the surface of Mabara Tsubaki lies an irresistible urge, a desire that supersedes and encompasses all: To Endure. Body and soul have been subjected to nearly every manner of assault known to man, from the teeth and claws of innumerable Hollows to the painfully invasive gaze of Leon Valiente Simeon himself. Countless lacerations, burns, eviscerations and the complete and utter rending of both body and spirit have exacted a heavy price from the Captain of the Blood Templar. This pain gave rise to the abyssal fire that Tsubaki wields so fiercely in battle, but alone it is not enough to guard her waning heart from the growing dread.

Over time both the soul of Tsubaki and that of her blade, Ippozenshin have been steeped in the very fires of hell, unholy flame that tempers as well as ravages her soul and very life energy. In order to sate that most primal of desires the flame has acted as both forge and pyre, weathering away at her lifespan while honing and making more resolute the body and heart that contain it. This radical reshaping of Tsubaki’s soul has changed the spirit of her blade as well, melting away nearly any trace of Ippozenshin that may have remained after emerging from the very forge of Hell itself.

The act of endurance itself carries twofold conditions within the seemingly innocuous deed. Firstly, one must weather all assaults upon flesh and essence no matter the severity and fervor contained by those who would call themselves enemy. This has given rise to the massive network of jutting plates and spines of stone and steel that dot the entirety of the hide of Gravios like a self-contained landscape of hostility. A seething and molten core of the most potent of anger and rage gives shelter and succour to the vulnerable heart contained deep within the inferno. Should a foe ever be made known who could strike through all semblances of defense and protection, her heart would be in the utmost of peril.

The second condition of endurance is the removal of that which would seek to cause pain and suffering, the forcible exorcism of any threat to Tsubaki’s dwindling lifespan. When a ferrous shell of nigh impervious nature and the boiling blood stoked by the fires of war proves inadequate, the very flames that keep warm the heart of Mabara Tsubaki may be whipped and churned to an unbridled inferno, devouring and wiping away any threat that would persist.

Visual Reference
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Appearance: Gravios is the most pure and palpable form of rage known to any realm, mortal or otherwise. The very zenith of brute cruelty and malice, unfeeling and unyielding. A colossus of stone and steel given life in a form born in abomination of both Heaven and Earth, standing nearly four stories tall by conventional measure. Jutting lances of ferrous fury dot his surface like a mountainous crag, beset by two eyes forged of the purest rubies of Hell. A great spire of bleached rock rises above his stout head in a horn that seeks to skewer the very clouds above, flanked on both sides by two gargantuan wings of weblike metal that shimmer and gleam even in darkness. The massive bulk of this unearthly wyvern is kept in balance by a long and deadly tail, measuring ten meters to the tip.

As the unholy blade makes the transition to its Shi Kai form, the modest ebony katana is replaced by a massive hammer, jutted with countless sharpened steel spines. Appearing at first to be a replica of the massive skull of Gravios, the weapon is in fact a fraction of the beast’s terrifying power given life in the world of the tangible. When initially summoned the jaws of this horror remained locked shut in a unified surface, but upon using certain techniques in battle the weapon’s maw opens, venting traces of dark smoke that issues forth from the Hellfire embers that are kept just behind the countless honed teeth.

Measuring one and a half meters from the end of the handle to the apex of the dragon’s spiked crown, the hammer weighs nearly thirty pounds in total. It is heavy enough to shunt weapons and shields, but little enough in weight that the Captain is able to wield it with the same speed and ferocity as a traditional sword.

Visual Reference Courtesy of my Shitty Phone
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Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, Unerring Infernal Blood - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power the world itself is barred from bringing about harm. Shimmering scales of honed steel affix themselves to Tsubaki’s skin (usually on the face, neck, torso and arms) and becomes a part of her body as though it had been since the beginning.

Forged in the endless inferno of her very soul, each piece of glinting metal is a physical testament to all that which Tsubaki has endured, and will continue to do so. Desire made manifest, the plates of the Hell-born Wyvern will shield their charge through any injury.

The scales grant the Captain the ability to mitigate damage from any and all attacks, be they physical, magical or immaterial. In essence this allows the woman to completely ignore minor wounds, treat moderate wounds as if they were minor, and reduces fatal attacks to moderate in severity.

Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Unyielding Infernal Breath That Splits The Earth - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power any who would seek to bring harm against Tsubaki have all but sealed their fate. Stoked by the very gallows of the Righteous Devil herself, an inferno whose true strength lies beyond the veil of definition or measure is tended. This flame burns in the most resplendent of ruby hues, mingling with the abyssal fires of Tsubaki’s heart like a malicious kaleidoscope.

At a cost of 20% of her total (Not current) Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequalled speed and ferocity (The speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou or Cero). The strength and ferocity of this attack is determined by Tsubaki's Zanjutsu stat.

Ban Kai - Gravios, Awakened Demon of the Final Seal

Appearance: Breaking the seal which holds the whole of her unbridled power in check, assuming the final form of the Infernal Wyvern is undertaken with the most serious of conviction, and is in itself nothing less than a vow to win, no matter the cost. The abyssal fire that burns from Tsubaki’s heart ascends to a level previously matched only in the skies above Tokyo. The doldrums of catastrophe are stirred, and the very heavens overhead are bent low in obedience. The dark and unstoppable energies of the Wyvern’s full power coalesce the clouds and turn the skies black, churning about the very air into the storm that will unmake creation itself.

While the hammer itself undergoes no change aside from the eyes and flames inherent in the manifestation of the unholy Wyvern grow to their most malicious, and purest hues of ruby. Tsubaki however, is another story. Her own eyes match the glistening crimson hues of her weapon.The smooth ebony hair that normally hangs calmly around her crown takes on a more jagged appearance, somewhat resembling the spines of the Wyvern contained in her soul.

In the blink of an eye Tsubaki is transformed into an unstoppable engine of destruction, Shinigami and spirit melded in unrivaled ferocity.

Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, The Seven Tragedies of Man - The scales of Gravios glitter in an everlasting hue of night, each brimming with the intent to cause pain beyond measure to any who would threaten the master that they defend.

Through tragedy and pain one becomes stronger, through suffering one is sculpted into what they will one day rise to be. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm gives rise to an internal fervor that seeks vengeance against those who would inflict the suffering. As before, the scales enable the Captain to ignore all minor wounds, in addition to moderate attacks in Ban Kai. Severe and fatal wounds are treated as if moderate.

When Tsubaki is struck, the malicious force contained in the scales is brought to life, bringing to bear an event of great sorrow and loss in the life of an attacker. This recollection occurs in the foes mind, and cannot be circumvented via any mental discipline or conditioning.

Attack: Soul of the Titan Lord, Claws that Tear Wide the Doors of Catastrophe - The abyssal fire that has become one with the Captain of the Blood Templars is honed beyond traditional limits in Ban Kai, becoming capable of fortifying Tsubaki's attacks and withering away any who would seek to stand against her.

Through tragedy and pain all becomes possible, the darkest and most violent recesses of the mind plumbed in search of revenge and respite. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm leads the enraged soul to kindle the fires of revolution within their domain, burning away all that would seek to keep the condemned from freedom.

Each attack made by Tsubaki in Ban Kai (Normal melee or a Ban Kai technique) is bolstered by the Aura of the Righteous Devil, empowering her movements and rage to the utmost lethal. All attacks made carry an additional pressure of 1.5 times the cost of what is spent to launch them. For attacks that carry no cost, they are fortified by 1.5 times the current Reiatsu level of the Captain in terms of pressure (This multiplier is not add
ed to her combat stat).

This technique carries no cost to activate, and is applied to every attack.


Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Fury That Rends the Heavens - Rage made real, the ruby and abyssal flames that Tsubaki commands coalesce and concentrate within the maw of her hammer, the whole of her energies are set upon killing intent. At a cost of 50% of her current Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequaled speed and ferocity (The initial speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou or Cero). This attack is tied to the Captain's Zanjutsu stat in terms of attack strength and overall power.

Through tragedy and pain one becomes vicious, through suffering one is sculpted into their true
cruelty which will be inflicted upon the world. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm leads the calloused soul to carve their vengeance upon a world that would seek their sorrow.

Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.

Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great etched stone from the Earth below. Upon this obelisk is the final testament of destruction, etched by the fiery hand of the Captain herself. This stone rises thirty meters from base to tip, gleaming with runes of burning fury that gaze upon all creation with ire.

The runed monolith carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, detonating in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a twenty meter radius. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.


Notes:
Kept BK AoE at 30m per new rules
Changed costs of 2 BK attacks to current (not total) reiatsu
Changed SK & BK defensive abilities to reflect notes
Added 3rd segment to BK
I love explosions. Clearly.
 
Angō Kaidoku-sha - Code Breaker

Inner World - The world looks similar to the inside of a dark video game. Every solid object is pixellated upon close examination, and all edges in the terrain carry a light blue line in contrast to the navy blue surfaces that cover the land. No grass or natural landscapes will be found, as the entire world seems to be completely computer generated. (For reference, see here...
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Spirit - Angō Kaidoku-sha (or Ango for short) takes the form of a disembodied mass of computer code when speaking to Derek within his inner world. Depending on the true mood of his owner, Ango can take on different colors, shapes, and voices but you will always notice the buzzing of binary code beneath the surface. Ango is extremely logical, often supplying common sense to balance Derek’s own natural intelligence. In casual conversation, Ango takes on a dry and often cold sense of humor in most situations.

Release Phrase - Rewrite reality and forge a new world, Angō Kaidoku-sha!

Physical Appearance -
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Two steel gloves and shoulder pads will appear on his arms in a flash of binary code after the release phrase has been spoken. A single steel cable will sprout from each glove and slither up his arm, connecting to the shoulder pad. A glowing, bright green circle will appear on top of the gloves with a flash. Derek may mentally will the part of the palm that covers the signature of the Tenth on his left hand to slide open to reveal the tattoo when using it.

Attack/Abilities
1) Kōdo o Kaku (Writing Code) - By paying 250 reiatsu, Derek can create an object from binary code. He may summon up to four objects per turn. This object may be any size and width as long as it equals the parameters of 2 meters by 2 meters, gaining an extra meter in height and width per 1000 connection. This will cap at 5000 connection at 7 meters by 7 meters. The creation speed of the construct matches his hohou stat.

2) Fairu Tensō (File Transfer) - By paying 5% of his kidou stat, Derek may stop any existing object (even if moving) and manipulate it according to his will. For objects that were not created by spiritual power, it will cost 1 reiatsu per two pounds. He may only control two objects at once, but the number will increase for every 1000 kidou Derek acquires. Derek can’t move other beings or Zanpaktou because of the complexity of the structure of the sentient beings and spritual make-up of Zanpaktou. Anything else under or equal to the cost of Fairu Tenso or any construct created by Kodo o Kaku, however, is fair game. This ability only works if the object is within 5 meters of his armored hand, gaining another meter per 500 connection with a maximum of 10 meters at 3500 connection. This control lasts for three rounds upon first release, but he gains an extra round of control per 2000 connection, capping at six rounds.

3) Bōka Kabe (Firewall) - By paying 10% of his reiatsu, Derek can cover his arms in thick black and green flames. When struck with a reiatsu based attack, these superheated flames will attempt to burn them away, diminishing the cost of Bōka Kabe or ability from their power and either stopping them whole or reducing the effect by the remaining reiatsu. If successful in completely stopping an attack, it will burn away in wisps of black and green binary code. It is inadvisable to touch these flames, as the flames will actively defend Derek by scorching any physical object that comes into contact with them. Only those with an attacking stat higher than the cost of this ability may touch him. The only thing exempt from this side-effect is the wielder's own body.
 
