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Since items don't need 1,000 kan for a resub, and since we were just on the whole "no-regen" bandwagon.

Old:
Item: Ragnarök, Lord of Calamity

Tier: S-Tier (40,000+ Reiatsu)

Acquisition: The Gates of Catastrophe given physical form, opened by Tsubaki upon sealing the pact anew with her Zanpakuto, Gravios. Centuries of negative energy, wrath and hatred left to congeal away from the eyes of man have given rise to a being of considerable strength, resembling a Hollow in nature. Once the gates had been opened, the beast attempted to wrest control of Tsubaki's body and mind away from her. Though her right arm has forever been changed by the creature, the corruption has been halted.

Through abandon one is made to take hold of that which cannot be forsaken. Through suffering and pain one clings tight to the cause for which they endure.

Description: A heavy pauldron of steel and jagged stone along with an arming cape that extends midway down her right arm and lower back. Though intimidating when coupled with the Captain's Zanpakutou, these items are little more than a means of partial concealment of just what Ragnarok is: The result of a failed S-Class Hollow intrusion into Tsubaki's mind and body. Though halted at the right shoulder, the woman's arm has been forever changed into that of a beast, bearing the heightened speed and reflexes of one as well. Upon Tsubaki's return from Hueco Mundo the appearance of her right arm is no different from the arm of any other Shinigami, but the powers of the sealed intruder remain hidden just beneath the skin.

Ability: In addition to allowing Tsubaki to freely control her [Aura of the Righteous Devil] technique without losing any more of her own lifespan to fuel the flames, the arm actually allows the Captain to regenerate her own Reiatsu at an alarming rate. Each round Ragnarok and Tsubaki are in battle, the Captain can regenerate 1,500 Reiatsu, but can never regenerate past 100% of her total.

Lastly, as the beast that assailed her was Hollow, Tsubaki's spiritual energy now reads as Hollow, no matter what method is being used to detect or perceive it.

New:

Item Name: Majo No Fuin (Witch's Seal)
Rarity: S
Acquisition of Item: See previous, will shorten once approved.
Description: A tattoo that covers the top of Tsubaki's right hand, pulsing with an eerie red energy.
Ability: Shinku No Shisseki (Crimson Rebuke) Whenever a Reiatsu based attack strikes Tsubaki (From a Feat, Shi Kai or Ban Kai attack, or Kidou) the former Captain may choose to pay an amount of Reiatsu equal to that used for said attack to send a copy back towards the caster. Any Reiatsu required to copy a Kidou attack comes from her base Reiatsu pool rather than her Kidou threshold, and any Rage or Emptiness based attacks are translated into additional Reiatsu costs. (Ie: 10% Rage and generating 5% Emptiness would exchange to an additional 15% Reiatsu paid by Tsubaki to mimic the attack) This ability may be used three times per battle.

In addition, this item continues to alter the woman's Reiatsu signature to feel akin to a Hollow regardless of the method of detection.
 
Item Name: Majo No Fuin (Witch's Seal)
Rarity: S
Acquisition of Item: Unchanged from previous.
Description: A tattoo that covers the top of Tsubaki's right hand, pulsing with an eerie red energy.
Ability: Jaaku Seimei (Wicked Life) - Tsubaki regenerates 4,000 Reiatsu per round. However, this effect cannot let her exceed the cap of her Sealed/SK/BK totals.

In addition, this item continues to alter the woman's Reiatsu signature to feel akin to a Hollow regardless of the method of detection.

Meets the 4,000 Reiatsu cap of S-Class items.
Has defined limits, isn't self-fulfilling. Whatever.
 
After conferring with Kyle:

Item Name: Majo No Fuin (Witch's Seal)
Rarity: S
Acquisition of Item: See previous, will shorten once approved.
Description: A tattoo that covers the palm of Tsubaki's right hand, pulsing with an eerie red and black energy.
Ability: Hateshinai Sakebi (Unending Scream) - For 4,000 Reiatsu Tsubaki may fire a blast of compressed dark energy from her right palm, the speed and force of impact of which are governed by her Zanjutsu total. This technique has no limits of usage but only carries a maximum range of 10 meters.

In addition, this item continues to alter the woman's Reiatsu signature to feel akin to a Hollow regardless of the method of detection.
 
