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I feel like I need my own Cribbage. Every chapter just really drives home how much I love the dynamic between these two.

Here I was, thinking that the plan itself would be difficult enough on its own. Seeing Chase terrified even with the solid, if rushed, plan set this up as a pretty big challenge all on its own. But now a new player enters the game and is about to make things even worse. Lucien is already set up as a perfectly punchable dick, and that's impressive with only a few paragraphs. Not much more to say on this chapter. There's a lot to muse on and a lot to wonder about, but not a lot that I can really offer in the way of critique or suggestions. Looking forward to the next installment.
 

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