Using some spec point, I've got a couple~

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True Awakening

Sorakami no Gunbi - “Divine Armaments of the Void”

Form:

Having undergone extensive modification at the hands of Chimera, as well as eventual, albeit partial reconstruction by Ciro Martelli, Masato’s powers have finally stabilized in their current form. If Masato’s initial post-human powers were his shield, his prismatic modifications were his sword. His current powers fall somewhere between the two, and leave evidence of both. The advent has once again donned his inhuman armor -- with some notable differences. Its surface bears the scars of his ordeals -- and numerous cracks and fissures radiate with a familiar, prismatic glow. Gone are the raging fires that once cloaked the advent’s form, replaced instead by jagged plates of ethereal reishi -- resembling segments of Yuusou Taryoukyou -- positioned at various points on his armor. The most drastic difference, however, comes in the form of an ethereal, burning blade of energy that manifests over the agent’s arm. Resembling a shard of the humans previous awakening -- and seething with volatile reiatsu, the blade gives off a constant blue glow -- smoldering in an ever-present flame of reishi along its entire form before terminating at the advent’s forearm, where it merges with his armor.


Ability:

Masato’s awakening, as stated, falls somewhere between its two previous renditions -- focusing neither on defense or attack entirely -- and instead maintaining a zen-like balance between the two energies. All of his abilities are born from this duality -- drawing on traits from both his previous forms to achieve various ends.

Sora no Kikou -- “Hauberk of the Void”

Though resembling Masato’s former powers in form -- Sora no Kekkai is, in a sense, the final refinement of the advent’s evolution -- with key differences separating itself from the man’s previous awakening. The flames that once engulfed Masato’s armored form have been condensed into several plates of reishi positioned at strategic points across his armor. Upon activation, Masato pays 5% of his reiatsu to draw in and compress reishi into his familiar, armored form.

By paying an additional 5% of his reiatsu however, Masato can rearrange the plates on his armor into any configuration he wishes, so long as they remained attached to him. These plates -- much like his previous awakening -- are highly durable. Moreover, the chaotic, yet contained nature of their composition -- excited spirit particles compressed into a super-dense state -- makes them adept at deflecting inbound attacks. By charging the plates with reiatsu (in a similar fashion to his main weapon) the agent can rearrange the plates to block or redirect an attack. He has very limited control over where a rebounded attack will end up, and can only judge based on the angles of the plates at the time of impact -- so the technique is not without its downsides. As before, these barriers are neither indestructible nor impassable -- an attack of sufficient force may shatter them in their entirety. Should such an event occur, the agent can pay 2% of his reiatsu to reconstitute his armor and repair the damage -- or to strengthen his armor by said amount, should the need arise.


Sora no Mori -- “Lance of the Void”

The biggest change in Masato’s form also represents his awakenings biggest shift in focus. The blade of energy that resides on his forearm is a culmination of the opposing energies of his previous forms maintained in perfect harmony. Much like his power’s previous incarnation, the blade absorbs any properties of spiritually-charged objects in its vicinity and manifests them in approximate forms. Any spiritually imbued attacks that strike Sora no Kekkai can be emulated by Sora no Mori. A strike from the blade maintains any emulated attributes of an attack, though it cannot mirror more than one effect at a given time.

In addition, by charging the blade with 2% of his reiatsu, Sora no Mori becomes a highly effective conduit and conductor of reishi -- rapidly drawing in and absorbing spirit particles to increase its own mass exponentially -- lancing outwards towards an enemy at great speed. Practically speaking, the blade uses reishi to extend its reach well beyond its initial form -- the lance of spirit energy maintaining all the cutting potency of its base along its length. The lance itself is ethereal; despite being capable of cutting, it has no real, tangible form -- making it unsuitable for blocking or parrying. The lance can be maintained for one turn per every 2k Harmony to a maximum of ten turns, and its potential length is roughly one meter for every 1k in Combat, with a maximum of 20 meters.



Sora no Tate -- “Aegis of the Void”

Activated by paying 10% of his reiatsu and planting his blade into a surface, Masato utilizes the unique properties of Sora no Mori to create an area of negative energy. The blade – once broken off from Masato's armor – begins absorbing reishi and spiritual energy an an absurd rate – creating a vortex capable of drawing in any spiritually imbued attacks. The vortex lasts one round for every 1k in Resistance, and can draw in attacks who's costs are less than the amount paid to activate this ability, up to a total of 10% of Masato's reiatsu. Once the vortex reaches critical mass, or the time limit elapses, the void destabilizes and dissipates. Masato is not exempt from these effects.

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Kai Reviews:

Hiren: D . . . nah, Approved

Gargs: Approved with Changes - appear when you attack, and this is approved

Beaks: Approved with Changes Shikai ability ignores minors, and downgrades moderate wounds to minors; Your energy attacks have their speed and accuracy on your zanj, power on rei spent; BK ability downgrades all wounds by 1 level, but can only stop 3 lethal wounds (just like mine); Lastly, your 1.5x magnifier 'feels' like that much, but does not actually do more damage

Aero: Approved

Sev: Approved Just note that that people *can* parry your weapon. So you may wish to remove that part save the look, or keep it, up to you. If you want to have an unparriable blade, then you need to make a seperate power for that (I did this as a kai once, its cool!).

To myself: Van, you fool, your numbers are all wrong! Change the ITN ability to only recover from 3 lethal in healing, and change the viz attack to 15%/20% and you are Approved.


LOOK AT ALL THE GREEN!
 
Using free resubmission, courtesy of Willem, to make some clarification changes to my release. PM/IM me, yadda yadda, questions and so on.

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Sealed: Having grown along with Akio’s own resolve, the sealed form of Gouryu has evolved to take the shape of a katana. The weapon measures a full thirty inches from base to tip. A sturdy tsuka of willow holds the tang of the weapon, forming a solid grip comfortable for two hands. The tsuka-ito is fashioned from silk and dyed a deep shade of blue. Made from steel, the tsuba is shaped like a rectangle, and matches the plain silver kashira. A black-lacquered saya of willow, polished and well maintained, is the resting place for the simple yet elegant weapon.