Beaks: Approved with Changes and Stipulation
You must write a new Acquisition chapter for a new S-Tier item.

Item Name: Majo No Fuuin (Witch's Seal)
Item Tier: S
Description: A tattoo that covers the palm of Tsubaki's right hand, pulsing with an eerie red and black energy.
Ability: For 4,000 Reiatsu Tsubaki may fire a blast of compressed dark energy from her right palm, the speed of which is governed by her Zanjutsu stat, travelling for up to 15m away. In addition, this item continues to alter the woman's Reiatsu signature to feel akin to a Hollow regardless of the method of detection.
Acquisition: See previous, will shorten once approved.
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Misogi - Seijitsu “Purification Ceremony - Holy Day”
Rank: S

Evolution realized, Misogi - Seijitsu, unlike its predecessor, is permanently fused into Ciro’s body. Absorbed into every facet of his biology, it is bound to all of his organics. While normally hidden by his body, the moment he begins to use his reiatsu, fractal patterns of silver appear on his body.The substance has stained his cells the translucent silver, causing his blood to turn to that color.

As with the previous Directors, the legacy of Cerberus has been integrated into his genome itself, making him a prototype of the Corporation’s dream. He has become the working model of the fated Immortality Protocol. While not fulfilling the Protocol in all senses, Misogi has far extended his natural life, causing him to age at one-fivehundreth the rate of normal humans. Furthermore, it has bolstered his base immune system, causing him to be immune to all mundane diseases.

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Abilities:

Evolution past the state of normal mortal man melds with latent corruption. Obsession is bolstered, rationalized into the body itself. The madness of the mind is expressed as the madness of the soul. Winding itself into his body, Misogi - Seijitsu taps into potential that was corrupted, repairing it and amplifying it in turn.

On contact with a target, Ciro can infect the target. The smallest trace of Misogi - Seijitsu is injected into the target, travelling directly to their brain and establishing a memetic link. After the link is established, Ciro may pay 500 reiatsu per round to read and analyze memories of the target’s past. Memories are drawn out in reverse-chronology, the most current ones must be seen before he may dig into their more distant past. Each round allows Ciro to dig roughly a month into the target’s past.

Integrating with Ciro, Misogi - Seijitsu has evolved past merely being a recreation of his old powers. Instead, now the Ikikami can manipulate memories he has read. Paying 2000 reiatsu, Ciro utterly warps any previously read memory - imposing his presence in it in place of another individual. The warped memory becomes a binding, creating whiplash in the target’s mind.

Ciro may channel this binding to keep it at its strongest much the same as binding kidou, and is capable of maintaining up to two of these warped memories at a time. The longer Ciro successfully channels the memories, the greater and more damaging the mental whiplash they cause becomes. The warped memories fade upon draining of their natural power, or by overwhelming them in the standard ways for bindings.​

Acquisition:

The original version of Misogi was found in the abandoned home of the Alberts manor, one of the original Cerberus Director families. After recovering the substance, it slowly began to integrate itself with Ciro, hungrily absorbing his immense reiatsu potential. Throughout the integration, Ciro witnessed the memory imprints of the former directors, whose genome had been integrated into the substance the night of the catastrophic Protocol Test One.

After receiving a mysterious message from his former enemy, Echidna, Ciro delved deeper into Cerberus’ past, finding the runes of Cerberus New York. Upon reaching the central test chamber, the substance reacted to the latent reiatsu of Subject 0000, as it spontaneously evolved and integrated the memory imprints with Ciro’s genome, as the legacy of the previous Directors allowed him to take the next step in human evolution.​
 
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Misogi - Seijitsu “Purification Ceremony - Holy Day”
Rank: S
Evolution realized, Misogi - Seijitsu, unlike its predecessor, is permanently fused into Ciro’s body. Absorbed into every facet of his biology, it is bound to all of his organics. While normally hidden by his body, the moment he begins to use his reiatsu, fractal patterns of silver appear on his body.The substance has stained his cells the translucent silver, causing his blood to turn to that color.

