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No Bunz, we have a Will, not a Willis. I propose we call him Bruce. You know. Bruce. As in Bruce Willis. And hi!

Hilow Lambow. Once a faec, always a faec <3.

For those who don't know, it's a me, Dragio! This is my usual IGN so I decided it was only right to make it here as well.

The next step is being an active writer Tits.

Dys - 150 division bonus Blond and Blonde [73/85] I dunno about this one really. It feels as if you did not really collaborate but instead wrote your side of the story for the first half of it. Later on, it got better but it still feels as if you weren't really working together on this one. The...

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Dys - 150 division bonus Just Some Easter Fluff [73/73] A nice, relaxing piece to read. The Spanish was a really nice touch to add and it ran quite smoothly throughout the whole chapter. I got a nice "at home" feeling from this particular one and it was quite nice to read, in the midst of...

Group 3 -> Group 2 -> Group 5 -> Group 4 -> Group 1 -> Group 3 Group 1 (Will): 1st/5th/9th Divisions Group 2 (Raph): 2nd/3rd/6th/11th Divisions Group 3 (Drag): 7th/10th/12th Divisions Group 4 (Hiren): 4th/8th/13th Divisions Group 5 (Bunz): AHs/Vizards/Quincies Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST...

Dys Faded Memories [65/65] + 100 division bonus This one felt a little strange I gotta say. The fact that the two of you wrote your turns in a single paragraph struck me as kind of odd, and yet you managed to pull it off quite well. The collab itself felt as if was missing the real ending. I...

Group 3 -> Group 2 -> Group 5 -> Group 4 -> Group 1 -> Group 3 Group 1 (Will): 1st/5th/9th Divisions Group 2 (Raph): 2nd/3rd/6th/11th Divisions Group 3 (Drag): 7th/10th/12th Divisions Group 4 (Hiren): 4th/8th/13th Divisions Group 5 (Bunz): AHs/Vizards/Quincies Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST...

Dys Brambles in the Rain [105/111] (missed this last week) Sorry for missing these two last week. This had a little more oompf in it than the first piece but I'm not sure I like that you switched it between first and third person writing, even if you split it into chapters. I would have...

Kyouran-daichi: Taihou Kata - Approved The final ability came off as a little strong at first but the risk vs reward is enough of a reason for it to be as strong as it is.

Dys Brambles in the Rain [45/49] + 100 division bonus I can't say that I wasn't a little surprised by seeing a piece of first person writing. Nontheless, I can't say I didn't enjoy it. There were not many misses in the writing but the chapter itself felt a little stale. It didn't really feel...

Arun Operation: The Central Dogma [56/56] + 150 division bonus for being you! Ah yes, a piece of greatness is always fun to read. I’m starting to think that you might be the one who planted the explosive material in your room and not your roommate. I have to say that I’m glad I read this during...

First Time for Everyone Dys [59/67] Pup [59/67] My first impression of this collaboration is that it seemed a little forced. There seems to be almost no flow early on and from my point of view, it almost seemed as if you tried to push it to a start. It turns better almost halfway through it...

The tattooed convict made no attempt to budge from his place as his attempted assault was met with a malevolent explosive force. As the attack landed on his thick skin, burned on his tattoos and pricked on his flesh, it was not the pain of battle he felt. As the crimson blood trickled down...

Mewn Coffee and New Companions [73/73] It was a very nice introductory collaboration between the two of you. There is a good flow and the transition from one writer to another works quite well between you and Nelo. Fine work with the descriptions as always and a nice read all in all. Zakki...

Moon Private Eye I [76/76] It’s always fun to see someone write in a style you haven’t seen before. First time seeing you write in first person and I have to say that I am impressed. I have not read a lot of pieces in first person writing but this was definitely one of my favorites. The...

Group 2 -> Group 3 -> Group 5 -> Group 4 -> Group 1 -> Group 2 Group 1 (Berri): 1st/5th/9th Divisions Group 2 (Raph): 2nd/3rd/6th/11th Divisions Group 3 (Drag): 7th/10th/12th Divisions Group 4 (Hiren): 4th/8th/13th Divisions Group 5 (Moon): AHs/Vizards/Quincies Grades are due by 11:59 PM EST...

Moon Week 318 Bleeding [65/65] This was really well written. I love the way you manage to transition into different things without losing momentum and keeping one interested to keep on reading. The chapter was an interesting read and we got to see a little more of Yaname which is always...