Manifestation: A barren wasteland as far as the eye can see, hard ground void of trees and grass in every direction. The sky has no moon, no sun, and no stars; instead, inky-black clouds blanket the realm. An eerie twilight glow covers the land, like the calm before a heavy storm. The distant cries of thunder can be heard, and the occasional flash of lightning, but no other sounds nor events can be seen. When Akio is wrought with emotion, showers are known to fall, with varying intensity, in the dimension.

Gouryu himself appears to Akio as a small boy, no older than nine or ten years old, wearing a tattered blue kimono decorated with elegant gold designs. Brown hair falls to about earlobe level, and black eyes peer out of his youthful face. The spirit is barefoot, and he carries a simple umbrella made of bamboo and dark red cloth that rivals the boy in height. A serpentine dragon tail sprouts from the boy’s lower back, and is covered in glossy black scales.

The spirit constantly scowls, and speaks with an arrogant tone.

Pour Down (furi sosoge; 降り注げ)

Form: Gouryu’s release takes the form of a yari, or spear, that measures a little over nine feet from end to end. A double-edged and symmetrical blade that measures three feet from caps the weapon. It has become thicker and slightly more weighted with its evolution. The round nakae is made of oak, and measures six feet in length, complete with black-lacquered bamboo strips that give the weapon a glossy appearance. The ishizuki (pommel) of the weapon is a simple metal cap. Attached to the base of the weapon is a fist-sized metal sphere that adds weight to the weapon; it can also be used as a blunt weapon.

Upon the release of Gouryu, a mass of dark clouds forms a canopy above the battle field, lingering 100 feet above Akio and stretching outwards fifty feet.

[Kosame]

When the powers of Gouryu are manifested on the physical plain, the sky darkens ominously as a fraction of the Storm Dragon’s might is released. Accompanied by the rumble of thunder deep within the bowels of the dark clouds that are summoned by the invocation of the first release, rain begins to fall within the radius of the cloud cover in thin but steady sheets, drenching the area in a matter over the course of a few moments.

Each turn, Akio may garner up to a single gallon of water from the surrounding area, causing it to take the form of a shimmering helix of ever swirling water that constantly orbits his body, following the movements of the mighty spear. For every accumulated gallon, Akio may produce a knockback effect that blasts away anyone who is struck with the spear. One foot of knockback may be produced for every gallon of accumulated water. The maximum amount of water Akio may control at any given time is determined by his connection statistic, allowing him to command up to twenty-five gallons at any one time. This ability requires that Akio pay 10 reiatsu for every gallon stored per turn.

Extension: By paying 100 reiatsu per accumulated gallon, Akio may release the stored water in concussive bursts and splitting arcs directed as he pleases by using the spear as a medium. The maximum range any one projectile can travel before dispersing is fifty feet.
 
TIME FREEZE
For those directly surrounding Billy, the air around the advent human lowers various degrees, but no other evident alterations are manifested.

BULLET TIME: when his powers are used this way, time seems to slow down for everything else except for Billy. Every human, animal, plant and every object without Reiatsu is completely frozen in time, stopped in whatever position they are at the moment of activation. Any Reiatsu infused attack or ability (kidou, cero, bullets, etc) is slowed only if its cost is less than twice the amount paid in.
Cost: 3% Reiatsu.

THREE FREEZE: when his powers is concentrated on a smaller area, twirls of mist raise from the ground and rapidly encase the target into a powerful coffin of frozen time. The target experience extreme freeze as long as he remains bound, and may be subjected to ice burns. This ability follows all the rules for bindings.
Cost: 5% Reiatsu.
 
Shikai - Gravios, The Armored Terror

Release Phrase: "Swallow whole my despair, Gravios!”

Manifestation: Life riddled with loss and tragedy, friends lost and slain in the wake of the blood red Queen. Deep beneath the surface of Mabara Tsubaki lies an irresistible urge, a desire that supersedes and encompasses all: To Endure. Body and soul have been subjected to nearly every manner of assault known to man, from the teeth and claws of innumerable Hollows to the painfully invasive gaze of Leon Valiente Simeon himself. Countless lacerations, burns, eviscerations and the complete and utter rending of both body and spirit have exacted a heavy price from the Captain of the Blood Templar. This pain gave rise to the abyssal fire that Tsubaki wields so fiercely in battle, but alone it is not enough to guard her waning heart from the growing dread.

Over time both the soul of Tsubaki and that of her blade, Ippozenshin have been steeped in the very fires of hell, unholy flame that tempers as well as ravages her soul and very life energy. In order to sate that most primal of desires the flame has acted as both forge and pyre, weathering away at her lifespan while honing and making more resolute the body and heart that contain it. This radical reshaping of Tsubaki’s soul has changed the spirit of her blade as well, melting away nearly any trace of Ippozenshin that may have remained after emerging from the very forge of Hell itself.

The act of endurance itself carries twofold conditions within the seemingly innocuous deed. Firstly, one must weather all assaults upon flesh and essence no matter the severity and fervor contained by those who would call themselves enemy. This has given rise to the massive network of jutting plates and spines of stone and steel that dot the entirety of the hide of Gravios like a self-contained landscape of hostility. A seething and molten core of the most potent of anger and rage gives shelter and succour to the vulnerable heart contained deep within the inferno. Should a foe ever be made known who could strike through all semblances of defense and protection, her heart would be in the utmost of peril.

The second condition of endurance is the removal of that which would seek to cause pain and suffering, the forcible exorcism of any threat to Tsubaki’s dwindling lifespan. When a ferrous shell of nigh impervious nature and the boiling blood stoked by the fires of war proves inadequate, the very flames that keep warm the heart of Mabara Tsubaki may be whipped and churned to an unbridled inferno, devouring and wiping away any threat that would persist.