As with the previous Directors, the legacy of Cerberus has been integrated into his genome itself, making him a prototype of the Corporation’s dream. He has become the working model of the fated Immortality Protocol. While not fulfilling the Protocol in all senses, Misogi has far extended his natural life, causing him to age at one-fivehundreth the rate of normal humans. Furthermore, it has bolstered his base immune system, causing him to be immune to all mundane diseases.

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Abilities:
Evolution past the state of normal mortal man melds with latent corruption. Obsession is bolstered, rationalized into the body itself. The madness of the mind is expressed as the madness of the soul. Winding itself into his body, Misogi - Seijitsu taps into potential that was corrupted, repairing it and amplifying it in turn.

On contact with a target, Ciro can infect the target. The smallest trace of Misogi - Seijitsu is injected into the target, travelling directly to their brain and establishing a memetic link. After the link is established, Ciro may pay 500 reiatsu per round to read and analyze memories of the target’s past. Memories are drawn out in reverse-chronology, the most current ones must be seen before he may dig into their more distant past. Each round allows Ciro to dig roughly a month into the target’s past.

Integrating with Ciro, Misogi - Seijitsu has evolved past merely being a recreation of his old powers. Instead, now the Ikikami can manipulate memories he has read. Paying 2000 reiatsu, Ciro utterly warps any previously read memory - imposing his presence in it in place of another individual. The warped memory becomes a binding, creating whiplash in the target’s mind.

Ciro may channel this binding to keep it at its strongest much the same as binding kidou, and is capable of maintaining up to two of these warped memories at a time. The longer Ciro successfully channels the memories, the greater and more damaging the mental whiplash they cause becomes. The warped memories fade upon draining of their natural power, or by overwhelming them in the standard ways for bindings.​

Acquisition:
The original version of Misogi was found in the abandoned home of the Alberts manor, one of the original Cerberus Director families. After recovering the substance, it slowly began to integrate itself with Ciro, hungrily absorbing his immense reiatsu potential. Throughout the integration, Ciro witnessed the memory imprints of the former directors, whose genome had been integrated into the substance the night of the catastrophic Protocol Test One.

After receiving a mysterious message from his former enemy, Echidna, Ciro delved deeper into Cerberus’ past, finding the runes of Cerberus New York. Upon reaching the central test chamber, the substance reacted to the latent reiatsu of Subject 0000, as it spontaneously evolved and integrated the memory imprints with Ciro’s genome, as the legacy of the previous Directors allowed him to take the next step in human evolution.​
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Not a full review, but I'm interrupting to point out that if it integrates with his body and acts when Ciro touches someone -- that ceases to be an item and is instead a feat. An item needs to be something tangible.

Even a tattoo gives something which can be targeted, although it's a bit more painful if someone does.
 
Name: Kikainnen - “Instrument of Fate”
Rank: S

Taking the form of a cello musical bow, the bow-stick of Kikainnen is colored a pitch obsidian. Instead of a regular horse hair or synthetic fiber, when activated, thin strings of Ciro’s own reiatsu connect the tip to the ferrule. The bow-stick is ornately engraved with a swirling pattern. The reiatsu threads are unnaturally sharp, capable of cutting like a finely-honed blade. Centered on the frog of the bow is a hollow circle. When active, the roman numeral one appears in a faded red light, ticking up as its use is continued.​

Abilities:

Kikainnen resonates strongly with Ciro’s powers and awakenings. When placed in its activated state, hundreds of strings of reiatsu appear in the air, the color of the strings matching the color of his opponent’s reiatsu. The originate from the target, being manifestations of their soul. When a target is marked by Shinju - Kinkaku or Seishoku - Jidshugi, a portion of their strings transform to the deep crimson color of Ciro’s reiatsu, establishing a link. The strings may last longer than marks.

After the link is established, the Ikikami can play the strings in order to amplify the resonance of his soul with theirs, establishing a memetic link. Ciro may pay 500 reiatsu per round to read and analyze memories of the target’s past. Memories are drawn out in reverse-chronology, the most current ones must be seen before he may dig into their more distant past. Each round allows Ciro to dig roughly a month into the target’s past.

Kikainnen has amplified Ciro’s powers far past than being a recreation of his old skills. Instead, now the Chairman can manipulate memories he has read. Paying 2000 reiatsu and playing the strings, Ciro utterly warps any previously read memory - imposing his presence in it in place of another individual. The warped memory becomes a binding, creating whiplash in the target’s mind.

