Denied. Again, I appreciate that you're trying to extend the joke, but the Nyan-Nyan song and the Nyancat aren't really the same thing. It's also taking a very amusing, but simple kidou and turning it into something complicated and confusing. I don't think this spell needs an extension, especially not if the extension is just for the sake of having an extension.
Approved as above. Removed the combat limitation but limited it to up to 5 rounds dormant. It's a bit much if you just cast it at the start of any battle and automatically get an extra three rounds, combat or not.
Approved with changes below:
Compelling Rest - Chiyudou #71, 2200 kidou
Description: Compelling Rest is used to put patients to sleep. Often used on uncooperative patients and patients who are too strong to be put under by general anesthetics, the effects last for five rounds and slowly wears off thereafter. To use this chiyudou, the wielder places their hands on the target’s temples and speaks the incantation. They must be able to channel the spell uninterrupted for three consecutive rounds in order to sedate the patient.
Incantation: Slow the stream, goddess of the moon. Pull us under into enveloping depths. The air is thick, the wind is slow, fall into my arms. Chiyudo #71!
Incantation: Slow the stream, goddess of the moon. Pull us under into enveloping depths. The air is thick, the wind is slow, fall into my arms. Chiyudo #71!
The only reason for its high cost/rank was to avoid balance issues surrounding using the spell in combat, but it's not really combat spell nor worthy of the #99 spot. In the updated version, it takes 3 rounds to take effect, limiting its usefulness in combat (if you can hold someone still for three rounds, you could do worse things to them), but is at a much more reasonable rank and cost.
I also did not much like the use of the word "coma" since it implies something more permanent. Little details.