Visual Reference
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Appearance: Gravios is the most pure and palpable form of rage known to any realm, mortal or otherwise. The very zenith of brute cruelty and malice, unfeeling and unyielding. A colossus of stone and steel given life in a form born in abomination of both Heaven and Earth, standing nearly four stories tall by conventional measure. Jutting lances of ferrous fury dot his surface like a mountainous crag, beset by two eyes forged of the purest rubies of Hell. A great spire of bleached rock rises above his stout head in a horn that seeks to skewer the very clouds above, flanked on both sides by two gargantuan wings of weblike metal that shimmer and gleam even in darkness. The massive bulk of this unearthly wyvern is kept in balance by a long and deadly tail, measuring ten meters to the tip.

As the unholy blade makes the transition to its Shi Kai form, the modest ebony katana is replaced by a massive hammer, jutted with countless sharpened steel spines. Appearing at first to be a replica of the massive skull of Gravios, the weapon is in fact a fraction of the beast’s terrifying power given life in the world of the tangible. When initially summoned the jaws of this horror remained locked shut in a unified surface, but upon using certain techniques in battle the weapon’s maw opens, venting traces of dark smoke that issues forth from the Hellfire embers that are kept just behind the countless honed teeth.

Measuring one and a half meters from the end of the handle to the apex of the dragon’s spiked crown, the hammer weighs nearly thirty pounds in total. It is heavy enough to shunt weapons and shields, but little enough in weight that the Captain is able to wield it with the same speed and ferocity as a traditional sword.

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Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, Unerring Infernal Blood - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power the world itself is barred from bringing about harm. Shimmering scales of honed steel affix themselves to Tsubaki’s skin (usually on the face, neck, torso and arms) and becomes a part of her body as though it had been since the beginning.

Forged in the endless inferno of her very soul, each piece of glinting metal is a physical testament to all that which Tsubaki has endured, and will continue to do so. Desire made manifest, the plates of the Hell-born Wyvern will shield their charge through any injury.

The scales grant the Captain the ability to mitigate damage from any and all attacks, be they physical, magical or immaterial. In essence this allows the woman to completely ignore minor wounds, and treat moderate wounds as if they were minor. Any wounds that would be more severe are unaffected.

Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Unyielding Infernal Breath That Splits The Earth - From the moment Gravios is brought into the realm of the physical, albeit only a fraction of his true power any who would seek to bring harm against Tsubaki have all but sealed their fate. Stoked by the very gallows of the Righteous Devil herself, an inferno whose true strength lies beyond the veil of definition or measure is tended. This flame burns in the most resplendent of ruby hues, mingling with the abyssal fires of Tsubaki’s heart like a malicious kaleidoscope.

At a cost of 20% of her total (Not current) Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequalled speed and ferocity (The speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou or Cero). The accuracy and speed of this attack is determined by Tsubaki's Zanjutsu stat.

Ban Kai - Gravios, Awakened Demon of the Final Seal

Appearance: Breaking the seal which holds the whole of her unbridled power in check, assuming the final form of the Infernal Wyvern is undertaken with the most serious of conviction, and is in itself nothing less than a vow to win, no matter the cost. The abyssal fire that burns from Tsubaki’s heart ascends to a level previously matched only in the skies above Tokyo. The doldrums of catastrophe are stirred, and the very heavens overhead are bent low in obedience. The dark and unstoppable energies of the Wyvern’s full power coalesce the clouds and turn the skies black, churning about the very air into the storm that will unmake creation itself.

While the hammer itself undergoes no change aside from the eyes and flames inherent in the manifestation of the unholy Wyvern grow to their most malicious, and purest hues of ruby. Tsubaki however, is another story. Her own eyes match the glistening crimson hues of her weapon.The smooth ebony hair that normally hangs calmly around her crown takes on a more jagged appearance, somewhat resembling the spines of the Wyvern contained in her soul.

In the blink of an eye Tsubaki is transformed into an unstoppable engine of destruction, Shinigami and spirit melded in unrivaled ferocity.

Ability: Scales of the Titan Lord, The Seven Tragedies of Man - The scales of Gravios glitter in an everlasting hue of night, each brimming with the intent to cause pain beyond measure to any who would threaten the master that they defend.

Through tragedy and pain one becomes stronger, through suffering one is sculpted into what they will one day rise to be. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm gives rise to an internal fervor that seeks vengeance against those who would inflict the suffering. As before, the scales enable the Captain to ignore all minor wounds, in addition to moderate attacks in Ban Kai. Severe and fatal wounds are treated as if moderate, however the limitation to this is that Tsubaki's Ban Kai can only mitigate 3 lethal wounds, any further attacks that would take the Captain's life continue to be fatal.

When Tsubaki is struck, the malicious force contained in the scales is brought to life, bringing to bear an event of great sorrow and loss in the life of an attacker. This recollection occurs in the foes mind, and cannot be circumvented via any mental discipline or conditioning.

Attack: Soul of the Titan Lord, Claws that Tear Wide the Doors of Catastrophe - The abyssal fire that has become one with the Captain of the Blood Templars is honed beyond traditional limits in Ban Kai, becoming capable of fortifying Tsubaki's attacks and withering away any who would seek to stand against her.

Through tragedy and pain all becomes possible, the darkest and most violent recesses of the mind plumbed in search of revenge and respite. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm leads the enraged soul to kindle the fires of revolution within their domain, burning away all that would seek to keep the condemned from freedom.

Each attack made by Tsubaki in Ban Kai (Normal melee or a Ban Kai technique) is bolstered by the Aura of the Righteous Devil, empowering her movements and rage to the utmost lethal. All attacks made carry an additional pressure of 1.5 times the cost of what is spent to launch them. For attacks that carry no cost, they are fortified by 1.5 times the current Reiatsu level of the Captain in terms of pressure (This multiplier is not add
ed to her combat stat). This ability does not increase the power of any attacks, but simply increases the spiritual pressure inherent in them, much like her Aura of the Righteous Devil.

This technique carries no cost to activate, and is applied to every attack.