Ciro may channel this binding to keep it at its strongest much the same as binding kidou, and is capable of maintaining up to two of these warped memories at a time. The longer Ciro successfully channels the memories, the greater and more damaging the mental whiplash they cause becomes. The warped memories fade upon draining of their natural power, or by overwhelming them in the standard ways for bindings.​

Acquisition:

Do you know where it all began?

This simple question is continuously asked to Ciro, through messages, enemies in his past, and his own mind. After retrieving the artifacts of the Alberts family, one of the founding families of Cerberus, one of the keys, Misogi, continuously integrated itself into Ciro’s psyche, taking a genomic imprint of the Director. This imprint was melded with the imprints of the previous Directors, including Ciro’s great-grandfather and great-grandmother, who perished in the catastrophic Protocol Test One.

Upon viewing the memory imprints, and being brought to the ruined remains of Cerberus - New York, he uncovers the true sequence of events and the enigmatic Subject 0000 and is lead through the ruined building, seeing the memory imprints of the past as he walks to the Chairman’s office. Finally, he witnesses the final memory in the Chairman’s office, discovering the bow lying among the rubble. As both a legacy and birthright, he obtains Kikainnen.​

Abilities

Shinju - Kinkaku “Divine Gift - Faithful Service”- 0% Resonance:

The gaze of a living god profoundly affects those of weaker wills. Those who have been caught in Ciro’s gaze are instantly brought under to be his followers. On eye contact, the seed is planted, growing and festering for the following turns. The effects do not take hold until after Ciro’s next turn, as the will corrupts their thought processes. The eyes of enemies affected by the seed are reddened, changing to be the same crimson as Ciro’s.

For the following three turns, their minds are fixated on Ciro, a nagging thought shifting their focus, while madness begins to infect their thought processes. Their motions become erratic, chaotic, as devotion to the Ikikami is constantly reinforced. While this does not completely shift their focus, their priorities continuously are pulled towards Ciro. The longer they are affected the stronger will.

Ciro can force his voice through them with the mental link, causing them to forcibly repeat what he wishes them to. Ciro must pay 5% of his reiatsu to plant the seed, and can only sustain 3 links at a time.


Seishoku - Jidshugi “Holy Order - Worship of the Powerful” - 50% Resonance:

The Ikikami’s will the dominant. A man branded by a God remains faithful to the lord. By striking an enemy, either directly or through one of his chains, by paying 5% of his reiatsu, Ciro can brand them with one of his seals, taking the form of the rings around his wrist. Once branded, the effects are instantaneous. No matter the actual differences in spiritual power, Ciro appears to be stronger, his pressure always being perceived to be something unobtainable and lingering high above.

While marked, a seeping madness infuses into their minds, distorting it and warping it to match Ciro’s own. A fear of their god is struck into them, greatly decreasing their urges to attack Ciro. Furthermore, their emotions and thoughts become erratic through fear, decaying their logical reasoning and hampering their abilities to react and perform attacks while the mark infects them. Repeated marks serve to amplify these effects. Marks last for five turns before fading. Each turn that the marks reside, they continue to burn the skin below. He can use marked enemies as carriers for his voice, allowing him to speak through them.
 
Dropping the second item from the First Div Item Pack. Making a slight buff to Chomei and keeping the div with a single item:





Chomei - "Clarity"
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Chomei is a thin silver chain made to be clipped to the ear. Members may either hang the chain behind their ear or dangle it like an earring. The trinket is designed to detect kidou energy and amplify audible incantations within a 20m radius, allowing the user to clearly pick out the words of a kidou spell even if the caster is whispering or otherwise trying to hide the incantation.

It is still up to the user to recognize the spell, and Chomei cannot help against unspoken incantations.

Detecting kidou energy is less exact than amplifying incantations; proximity is indicated by a warming sensation, and for long-time users, it can quickly identify the presence of a kidou construct within 10m. It is, unfortunately, of little use for detecting traps or constructs created through non-kidou methods, such as Pitfall.
 
We have an exotic sealed form...soooo....

