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Mango Queen
Val: Approved.
Hiren: Approved. But here's some proofreading for you:
Bish: Approved with changes:
Also keep in mind that 'not being usable for a week' might be tricky if you're writing two fighting collabs simultaneously. Make sure that plot-wise, you have the battles lined up in an appropriate timeline.
Hiren: Approved. But here's some proofreading for you:
Haikyo - Castle Ruins
Tier: S
Description:
In their dormant state, Haikyo takes the form of two silver bracelets around each of Lucia’s wrists. They are simple in appearance, but seem to always be impeccable polished. When brought near each other, they synchronize and emit a dull hum.
When tapped against each other, they expand into their full form. They extend into a set of silver gauntlets that cover her arms and wrists. On the back of each gauntlet is half the image of the emblem of House Metzer-Frey. When brought up to one another, they complete the full insignia. Lavender reiatsu surrounds each one, flickering wildly as if covering them in flames. The metal of the gauntlets rivals the durability of zanpaktou.
Choui - Close Siege
By fueling her reiatsu into the weaponry, they emit immense torrents of reiatsu that radiate up each of her arms. By paying 1,500 reiatsu, a single gauntlet will propel her forward rapidly up to 15 m in a line, in any direction. The speed she moves is near instantaneous with speed and control relative to her hakuda stat. While moving, her body is engulfed in the lavender reiatsu, allowing her to blow through mundane objects in her path with ease. If she manages to strike a target in direction, the force of the physical attack is amplified by the reiatsu cost paid in. After completion, the gauntlet loses its stored reiatsu. She can perform this maneuver up to twice a turn, one for each gauntlet, repaying the cost each time.
Acquisition:
After the attempted assassination attempt on the life of a third generation Ashanti heiress, the newly promoted Captain of the Fourth was called in to save the wounded heir’s life. Partly due to the successful surgery, and partially due to her natural personality, Lucia quickly endeared herself to the High Noble House.
However, as Lucia delved deeper into the circumstances behind the assassinations, she uncovered that the assassins were contracted killers of her former House Metzer-Frey. After being called to the Metzer family estate by the Patriarch, Theophilus Metzer, the secrets of her birth were revealed to her. The Amalgamated Soul Project, was an undercover operation to create a Bankai capable soul from scratch. Contracted by House Metzer to create an abnormally powerful soul, capable of being controlled at will, Lucia Frey was born.
Haikyo were the weapons forged specifically for her use, attuned to her reiatsu specifically.
Bish: Approved with changes:
Item Ability: This jacket, created by a paranormal research unit within the US military, is made from reishi-sympathetic hide from an unknown organism. Each time that the user does not use all available reishi from the Shuuhaku pool while in combat, the excess reishi is stored within the jacket. The stored amount cannot exceed 300 reiatsu.
After the jacket stores 300 reiatsu, when physically attacked by an enemy, the user can force the stored reishi to the surface of the jacket in order to form a barrier. Upon impact, the attacker will be blown backward from the point of contact. If the jacket is damaged, it will repair itself over the course of a week through the ambient reishi of the environment and a small portion of Tama's own reiatsu.
Also keep in mind that 'not being usable for a week' might be tricky if you're writing two fighting collabs simultaneously. Make sure that plot-wise, you have the battles lined up in an appropriate timeline.
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