Attack: Wrath of the Titan Lord, Fury That Rends the Heavens - Rage made real, the ruby and abyssal flames that Tsubaki commands coalesce and concentrate within the maw of her hammer, the whole of her energies are set upon killing intent. At a cost of 50% of her current Reiatsu, the flames are launched from the open maw of Gravios in a beam of unequaled speed and ferocity (The initial speed of the beam is the equivalent of a normal projectile Kidou or Cero). This attack is tied to the Captain's Zanjutsu stat in terms of accuracy and speed.

Through tragedy and pain one becomes vicious, through suffering one is sculpted into their true
cruelty which will be inflicted upon the world. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm leads the calloused soul to carve their vengeance upon a world that would seek their sorrow.

Attack: Wrath That Conquers All, The Unyielding Flame That Tears Asunder The World of Man - Through tragedy and pain one gives rise to clarity, through suffering one is sculpted into their true form, though torment the world makes flawless its own demise. The primal desire to endure and withstand harm supersedes all, driving the sculpted soul to purge the world that sought their sorrow, turning the cycle of pain anew.

Tsubaki calls upon the very zenith of destruction, paying 95% of her current Reiatsu, summoning a great etched stone from the Earth below. Upon this obelisk is the final testament of destruction, etched by the fiery hand of the Captain herself. This stone rises thirty meters from base to tip, gleaming with runes of burning fury that gaze upon all creation with ire.

The runed monolith carries the whole of Tsubaki’s unbridled power within it, detonating in a brilliant holocaust of fire that encompasses a twenty meter radius. Using her own life energy to stoke the fires of rage, this final attack leaves the Captain utterly drained and re-seals her weapon into a dormant state.
 
True Awakening for Arano

[Fujin]
Inhumanity

Having finally accepted the darkness within him, Arano becomes a vessel for it. His skin turns a bone white, with his pupils and iris switching colors within his eyes. His body becomes subject to any manner of self-mutilation via his own powers, allowing it to be morphed and twisted beyond its human shell.

[Shikaka Ri]
Inception

The once painful and slow process of creating weapons from Arano’s Awakening has begot a near mastery of it, allowing him to creating weapons from his own body, costing him 10 reiatsu per lb. The resilience of the weapon's durability is determined by the reiatsu infused into it, and the speed at which these bones are created/launched is decided by his combat stat. The shape of these weapons is crude at best, but so long as Arano’s reiatsu can supplement it then a rough imitation of just about any weapon can be made.

However, the over-exposure to reiryoku while in creation causes Arano’s own bones to have an altered density, and by proxy weight. As such, a single lb of Arano’s bone is roughly equivalent to a single cubic foot of matter. The wounds caused by removing these bones heal immediately, having no effect beyond the pain they cause.

[Mikansei]
Incompletion

Through sheer force of will, Arano can alter his own bones beyond their normal properties. This allows him to alter the general structure of bone, including its malleability, state of matter, and other chemical properties (excluding mass) even after removing the bone from his body. However, this affects its cost. Said cost being 10 reiatsu per lb of bone altered if the alteration is being made prior to extracting it from Arano’s body, and 20 reiatsu per lb if altering already extracted bone.

Up to 100 lbs of bone can be altered with a single use of Mikansei, with each construct capable of being altered up to three times before being permanently locked into its current properties.

[Warikirenai]
Indivisible

Arano’s inherent, almost excessive use of his own powers has resulted in them gaining a deeper connection with him than what should have been possible. Merging his control of marrow into a new skill, he has learned to bring his manipulation of the two to unprecedented heights.

As such, by paying 2% of his reiatsu per turn used, he may manipulate his bones within 10 yards of himself, with their speed defined by his combat stat. The manipulated materials inherently mimic and follow his own natural movements sub-consciously, but by fully concentrating on the manipulation he may direct them freely (within reason, they are still subject to all natural laws of the world).

Only 100 lbs of bone can be manipulated at any one time, with this number increasing by 20 lbs per 2000 Harmony he attains. This number maxes at a grand total of 500 lbs.
 
Light’s Brilliance (True Awakening)

Ability 1: Light Barrier
Markus has learned that no matter how good of an offence you have, you will need to defend eventually. He has learned to create a quick tangible light barrier to protect himself. At a cost of 5% this barrier is erected up around his body for a single turn. If the barrier is hit by a magical attack, i.e. reiatsu based, and does not break it; Markus is able to pay the same cost as the ability to reflect it back offensively.

Ability 2: Radiant Surge
Markus’ formerly passive ability has evolved far beyond the constraints of its earlier incarnation. At the True Awakening level, the advent’s level of control is so great that he can momentarily condense light waves into a tangible form. The ability is brief but effective, creating crescent-shaped ‘blades’ of light that radiate from Markus’ form. The blades by nature are super-heated; composed of ultra-violet radiation reflected and magnified innumerable times to create their fleeting physical form. As such, the blades will cut and burn anything they come into contact with, much like a laser. As a tertiary effect, the blades also give off a blinding light when fired, making them difficult to dodge. Each blade costs Markus 3% of his reiatsu to create, and can travel a distance of ten meters from him before dissipating - gaining an additional five meters for every 1k combat.

Ability 3: Abyssal Devastation

Markus ability with light has evolved to such a point he is able to increase his speed by infusing his body. His agility is increased by 10% for as long as he is conscious. As a secondary effect, he is able to build up the energy in his body to such a point he is able to project it out in a beam of light scorching anything caught in its path. The width of the beam is only two feet while the length is twenty meters and increases by ten meters for every 5k connection beyond the initial 7k. Using this beam costs Markus 20% of his reiatsu, and disables the increased agility effect for three rounds. He is unable to use the beam until the effect is restored.
 
Shikaiiiiii

Murasaki

紫色
Deep Purple


Release Phrase: "Burst into the ambient air, Murasaki!”

Inner World: Tokiwa’s inner world is a post-apocalyptic Tokyo, over grown with plants and falling apart no matter which part she ends up in.
http://kozar.wordpress.com/2010/09/13/tokyo-apocalypse/

Spirit: The spirit of Murasaki appears as the former captain of the Ninth Division, Saika Rakushun. Resurrecting the man just the way he was when he still held his captaincy over the Research and Development Division, the way Toki remembers him best. (Kev offered to let me use Saika for this.)