Misc Name: Exotic Shunpou
Prerequisite: 500 Kan, access to Shunpou
Description: As individual Shinigami or Vizards tap into their own speed-based techniques sometimes a more personal touch on the ability. A Shinigami or Vizard who possesses this perk can add one (and only one) effect that triggers each time they enter or exit Shunpou. Whether this manifests as a burst of feathers, a small clap of thunder or the fleeing of spiders, this effect is purely cosmetic in nature and adds no potency to the technique.

-shrugs-
 
Beaks: Denied...?
I don't...this doesn't seem like an item. This seems like a technique or ability.

Also submitting items for purchase by Kan isn't actually something I can approve. You'd need to run it by the GMs directly.

If you want talk to me about this because it's kind of confusing to be honest.
 
Resubmitting Keibi no Hiteijutsu. I'm lowering the rank from S to A as well as altering the acquisition a tad. Effects are still the same.

[Keibi no Hiteijutsu] 警備の否定術 - Guard of the Negating Technique
Tier: A

Appearance: Stylized bracers that run the length of Haresuno’s forearm. The material that went into making them is unknown, but strange glyphs and runes are etched into its exterior. Its color is as black as the Prometheus straps that once adorned Haresuno’s body, and made of durable material that he can use to block most strikes with. They were hand-crafted for the Adept with the idea to help protect him, and in more than one way.

When its ability is used, the runes and glyphs etched into the Keibi no Hiteijutsu glow with a dull light the color of the wearer’s reiatsu as the ability manifests. Additionally, harmless fire - also the color of their reiatsu - momentarily dances across the wearer’s finger tips.

Abilities:
[Shou Tate no Shounin] 小楯の上人 - Hierophant’s Shield

Paying 2,000 of his own reiatsu, creating a thin shield that hovers passively in front of him, Haresuno powers the shield with the same energies as his [Heishuu Ryuuou].

Upon making contact with an energy-based attack, the shield devours and absorbs the attack’s energy, negating the attack utterly and fuelling the shield. This cannot raise the shield above its initial output, nor can it negate energy-based attacks that hold equal to or more than its initial cost. The shield loses this property after absorbing three attacks, and follows all standard barrier rules including decay.

Acquired: After the events of Prometheus, and the months spent cursed, Haresuno finally became free of the vasto lorde’s will. During his time cursed, however, the Adept had to develop new ways to defend himself against the many challenges he would face - both physical and mental. Normally energy attacks wouldn’t be a concern, but in his crippled state there were severe gaps in his ability to defend himself.

With the help of Iida, Haresuno planned and outlined the necessary bindings needed in order to enchant a singular item, and with the help of Hisao Adachi the Adept was able to impart a portion of his unique abilities on that item. After several months of gathering material and planning, Haresuno and Iida created the Keibi no Hiteijutsu.

Old Keibi
[Keibi no Hiteijutsu] 警備の否定術 - Guard of the Negating Technique
Tier: S

Appearance: Stylized bracers that run the length of Haresuno’s forearm. The material that went into making them is unknown, but strange glyphs and runes are etched into it and appear to make no sense. As black as Prometheus’s straps, these were personally made with Haresuno in mind, right down to the fact that he wore knives around his arms in holsters.

When used, the runes and glyphs glow with a dull light the color of the wearer’s reiatsu. Harmless fire, also the color of their reiatsu, momentarily dances across the wearer’s fingertips

Abilities:
[Shou Tate no Shounin] 小楯の上人 - Hierophant’s Shield

Paying 2,000 of his own reiatsu, creating a thin shield that hovers passively in front of him, Haresuno powers the shield with the same energies as his [Heishuu Ryuuou].

Upon making contact with an energy-based attack, the shield devours and absorbs the attack’s energy, negating the attack utterly and fuelling the shield. This cannot raise the shield above its initial output, nor can it negate energy-based attacks that hold equal to or more than its initial cost. The shield loses this property after absorbing three attacks, and follows all standard barrier rules including decay.

Acquired: After realizing that he was still subject to many failings in his combatives, Haresuno did what any good man would do when they hit a rut. He asked his wife, Iida, for her opinion. She said she’d think about it, and a month later came to him with a pair of customized bracers for him to wear. She explained that the two of them would work together to create a fitting item to save his sorry arse.