Form Change:
Once released, the zanpakutou bursts into an seemingly glowing plume of purple smoke which continues to be emitted through out the turn until reaching its maximum size of 30 feet in diameter. Slowly the purple smoke drifts upwards, only coming to rest once it has roofed over Tokiwa and her opponent.


Ability:
The shape of the purple smoke can be altered, giving Toki the ability to create nearly any form needed at that moment from the colored steel. The items created from the smoke are limited however, and nothing requiring a great amount of detail can be pulled from the sky. This leaves only crude shapes such as another bladed weapon or a hand. Anything created is as durable as the zanpakutou itself. Size is also limited by the amount of rei used to create an item- one (1) point of rei equals one (1) pound of molded smoke.

Once the thought is made to return the smoke to its original form, a zanpakutou, control of shaping and direction is lost. Any objects solidified will burst into smoke and return to the zanpakutou once again.

Tokiwa can only create five (5) objects, then plus one (+1) for every one thousand (1k) connection that is earned at any one (1) time. She may make up to only two (2) creations per turn until the maximum number of five (5) or more is reached.

Vizard Attack:
By expending 4% Rage and 3% Reiatsu and gaining 2% Emptiness, Tokiwa can detonate any object on the field she has created as if it were a bomb.
 
Shikai~ (Bankai was a broke-ass mo'fucka.)

Kage Kaijuu (Shadow Monster) is the shikai form of Aliyah’s zanpakutou. "Bid darkness fall across the land” is the release command. The blade remains the size of a standard katana whilst the curve snaps straight. The guard spills forth shadowy darkness which twines about the blade and writhes into a talon-edged cloud of murk which obscures all but the guard from sight. The hilt sprouts a long black cord from whence spills wispy puffs of smoky darkness. The companion wakizashi mirrors its appearance at a smaller size.
Kage Bunshin (Shadow Clone) costs 3% reiatsu and creates a shadowy clone of Aliyah which moves with the same speed and grace as she does. The clone cannot attack or be attacked and may move as far away as it so desires. At any time, Aliyah can execute a flash step that will take her to the location of the clone, regardless of distance or obstacles. One clone may be active for each 1000 connection she has, to a maximum of 5 clones.

Kage Dokuso (Shadow Toxin) costs 3% reiatsu and lets Aliyah make any shadow toxic by making contact with it. A toxic shadow will cause blurred vision the first turn, adding disorientation and nausea the second turn, and on the third turn the user will experience the symptoms of shock. The affects of Kage Dokuso last for 5 turns.

Kage Souhou (Shadow Touch) costs 3% reiatsu and lets Aliyah make an attack through one of her shadow clones at the same time and in the same way as she attacks. The attack is as effective as her standard attack. If it is used against a barrier, the strength of each hit is the same as her standard attack.​
 
Took great effort to make revisions. Many thanks Nargly one

True Awakening

Ten no teikoku mūbā (Imperial mover of heavens)

Form:It takes the form of a 1 yard semi-transparent sword with red runes over it.

name1: Manipulating space to his will, Ota can amplify his ability to attack. By paying 1% of his reiatsu per portal, Ota can create a portal of space in front of him. At the same time, a portal appears directly next to his target, linking the two warp-holes together. When launching a physical attack, he can choose to attack the portal that he created. When used, the physical passes through the portal he created, appearing in the partner portal. If Ota creates more than one portal, he can choose which portal his attack exits from.

Once the attack has travelled through the portal, the warp-point dissolves. At any time, he can have up to 5 portals manifested. The portal only flows one direction, from Ota to his target.

name2: Ota’s mastery over space can also be used to protect himself. By paying 5% of his reiatsu, Ota can rapidly contract the space between himself and the oncoming attack. This rapid contraction of the area, reduces the attack to a minuscule volume allowing it to phase through him. After the attack phases through him, it instantly expands back to its original size. Due to the concentration required to use this ability multiple times, this ability can only be used once every 2 turns.

name3: Mastering and understanding the true nature of space, Ota has learned how to bypass a few physical laws of nature. By applying this knowledge, he is can pull off superhuman feats such as walking and running on air, slowing his falls, and other reality bending feats. This ability costs 1% of his reiatsu per turn activated.
 
UlquiorraCifer
Shikai~~
Kaito Malayuri
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Kuroi Inazuma


Release Phrase: Strike down from the Darkness of the Light, Kuroi Inazuma

Form Change: The sword itself does not change in shape or size. The hilt has only one minor change, it turns white.The guard turns into a glossy white square with the edges curved in. The blades shape stays the same but its color becomes black and is surrounded by a small dark static.
Blade example
lightningedgebyazashx.jpg


Spirit: Chi-inazuma
A beautiful women with silver hair and covered in a dark robe. she is constantly surrounded by small static discharges.
Spirit Image
chiinazuma.jpg


Inner World:
(Water world of Dark lightning)
In Kaito's Inner world everything is black and white excluding himself and lightning. The world itself is empty and the ground is a never ending surface of water.
InnerWorld Image
lightningwaterworld.jpg




Ability:
Seitekina bōei (Static Defence):Costs 5% Reiatsu.
The blade and its wielder becomes surrounded by a black lightning emitting a read aura. It doesn’t harm it’s wielder but if someones presence other than the wielder enter near its encompassed area it will immediately discharge a harmful release of static. (The wielder can not move during this ability.)

Rakurai: Costs 3% Reiatsu.
It sends out a shot of lighting at an incredible speed that but is limited to 1km it can reach that distance in 2 seconds once the blade is pointed in the direction it wants to fire.

Sei-den hōden (Static Discharge)
: Costs 3% Reiatsu.
Takes 3 seconds to charge his blade before firing a big wall of black static electricity it the direction pointed at or when the zanpaktou is swung it releases a wave of black static electricity in its direction.
 
Using my 2nd Place Spec point to resub nate's kai for plot reasons. I'd originally intended to do this as a 'tweak' GM review, but then it just became too drastic a change. This is also my first attempt at flavour text.

First Stage: Genesis

Though not apparent at first, the devastation wrought to his soul by Ciro Martelli is slowly being repaired by his native Quincy powers. Nathaniel slowly began to realize that Quincy abilities and fundamental powers were beginning to burst out of him in times of strong emotion. Through further study and practice, Nathaniel discovered that he has begun to regain some of a Quincy's ability to shape and manipulate reishi.

Intrigued by such developments, Nathaniel practiced harder, willing his body and soul to regain what they had lost. However, the scientist was unable to regain them fully...Martelli's twisted science was too potent. Unable to launch arrows of reishi as a true Quincy could, Nathaniel persevered to a half-way point found a way to use his reiatsu as an Advent Human to trap the spiritrons that were naturally attracted to him by dint of his Quincy powers.

Form: By coating thin, thin streams of reishi with his reiatsu, Nathaniel discovered a way to make a multitude of hair fine reishi wires spring from his hands and twine about objects. The strength, power and speed of the wires is equal to that of Nathaniel's combat stat. Each wire costs 2% reiatsu to create.

Ability: Born with Eidetic Memory, Nathaniel has for all his life been consumed by a constant flood of memories which distract, blind and confuse him; making him loose contact with the present and be consumed by the past. However, upon discovering his powers as an Advent Human, Nathaniel has been able to develop a way to transfer his own memories into another being who has contact with his wires. This ability costs 2% of his reiatsu to use.

Ability: Just as he has been forced to live with a constant tide of memories flooding through his mind, Nathaniel has discovered a way to induce the same problem in others by the use of his wires. When in contact with the wires of his release, the scientist is able to cause the memories of the one entrapped to race before their eyes in a disorienting flood. In turn this reduces their primary combat stat by 3% and their hohou/agility/sodino/hirenkayku by 5% of Nathaniel`s Agility stat. for a cost of 5% Nathaniel's reiatsu.
 
Froggu: Ability is fine, but doesn't need a cost if you just knock people back with building water.

Extension should be an attack of its own, and just so you know, pay 100 rei and get a 100 rei valued blast of water. So you may wish to pay some more to strengthen the potential effect, but that's your choice! Like a broken record, I say: You should tie this to a stat

That in mind, Approved with changes

Moon man
: Ability 1 stops any projectiles valued at 6% or less by paying 3%.

Approved with that note.

UNHOLY TERROR OF DOOM, PART OF THE DUO OF DEATH (shortened to Beaks): Approved gangsta. I expect epic this PMs.

Se Raph:

Pounds are a unit of measure I don't want to wrap my head around as kai staff, so no measurements in pounds.

Ability 1: For the creation, we'll say you can make a BK level sized for 10% rei, 5% for a shik sized item, and 1% for a projectile: Feel free to modify these costs based on the durability you are looking for! I'll also say that if you want to shoot for zan type resilience, we can talk about that, based on my old kai.

Part 2:(5:49:48 PM) Vanguardj: Mikansei is . . . very open.
(5:50:11 PM) shadowwind144: yea I'm not 100% on wtf it does
(5:50:33 PM) Vanguardj: Well if he can change any property in his bones save mass, he can change things like density.
(5:50:40 PM) Vanguardj: So he can basically get adamantine bones.
(5:51:07 PM) Vanguardj: Or turn them into rubbery things, etc.
(5:51:46 PM) shadowwind144: that's all fine and dandy if he understands steel bones would only fortify by the amount paid for them
(5:52:22 PM) Vanguardj: Yeah.
(5:52:35 PM) Vanguardj: cost per pound is also weird.
(5:52:57 PM) Vanguardj: How much do the bones in your arms, or legs, or ribs, or whatever weigh, anyway?
(5:53:13 PM) shadowwind144: tell him to just universialize it
(5:53:23 PM) shadowwind144: rather than turn us into anatomy masters
(5:53:44 PM) Vanguardj: Makes sense.

I think that sums it up

Ability 3: Toss the weight thing, 2% rei to animate what you have, but mind the multi-weapon rules.

Resubmit this mofo and we'll get it stamped by the end of the week, I hope.

Bob-u Notes: Reflects fire back with the same skill as they came in at, unless you want to tie it to one of your stats, ranges are at defaults based on Will's rule mods.

Those in mind, Approved

Bunz I've seen this kai somewhere . . .
1 ability, but you can't make zanpakutou strength items for basically almost no rei. So, instead: Pay 15% rei to make a shikai sized, zan durability item (just like my old kai) or, pay X (you make this number, but its fixed for your kai) rei to make an X rei durability item of shikai size.

Bomb power is good.

So, Resubmit with the cost modifications and you're golden(well, we hope green next time).

Dilli-O
Attack 1: Clones must be able to be struck by others.

Attack 2: Specify the conditions of round 3 (and since no duration is specified, its a 3 round poison), Shock, to me, read as basically lunch meat when you attack them.

Attack 3: k.

Resubmit with those changes for my scrutinizing eye, and we'll get this going before PM's.

Not so holelyAbility 1: K. Limited to standard range. And people can defend against the portaled attack, keep that in mind.

Ability 2: 5% to avoid any attack is *not* happening. 5% to avoid attacks up to 10% in value, with the same delay in use, will happen.

Ability 3: Coo

Approved with those mods.

UC #1: Good

#2: this needs reworked. If you want a long range attack, thats cool, but 1km is beyond the realm of our kais, typically, we can cap it at 20m, which is pretty far for our sk ranges. The speed part just goes. Tie it to one of your combat stats for its accuracy and speed.

#3: Getsuga go! But its fine.

Resubmit with our comments in mind, and we'll get this going.

Late Nate Just slip a slight change to #2: debuffs hohou/agility/sonido instead of 'reaction time', for 5% (a reduction from 8%), and chose one of your stats to lay the debuff from. With that mod, you're Approved.
 

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