Preparation took a whole nother month. During which the couple gathered material for enchantments, set up wards, and worked to understand how Haresuno was going to guide Iida through the process of proper enchantments. As Iida was a healer, her ability to weave enchantings ranked next to nothing without Haresuno helping her. With his curse, however, Hare couldn’t guide her through the whole process - which made creating an item of their planned magnitude very, very dangerous.


Heishuu Ryuuou Updated
[ Heishuu Ryuuou ] - "To Corrupt the Dragon King"
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Heishuu Ryuuou forms around the users hands as the visible fluctuation of reiatsu until it eventually condenses around their hands. The air surrounding their hands wavers like intense heat rising from the ground, and spiked vines of blackness spread around from palm to wrist like a viral disease.

On contact, the user may siphon 2% of the user's reiatsu from the target. Non-living targets with less than that amount are effectively destroyed. This is often seen as a disintegrating effect. This technique is straining, though, and can be used a maximum of three times per battle.

Training: In order to learn Heishuu Ryuuou, it is necessary to find a practitioner. Training involves the user first being taught how to analyze and neutralize their own reiatsu. By transferring this principle to other objects, they are first given weak energy attacks to neutralize. With each iteration, the strength of the oncoming attack is increased. After conquering energy attacks, the training proceeds to denser and denser physical objects.

Requirements: Shinigami or Vizard; 6,000 Reiatsu

Practitioners: Haresuno Uchiharu (undeniablenation)
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Item Name: Reishi bomb

Item Tier: D Tier

Item Appearance: This resembles a small spherical metal ball that is around an inch in diameter. The ball is a dull silver that doesn't reflect light well making it harder to spot.

Item Ability: Zerieth can prepare one of these special Reishi bombs by exposing his spiritual aura to them directly i.e. holding it in his hand, and channeling his power directly into like like his zanpaktou. Once charge the ball will explode once it comes into contact with another spiritual prescense. In order to fully prepare the ball Zerieth must hold it in his hand for one round, and channel 150 reiatsu into the ball. After that he can throw it and it will remain inactive until another spiritual prescience comes to close, around 5 meters.

This gives it the dual power of a grenade that explodes immediately, or a trap which can be hidden. It has no spiritual prescience of its own until it is set off. When it explodes it will do exactly 150 reishi damage to anything that happens to be in its blast range. This can only be used once per battle. Zerieth has a devil of a time finding the stupid thing after it's been used.

Acquisition: Zerieth will receive this item from his friend Zackarias, who commented that he had made it for a practical joke, but found it to be a little to dangerous for joking around. He further mentioned that it could be ideal for severely inconveniencing anyone that could be chasing after him. He mimed tossing it over his shoulder while saying this.
 
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Let's see if my record for getting items denied holds, eh?

Name: Apostle’s Word

Tier: S

Description: A recovered piece of Gabriel “Shiori” Faust’s legendary Hand of Fate gauntlet. Apostle’s Word is a solitary sheet of metal made from synthesising bloodstone and the steel used to create asauchi. The single plate is roughly six inches long by three inches wide with a half-inch thickness. It can be placed anywhere on the body, but must be touching the skin in order to properly be used.

Acquisition: After hearing of some trouble stirring in Southern Rukongai, Haresuno was led down a trail of mystery that forced him and his friend Hayato Kibiyari to venture into Hueco Mundo. Carefully picking their way across the alabaster sands, they came across Apostle - a humanoid hollow cloaked in white robes. Apostle challenged Haresuno to a game, reassuring the captain that he’d only devour him if the shinigami lost. The reward was an end to the mischief created in Soul Society, as well as a special gift found amid the wreckage of Las Noches. All he had to wager was his life, and that of his friends, with the haunting knowledge that Prometheus might just near.

Ability: Paying 3,500 reiatsu into Apostle’s Word, the bearer activates the ability “Sacred Law” wherein no form of physical or mental assault or ability may take place against another within 5m of the user. This ability only affects people within the small barrier, and those who enter it while active. Powers used outside the barrier and enter are not affected, and any attack started outside before entering the barrier is only nullified if the attacker has the ability to stop it. Likewise, any power or ability used or directed outside the barrier are not affected.

Passively, while activated, Apostle’s Word will begin cleansing any mental abilities from those within its radius - the amount taken from the paid total. Sacred Law is regulated by standard barrier rules, and cannot be used consecutively. After one use it takes three rounds before it may be utilized again.
 
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Upgrading Dislinir.
Original
Dislinir [Goddess Shields]
Tier B
Acquisition: After working with the Peacekeepers for several trying days, including the day the Central Forty-Six was attacked, Adelaide became familiar with some of their equipment, particularly an armguard called a Talos. Talos, a signature tool of the division, were constructed using fragments of a meteorite from Katsuji Ishin’s bankai moon that once rested within the Thirteenth’s grounds along the Iris River.Adelaide, in honor both of her time with the now defunct Peacekeepers and her admiration for the captive Captain, has repurposed the bankai moonbits into a pair of bracelets she calls "Dislinir”, Norse for "Goddess Shields”.
Appearance: The bracelets are gunmetal gray in color, with a ruby, emerald and topaz set equidistant from one another, as if the bracelets were ornate insignias of the Eighth Division. The theory was that even in this diminished form, a metal generated by bankai would be a strong enough conductor of Adelaide’s Kenkyouka abilities to generate an effective barrier on command.
Ability: While originally conceptualized as a shield operating on the principles of Kenkyouka, the mineral used to construct Dislinir proved to have a rather different expression of power. Dislinir affects the local gravity around Adelaide. At the cost of 500 reiatsu once per turn, Adelaide can weaken or strengthen the pull of gravity on an object, causing something she touches to become either a great deal heavier or lighter for two turns after Dislinir is used. There are limits to how greatly something's weight can be augmented - only up to double or down to half its original weight.


Dislinir [Goddess Shields]
Tier A
Appearance: The bracelets are gunmetal gray in color, with a ruby, emerald and topaz set equidistant from one another, as if the bracelets were ornate insignias of the Eighth Division.
Ability: While originally conceptualized as a shield operating on the principles of Kenkyouka, the mineral used to construct Dislinir proved to have a rather different expression of power far more akin to Soshi. Dislinir affects the local gravity around Adelaide. By spending 1500 reiatsu, Adelaide can control the gravimetric forces applied to an item in her vicinity (within 10m). The total weight of all objects controlled with this power may not exceed a thousand pounds and any reiatsu-infused abilities or projectiles controlled by this ability must be valued at less than two-thirds it's cost. Because Dislinir cannot control the reiatsu of others, it cannot be used to change gravity's effect on people. Also, due to the extreme energy of Situational Gravity attempting to be imitate by such diminished foci, Dislinir cannot be used on consecutive turns. The effect of Dislinir can stack with the effect of Soshi, allowing control of heavier, stronger or more numerous targets.
Acquisition: Dislinir is a Beautiful Thing.
 
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Zer: Approved with Changes
- Added a proper time delay duration and limit
- Increased carrying capacity
- Removed silly charge-time

Zerieth carries three of these special Reishi Grenades at a time, filled with ambient reishi that responds to his or an ally's energy. Infusing 150 Reiatsu into a Grenade, the active explosive can then be thrown, or stuck to any surface. Regardless if thrown or placed, the grenade automatically detonates the following round. The reiatsu infused serves both as the power of the explosive and the strength to which it sticks to a surface. Once detonated, a grenade naturally reforms from and refills with ambient reishi over two rounds following detonation.
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Hare: Denied
- How did a random hollow find the Hand of Fate?
- How did a random hollow manage to reforge bloodstone?
- How did a random hollow find zanpakuto metal?
- How did a random hollow reforge zanpakuto metal?
- Why does it feel like you removed a few sentences from this Acquisition?
- Why do you want a barrier that only stops things that have already been made inside it?
- Do you understand the implications of 'no physical' attacks or assaults?
- "Passively, while activated" is an oxymoron.
- Three rounds after use is how long it takes for a barrier to degrade, don't lie and say you can't use it consecutively.

Katie: Resubmit
- "An item" is a terribly vague term to use, allowing it to cover anything from mundane objects to zanpakuto.
- You're using an outdated system for determining lifting strength. Look at the redesigned Naibu and Fruit of Labor for the new ones.
- The way you've stated it, the reiatsu-infused abilities clause allows you to stop any attack, individual of others, so long as it's within the cost.
 
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